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Articles: Poetry | | 'mammI' ammaa ani pilustaanE! | |
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| bagundi
Posted by: Mr. prasad ravi At: 7, Dec 2005 1:52:09 PM IST
chaalaa baagundi.
annaTTu 'mammee' anE maaTaki 'Sava sambandhamaina' oka arthaM kooDaa undani 'tOTakoora' naaDE mana peddalu hechcharinchi unTE inta 'chETugaa' 'mammeelu' udbhavinchEvaaLLu kaadEmO!
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 9, Jul 2005 8:32:39 PM IST
as my friend vimarsakuDu suggested it is an essay broken into small sentenses
My friend
agendas & programmes and slogas can never become poetry. Keep this in mind, always
Good luck
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 7, May 2005 1:00:18 PM IST
mee prayatnaM venaka mee uddESaM maMchidE ayinaa kavita aMta impressive gaa lEdanE cheppaali. ammakee , mammee kee tEDaa telisE vayasu vachchEsariki chinna pillalu peddavaaLLaipOtaaru. asalu aa vayasulO vaaLLaki samasya aMTU Edee uMDadu... baMDeDu pustakaalu mOsukuMTU aaDutU paaDutU skUl ki veLLipOtaaru. kaabaTTi oka pillaaDi nOTi dvaaraa cheppiMchaalanukunna mee prayatnaM faliMchalEdanE cheppaali.
tappaka raastU uMDaMDi.konnaaLLaki rUpaM meeda avagaahana ErpaDutuMdi.
ALL THE BEST.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 7, May 2005 8:22:39 AM IST
muMdugA SIrShika chakkagA kudiriMdi
oka chinna pillavADu cheppalEni anubhavistunna mUga vEdananu vudvEgaMtO cheppina tIru bhAvasfUritaMgA bAguMdi.
idi sAmAjika sfRuhatOkUDina rachana.
aMtEkAdu, iMdulO eskEpijaM lEdu.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 7, May 2005 0:42:46 AM IST
hi ravi
it was a good one.
keep it up.
s.
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 6, May 2005 9:24:15 PM IST
Ravi Kiran garu,
Your thoughts and ideas are excellent.
I am sure you will improve your poetic skills with the help of TP friends such as Mr.Raghothama Rao and Mr.VimarsakuDu.
Please write more and more, you are going to improve without any doubt.
Posted by: Mr Suresh KVS At: 6, May 2005 8:10:31 PM IST
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