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| Comeon Mr. Vastav, I am taking all the comments in a positive way. No need to escape for and from any one. Its a continuous art. I think it is not worse to express feelings for which Mr.VimarsakuDu had felt some inconveneince. One has to cultivate to defend oneselves, then only one can face the challenges without any hesitation. Thanks for sending your suggestions. I request all of U to make comments on my previous articles if u have time.Anticipating your spicy comments...
Yours, SriRaj
Posted by: Mr. Sreedhar Raja At: 7, May 2005 3:02:17 PM IST
raajaa gaaruu alaa paaripOtaarenduku?
padanDi munduku
padanDi tOsuku
pOdaam pOdaam
pai paiki
vimarSalanu deeTugaa DheekunTEnE buddhi perigEdi. leev iT anTE dEnni? kavitanaa ? kavita raayaDaanaa? lEka charchanaa?
spardhayaa vardhatE vidyaa. marchipOyaaraa?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 7, May 2005 1:13:57 PM IST
Ok...Thank U..leave it...
Posted by: Mr. Sreedhar Raja At: 6, May 2005 10:22:34 PM IST
Thanks for all of your harsh and encourging comments. Anticipating more...
mundugaa Saastri gaariki ..
chivari lein 'cheppanEla evarivO neevu' repeat cheyyaDam lO ardham undi. adi naa manassu lOni sandhigdhataku, aasakti ki alankaaram. ikapOtE, meeru suggestion ichhinaTlu 'nuvvE nEnu-nEnE nuvvu' ani vunTE saripOdu. endukanTE mee bhaavaaniki ardham VEru, naa bhaavanaku ardham VEru. ee kavita naa mother nu uddESistu vraasinadi. meeru 'baagunnadi' ani vraasinanduku santOsham.
chivari lein's lO konchem savaraNa undi. 'nEneina neevu, naalO unna neevu' ani unDaalsindi. mee nunDi marinni suggestions aaSistU...
sankalp gaariki..
meeku naa kavita baagaa undani anipinchinanduku santOsham. mee encouragement ilaanE unDaalani aaSistU..
ikapotE vaastav gaariki..
teliyani daani gurunchi telusukOvaDamlO, mee bhaashalO cheppaalanTE 'peekkOvaDamu' lO aanandam unTundani naa abhipraayam. okkokka saari, manaku 'baagaa telusu' anukunna vaaTi gurinchE manaku Emi teliyaka pOvachhu. ee kavita naa mother kOsam vraasinadi. 'amma'gurunchi manaku baagaa telisina, telisindi takkuvE- nani anipinchindi. telusukOvaalani aalOchinchaanu, aa aalOchanalE mee mundu unchaanu.
Posted by: Mr. Sreedhar Raja At: 5, May 2005 11:46:54 PM IST
bAguMdi kAni
cheppa nEla evarivO nIvu ???
idi maLLI ripIT chEsAreMduku??
nuvvE nEnu - nEnEnIvu aMTE saripOdA?
I kavitaku makuTaM (title) ardhaM kAlEdu!
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 5, May 2005 7:18:10 PM IST
wonderful poetry... Really wonderful...
keep it up
Posted by: S Sankalp At: 5, May 2005 7:02:20 PM IST
daan dumpadegaa teleenidaani gurinchi inta peekkunE badulu telisindEdO cheppochchugaa
artham chEsukOroo
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 5, May 2005 6:23:04 PM IST
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