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| kshaminchanDi kraantijee inni rOjuluu yEviTEviTO vaagaanu vimarSanna pErutO.buddhochchindi.ee vELTinunDI nEnu gooDaa kavitalni anunayangaa chooDDam modaleTTA.ippuDanni kavitaloo baagunnaTTanipistunnaay
meeku chaalaa chaalaa thaan&ks
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 24, May 2005 5:22:33 PM IST
tilak raasina manchu kavita chaduvukOnDi.manchunu vETi vETitO aayana pOlchaaDO.adi arthavaitE idi gooDaa maha chakkagaa arthamautundi
renDOdi maraNam gurinchi.aa paDDa gaalam chaavu.buDagalu gata j~naapakaalu.chEpevarO inkaa cheppaalaa
cheTTu dEntO puusindO modaTi lain&lO cheppaa.iha renDOdi meerannaTTugaanE bhaavukatvam . priyuraali kaLLu kaluvalanTaaru anta maatraana avi kaluvalEnTi
aakaaSamlOni nakshatraalu pagaTi velugulO agupaDav .pagalu prakaaSinchina aakaaSam raatri kaangaanE cheekaTi guyyaaramallE vunTundi.andukE kalugannaanu.aa cheekaTilO nakshatraalu miNuku miNuku manTaayi.'kaLLallO aaSa miNuku miNuku manTOndi' anna prayOgaanni chadive vunTaaru.andukani nakshatraalni kaLLannaanu.avi goNukunnavEmiTO annadi maLLee bhaavukatvam
chivaridaani gurinchi alreDee cheppEsaanu
ivee ee daridrapu kavitvamlOni konni vivaraalu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 20, May 2005 9:04:10 PM IST
chivari vaakyaalu artham kaalEdani prati okkaru annanduku raastunnaanu.
unna aksharaalu konnE
vaaTini ilaa paruchukunToo veLitE
avi maatram Em cheppagalavu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 9, May 2005 10:25:51 PM IST
of all these poems,(ofcourse, excluding 3rd one..coz, i don't like to refer to it)
this is good.....don't know ahy u turn cynical all the time.....(not in this poem).
yes, i too din't follow the last 3lines like special..but, anyways, it was a good effort. kkeep going.
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 7, May 2005 11:14:21 PM IST
bAguMdi
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 19, Feb 2005 12:37:38 PM IST
kaLLu....goNagaDaM, DifarenT` eks`preshan`.kAnI chivari mUDu lain`s emTO ardham kAlEdamDi...antagA atakalEdanukumTA.EmainA, good effort.
Posted by: special_special At: 13, Feb 2005 11:55:51 PM IST
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