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Articles: Poetry | | NEEKU THELUSA.......NENU...... | |
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| Hello Divya garu mee kavitha choosanu chaala bagundi entho viraham tho tana chelikadu kosam eduruchoose aa vanitha naa hrudayam kadilinchivesindi.Expecting more from you in future.
vijay :))
Posted by: Mr. Vijay Yerrapatruni At: 14, Feb 2003 1:23:34 AM IST
hai
confused a lot what you have
written
Posted by: Mr murty rsn At: 31, Jan 2003 4:48:21 PM IST
Hey Divs, enti ra intha manchiga wraasi naaku TELUGULO poems wraayadam raadu, poems wraayadam raadu antaaventi ra...
No buddy, thiz time Im not kiddin...Nijanga chepthunna...Fantastic ra...Intha manchi kala hrudayam pettukuni...
But one thng ra that aa nee DREAM LAD nenayithe entha baagundu...Cha missed yaar, ee janmalo miss ayyaanu...Inkoka janma antu vunte, NE NINNE KORUKUNTA LE...(Of course, Nenu ninnu korukovadam kaadu, nuvvu nannu korukovaalani)...LOLz...
Nyhw gud stuff ra...
Posted by: UK At: 31, Jan 2003 12:05:23 PM IST
I feel like this,
this is not a poem.
this is not like a poem
this is like a painting
a song
if u maintain a rhythm, u can write good songs.
I wish to listen this as a song, in a melodious tune.
try practising songwritting.
But i dint liek the essence that a woman is pleading{almost like begging} for a man's company.
I wish the whole song might be more good, if the words like those told by a heart{or soul} to its own body.
ante mansu manishitho ane maata"NEEKU TELUSA NENUNNAANANI..."
think like this,anywAY, GOOD ONE.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 28, Jan 2003 7:28:33 PM IST
mind tinavaddu.............plz.
Posted by: Mr. krishna kothapalli venkata At: 26, Jan 2003 8:08:35 AM IST
Nice one .. Andi
Posted by: ChandramSetti ChandraSekhar At: 25, Jan 2003 10:32:06 AM IST
Chaalaa baagundi. Really it is beautiful. Very tender feelings expressed in an extremely sensitive way. I like it. Continue with the same tempo. Your first trial is a Successful Attempt. Go on........
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 25, Jan 2003 7:48:03 AM IST
Nice Soetry
So[ng]
[Po]etry
Posted by: Mr. Rajasekhar Bhogi At: 25, Jan 2003 7:46:12 AM IST
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