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Articles: Poetry | | prakRuti hRudayamu | |
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| prakRuti anTe Sakti. maanavuDu Sakti+ sattA Dynamism galavADu.guDDi ga tana sattA ni yUs chEyaDam valla anEkamaina bAvAlu Sakti ni pondi , vATi gharshana valla anEka prakRuti utpAtAlu jarugutunnayi. E manishi tanu sattaa maatram ga unnanani telusukunTADo ataDu jNAni avutADu.
Posted by: Mr. Harsha saatakarNi At: 1, Feb 2005 12:29:02 PM IST
chinnappuDu rAsina vAkyAlu.
prakRuti,
bhagavaMtuni Uhaku AkRuti.
adi AgrahistE,
chelliMchukOvAli manaM bhRuti.
Your poem remind me of the lines. The poem lost its style and beauty when it came to the middle.
Also the word 'rAgAlu' repeated many times. Spelling mistakes are also there. Please take care of them in further postings.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 30, Jan 2005 11:26:44 PM IST
Nice one
Posted by: SriSai At: 29, Jan 2005 3:14:50 AM IST
kavita bAgAnEvuMdi
kAni chivara nAlugu pAdAlu ardhaMkAlEdu
koMcheM vipulIkariMchu
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 28, Jan 2005 8:01:21 PM IST
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