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Articles: Poetry | | velugaa? cheekaTi!! | |
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| I don't find a good and clean site than T.P
As well I see good people & subject matter experts.
So, I want to share my feelings and thoughts.
Thanks to Sastry garu & raghuji –
mangaLam -
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 29, Jan 2005 3:18:31 AM IST
riveivu gAru! raghu lAga nAku kUDA mIru cheppadalachukonnadEdO sariggA ardhaM kAlEdu. kAka pOtE mIru mIbhAva vyaktIkaraNalO koMchE kanfyUj ayinaTTunnAru.
EmeinA oka viShayaM nAku tOchinadi cheppagalanu
EdO oka saMghaTanaku spaMdiMchinappuDu manassulO oka bhAvaM vudbhavistuMdi. dAnni peiki cheppaDaMlO manM vADE bhAShanu baTTi, vyaktIkariMchina vidhAnaM baTTi adi vachana kavitO, gEyamO, padyamO, gadyamO avutuMdi. ikkaDa manaM chUDavalasiMdi manaM cheppiMdi avatalavADiki ardhaM ayiMdA lEdA. ardhaM avutE adi sAmAnya janaMlOki veLlagaligina sAhityaM. idE vrAsinavAni laxyameitE ikkaDatO saMtRupti cheMdavachchu. ika pAThakulalO koMdaraki nachchavachchu. nachchakapOvachchu. vimarSiMchaDaM vAri iShTaM. A vimarSalanu rachayita gamaniMchi avasarameitE anusariMchavachchu. idi paMDita parIxaku peTTiMdi kAdukadA. kAni oka chinna sUchana: manaku ardhaMkAni padAlanu evarO oka goppa kavi vADADani manaMvADaDaM valla koMta ibbaMdi vuMdi. avasarameitE dAnini viSlEShiMchagaliganappuDE allAMTi padAlanu manaMkUDA vADavachchu. nEnu goppa kavini kAni pamDituNNigAni kAnu. edO nAku tOchinadi manavi chEsAnu.
aMduchEta dayachEsi dInini iMka poDigiMchavaddani nA prArdhana.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 29, Jan 2005 0:09:32 AM IST
naabhaavaanni sarigaane artham chesukunnaaru.
1) saamaanyiikaraNamu - iddari abhipraayalu vokaTe anipistundi.
saadhyameinantavaraku saamaanyiikaraNamu voke -
2)jaDu eina bhaavam kavita kaaledu annaaru -
ivaaLa , eebhaadalo , sanghaTanaku spandinchi
amaantam aa sanghaTananu drusyabhaddam cheyaTam
entavaraku samanjaSam ?
samasya edeinaa, jarigina daanini emicheyaleru
enta bhaadagaa / santosham ga cheppina
kalaam anduko maavijayahaaratulu anna ,
sunaami, sunaami , eedaaruNaaniki neede poochi anna
?? emundi - ( pogaDta, asahayata )
(daahamesinappuDu, bhaavi toDaTam laanTidi.)
nee telivi , aaveSam ... samasyanu pratibimbinchedaanikanna
samasya moolalu - parishkaaram cheppaTam mukhyam ani naavuddeSam.
sorry for the confusion -
meeru kavitaa prakriya
gurinche maaTladutunnaremo
daanini drusyabaddam kaadu
moolalu , parishkaaram cheppanDi anTunnaanu
ivaaLa haTaattu eesanghaTana jarugaledugaa!
andaru alane raayaalanukoru, alaavunDaru ,
vunDaalaniiledu. (vunTe baagu ane aaSaa !! )
so kavi anevaaDiki bhaasha/bhaavamekaadu -
moolalu/parishkaaram avasaram
vishaya lotupaatulu avasaram, ide naavuddesamu.
kavitalo edo voka bhaavam palikiste chaalu ( bhaado, aakroSamo )
adi kavitaaprakriye anTe.
aa prakriya ku dooram annaanu.
endukanTe andulo neevu kaaraNamemiTo cheppaTledu.
nija, nijaalu teliyavu.
meevudaharaNaku - nenu cheppindi
moolani ki paraakasTaa
anduke adi meeku jaDu laa anipinchindi.
ebhaavamu kaliginchaledu :(
pratidi ahame kadaa anochhu .. :)
we will discuss later
3) vivekaananda ...
emo tallini kooDaanemo -
vichaaram eppudukalugutundi ? - manam agjyaanam lo vunnappuDe :-)
its a big topic. abhipraayam kalavaalani emiledu -
-0 agadhamow jalanidhi lone aaNimutyamunnadi le ... 0-
tilak gaaru - musalivaaDini - druSyabaddham chesi -
prativaadiki inlaaTistiti vastundi - kaabaTTi
vayasulo vunnappuDe manchi chesivunTe baa gunDedi ano,
eevayasulo kooDa , santosham gaa elavunDachhu ano .. ) ardhavamtamgaa!
4)poliisoLLuku nenu peTTina peru
vidhi! - hata vidhii!!
( Ti.pi vaaLLu maarchaaru )
naakasTam -
antyapraasakanna
vidhi! - atani duiTy
hata vidhii!! - atanu chestunnadi kaanTrasTu gaa cheppaTaaniki
aa kaanTrasTu kosam ekkuva kasTapaDDaa -
aa kaanTrasTu kanipinchakunDa ,
'lam 'praasakanipinchaTam :-(
alaage 'naagurinche!' lo
raajakiiyanni , araachakeeyam ela aasrayinchukundo cheppaa
ela voopiri posukoni , perigi peddavaaDu eiyyaDu ani -
balam ela penchukoni,
paatukupoyaDu ....
vaadu ekkaDinumcho raaledu - neenumche vachhaaDu ani -
meeku janaral naaleDje kanipinchaTam.
There is a big difference bitween us.
meeru kavitanu , kavita gaane chooSaaru -
eeprakriyalo , nenu chppadaluchukunnadi chebutunnaa !.. emo? -
Thanks
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 27, Jan 2005 11:22:59 PM IST
Revive Indiaji...
Writer has the right to write in his own style. It's up to readers to decide the force of words. In fact, great minds invent new ways of arranging letters. Hence, go ahead with your own style. But don't be direct in expression....because the readers need not take the meaning for granted. The greatness of poems or what ever it is, lies in the abstractness of the meaning. Better to be universal appeal. It's my suggestion only!
Nice to have poetic mind here. Please keep posting....
Posted by: Mr. Vachaspathi V At: 27, Jan 2005 11:06:52 AM IST
baagu baagu raghuji -
viluvina samayanni vechhinchinanaduku ..- dhanyuDini.
saamaanyiikaraNamu - adi manam choose dRusTilo vunTundi -
viSvam -) bhoomi -) khanDam -) deSam -) praantam -) ... a laa ..alaa
nenu cheppadaluchukunnadi sooTiga ardhamei ,
swachham gaa vunDi
voka aalochana kaliginchaali, ledaa
nijamemoa anipinchaali, ledaa
samasya/parishkaaramu cheppagalagaali ledaa
manasu bhaavaanni sunnitamgaa sareina diSaga palikincha galagaali
enduku ilaa jarugutunnado cheppagalagaali
-0-
vokadRuSyanni enta andamgaa vivarinchina ,
bhaadaga vilapinchina
tilak gaari -
(
khaaLii chesi,
musalivaadu
eeraatri
paDuvoeina vooru,
)
naakiiprakriya vaddu -
'neevu vichaaram gaa vunTe,
neemukham inkokariki choopinchaku' - vivekaananduDu'
balam gaa nammevaaDini -
alaa nammevaLLa mukhaalaloki chooDali anukune vaaDini -
( I mean to help them by word or other means).
naadi janaralnoleDji laavunTe -
see you in share my thoughts/knowledge lo ... :-)
meeru cheppina vudaaharaNaku nenu -
moolalu ekkadavunnai , parishkaaram emiTi anTaanu -
aham maaTlaDite
dharmam moogavotundi
nyaayam paaripotundi
raakshasatvam valluviruchukuni
arachakam voopiruloodutundi
ivi cheritra cheppina ghaTanale
ivaala veeDu , repu inkokaDu
manamepuDu veekshakulame-
Thanks for your time -
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 27, Jan 2005 1:32:43 AM IST
Sastry gaaru namassulu
adi Mr Raghothama Rao comments
miiru vaarini aDagaTam chooSaanu
vaare daaniki ardham cheppaali.
nenu anukovaTam : TraansparenTeina cheekaTi anTe
' masaka chiikaTi ' ani
anduke aaprayogam nachhake 'aSuBham ' annaanu -
raGhu gaaru vachhi manaku velugu prasadistaarani aasistunnaa..
Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati:
1 - manajiivitam elaavunDaali
2 - elavunDakooDadu
3 - elavundaali ani Rujuveinadi
4 - mana cheta, aalochana elavunDaali
5 - aalochana ela modalu avvakuaDadu
alaavunnaamaa, velugulo ? -
-sorry aabhaavam meeku kaliginchalekapoyaanemo.
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 26, Jan 2005 1:21:12 AM IST
manaM mATlADEdi
masaka chIkaTilAvuMTE
adi aSubhaM
samakAlIna samAjasthitiki darpaNaMgAcheppukOtagga
chAlA chakkaTi padaprayOgaM.
ikkaDa nAkO mukka ardhaM avalEdu
nI kAmeMT lO kavitvaM TrAnsfareMTeina chIkaTilAvuMDAli
tilak vuvAcha ani vudahariMchAvu
aMTE EmiTi dAni ardhaM?
oka vudAharaNa istAvA?
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 26, Jan 2005 0:21:04 AM IST
EmiTO assalu arthaM kAlEdu.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 25, Jan 2005 11:42:40 PM IST
'kavitvam TransparenTeina
chiikaTilaa vunDaali'
annaDu tilak .
anna Mr Raghothama Rao comments
preraNa.
anduke raGhu gaarike ee kavanam !
tilak gaariko aSrukaNam !!
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 25, Jan 2005 8:11:01 PM IST
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