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Articles: Short Stories | | vaarasatvam | |
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| Nijjanga naku katha artham kaledu, 2 times chadivanu, ina asalu artham kaledu..
Posted by: Sowjanya At: 31, May 2007 11:27:08 PM IST
What the hell going on
writer can't write properly. editors can't edit properly. readers can't read properly.
did anybody observe typo errors? bEla has become bhEla (thank god not bhEl poori). having zeal to write is not enough madam. ur care abt ur story, right from idea to implementation, shud reflect. u hv utterly failed in doing so. meaning u care a damn for ur own story.
hv u ever read a story? hv u ever observed how great writers write? hv ever applied mind & brain to do so?
'this is my first story, pls comment nicely'. this is absurdity. if i comment harsh, but tell u the truths r u going to ignore it? if somebody flattens u by stupidly saying 'this is a great and good first attempt', r u going scale great heights?
first read properly and then dare to 'write'.
gud luck
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 7, May 2005 3:17:21 PM IST
sorry to say this...I read so many novels and stories...PLease dont mistake me..its a genuine critic.
I didnt understand the story.
Posted by: Ms. sravanthi Chinta At: 5, May 2005 11:20:37 AM IST
very nice andi. it makes people think. please write more - this is a great and good first attempt. we are here to encourage you.
Posted by: Mr. Rajesh K At: 28, Apr 2005 11:14:58 PM IST
hello arpita gaaru
it was good..though it was too short even to be called a short story....kaani adi vaarasatvam ani cheppalem......good attempt. keep going. anagananaga....padyam viney untaaru. raayagaa raayagaa inkaa baaga raastaaru. wish u all the best.
sowmya.
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 28, Apr 2005 11:00:03 PM IST
idE naa modaTi kadha kaavuna tappulunna oppulu vunnaa nannu encourage chestU mI sunnitamaina abipraayaalani teliyajEyagOrutunnaanu.
Posted by: Mrs. alamkruta arpita At: 28, Apr 2005 6:20:49 PM IST
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