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| hmm...so, this is a kinda transition poem frm optimism to pessimism .... is it so??
Feeling is one important thing required for any write up to be touching. This one has it. as are those 4,5 poems i read today. I think one becomes better poet with experience.....
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 15, Apr 2006 7:29:28 PM IST
Excellent! It has got all features of a 'good poem.' But, I found this one entirely different from your usual 'style' and 'school'. As far as I remember, most of your previous poems belonged to the 'school of optimism'. Anyway, congrats for touching new depths through this new style. In my opinion, poetry 'ripens' with tragedy only.
Jonnalagadda Rajeswar
Posted by: Mr. Rajeswar J At: 20, Mar 2005 2:32:34 AM IST
Prashanthi Garu,
mee kavitha bagundhi.
edho thivramina aavedantho vrasinattu vundhi
second stanza
allantha dhoram lo ampasheyya lo baga express chesaru.
Good way of expressing intense pain.
But not good to experience(feel) in real life.
Posted by: sangeetha surabi At: 19, Mar 2005 10:36:07 PM IST
Prasanthi garu...
keep it up this is a good writing from your pen
garimella
Posted by: Mr. venkata surya Nageswara rao Garimella At: 19, Mar 2005 12:04:51 PM IST
kaDupumaMDi rAsinavannI hRudayAnni piMDEstAyi. okAnoka tIvramaina vEdanalOMchi vachchina vAkyAlu kadA alAgE uMTAyi. kanIsaM karuvutIrA EDavalEmu. ArchEvAru, tIrchEvAru elAgU uMDaru. ika dEvuDi mIda manasu maLLutuMdi. Ayana kUDA EvEvO cheptADu. ika appuDu Emi chEyAli? aMdukE 'un&mattAvastha' anE pEru peTTAnu. alAMTi sthiti anubhavistEnE telustaMdaMDi. kAnI konni 'sthitulu' anubhavaMlOki rAkuMDaDamE maMchidi.
I jan&makika iMtE. nelalu, saMvatsarAlu kAdu.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 19, Mar 2005 11:05:19 AM IST
baavundanDi. ayitae TaiTil saripoalaedaemoa? chooDanDi. idi unmattaavasthaa?
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 19, Mar 2005 0:42:22 AM IST
eMdukO naaku chaalaa nachchiMdaMDee... bahuSaa nEnu kUDaa prastutaM ilaaMTi avastha lOnE uMDaTaM valla kaavachchu..
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 18, Mar 2005 11:07:46 PM IST
mee 'panDuga Salavulu' tarvaata naaku chaalaa baagaa naCchina kavita...sirivennela paaTalaa... dInTlO chaalaa lOtaina bhaavam vundi..
Thanks.
Posted by: Mr. Rajeswararao seeramreddi At: 18, Mar 2005 9:32:08 PM IST
A sort of amnesia - I supposed.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 18, Mar 2005 5:08:48 PM IST
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