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Articles: Poetry | | manmatha SrAvaNi bhAvaveechikalu-2 | |
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| I agree with alok... poem should be clear.. there should n't be any confusion in expressions and language. this poem lacks it completely. try to improve on that. u can write good poems!
Posted by: S Sankalp At: 5, May 2005 7:06:31 PM IST
ganDaraganDa dOrdanDa manDita enkaDu eDlu tOlukottunnaaDu anna chandambunanunnani twadeeya kavita vaakyamulu. graandhikamu, vyaavahaarikamu renDuyunu Ekasthala vaasamu jEyuTa tagadu. parantoo konni bhaavanammulu baagunnavi. ganuka bhaashanu kinchidaSraddhanuu lEkunDagaa viniyOgincha praarthana
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 5, May 2005 6:39:46 PM IST
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