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Articles: Poetry | | veLLE muMdu oka maaTa | |
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| mee andari viluvaina vimarSalanu tappakunDaa dRuShTilO unchukuMTaa.
contradictions annee kooDaa jeevitamlOni bhaagaalE, avE rachanalO pratibiMbiMchEyi anukuMTunnaa
Posted by: Mr. Jagannadha Rao LakshmiPrasad At: 24, Apr 2005 12:19:48 PM IST
baagundanDi...snaeha poorvakanga oka vimarSa - kaanee chaalaa contradictions kavitaloaki paakaayi.
cntradiction in the tone of the poem
modaTi renDu paeraalu - ' jananam anchu nunDi maraNam anchu varakoo ' varaku - oka aadhyaatmika bhaavana ; mooDoa paeraaloa ' vaega rahitamaina - andari laagae ' varaku saamaajika jeevanam paTla oka nirliptata ; naalugu aidu paeraalloa - ' jeevita manTae chukkani laeni payanamanToo velli poatunna aatma ' 'maraNamae anni adbhutaalaku antima payanam' anToo maLLee aadhyaatmika bhaavana; aaroa paeraa nunDi - 'poaraaDutaanu ' anToo jeevitam paTla optimism . mallee chivari paeraaloa ' aatma nimajjanam' ' karmaanubhavamu' anToo aadhyaatmikata !
contradiction in expression and meaning
aaroa paeraaloa - 'punarminchukoaDaaniki sRushTi nitya satyaanni, prakRuti nityatvaannee grahistaanu ' adae vaakyam toa end ayina chivari paeraa - ' vaegalaeka aagipoayi ee koluvuku ika selavu ' anToo withdraw avutunnaaTTu end chaeyaDam kavi aemi cheppadalchukunnaDoa blur ayyindi.
last but one paeraaloa - ' sangham toa sangharshaNa boomaraangulu venu dirigi vachchi tagultunTae ee avyavasthaku vyatiraekangaa poaraDutaanu' - mari aa sangharshaNa aa poaraaTam boomaraangu avutundannaaru?
inkoa chinna jaagarta teesukuni unDaali - sunaamee anae padam anni paeraalloa oka nirliptata nissahaayata kaliginchina sanghaTanagaa upayoaginchinappuDu..tirigee chivari paeraalloa vaaDina ' sunaamee' anae maaTaku sambandhinchina prayoagam inta ku mundu paeraalloa cheppae dRukpatham toanae kalisi unDaali. kavitaku consistency avasaram.
otherwise padaala floa, sameekaraNa baavundi. pai jaagartalu dRushTiloa peTTukunTae inkaa baagaa raaya galaru. All the best !
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 23, Apr 2005 11:17:07 AM IST
Hello Sir,
Velle mundu voka maata ....chala chala baagundi. jeevitam oka adbhutam , ee stanza chala baagundi. Life ni chala clear gaa choopincharu mee poem lo. Keep it up.
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 22, Apr 2005 9:34:14 PM IST
chaalaa baavuMdi...
keep it up.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 22, Apr 2005 2:00:17 PM IST
'kanneeTi chukka rAlchaDam modalu..
kamTi reppa vaalchaDam varaku'...amTE sariyaina mugimpu avutumdEmO ! anipistOmdi.
vellipOtunna Atma annaTuvamTi vAkyAlu emtO adbhutamgaa palikimchaaru.
sapta dhAtrilO...veera jyOti varaku 9 pamktulu
nitya satya bhAvanaku niluvuTaddAlu.
(raghu gaaruu..raghu gaaruu, bhAvalu)
Posted by: Ms. Mahee L.G. At: 22, Apr 2005 10:51:11 AM IST
baagundi. kulam , Dabbu modalainavaaTiki vyatirEkamgaa pOraaDavachchu kaanI matam , sanaatana dharmam gurinchi pOraaDaTamEmiTO? manushulayokka adhyaatmika aunnatyaaniki daarichuupEdE matam . dharmam ekkaDavunTE bhagavantuDuu akkaDE. yatOdharmastatOjaya@h
Posted by: Mr. HAYAGREEVA MURTY Rachuri At: 22, Apr 2005 8:56:09 AM IST
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