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Articles: Poetry | | j~naapakaM | |
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| hai chaala bagundi..nenu cheppalanukunnavanni migatha vaallu cheppesaru
Posted by: Miss kutty kutty At: 25, Apr 2005 4:30:50 PM IST
i don't know abt ur comment sir... But let us take this poem itself as an example... In this poem the poet is talking abt memories of his childhood crush/Friend... whom he lost.. it is rather a sad situation... every reader will get the feeling..it is transparent... But look at the comment of Shakti gaaru and others... evarikee kanneeLLu raalEdu.. pedaalapai chirunavvulE tappa .. It's Just like a chaplin's movie.. aa haasyapu aDuguna teerani vEdana kanipistuMdi.
Once again thanks alot for ur comments..
Posted by: PRANAV At: 25, Apr 2005 3:00:41 PM IST
Thank u all...
Dear Raghothama rao gaaru,
First of all let me thank u for ur sincere comment.
let me explain u... i don't like sentiments in poetry... aMdukE baadhaki kUDaa haasyapu musugu toDigEstaanu .. haasyaM annaa vyaMgyaM annaa naaku chaalaa ishTaM.... u can ask 'then why did u write 'abhaava kavitvaM'?' that is just to share the new type of poetry i read at that time...
but second part of ur comment is really poetic.. i liked it.
keep it up sir.
Regards,
Pranav.
Posted by: PRANAV At: 25, Apr 2005 2:01:25 PM IST
kannulu mounaMgaa varshistuMTE nee j~naapakaM tO kaLLu tuDuchukuMTaanu...
Very nice expression... Poem came out well and it's funny also!
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 25, Apr 2005 10:11:56 AM IST
:)) :)) kanniiLLu raalEdu bhalE navvochchindi :))
Posted by: Mrs. ψ శకి౨ ψ At: 25, Apr 2005 10:07:37 AM IST
prEma jnaapakaala dustulaku
bhalE kita kitalu peTTaaru!
Posted by: Ms. Mahee L.G. At: 25, Apr 2005 2:06:50 AM IST
:)funny.. nice one.
Posted by: Ms. Anu At: 24, Apr 2005 11:56:05 AM IST
:) :)
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 23, Apr 2005 9:01:22 PM IST
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