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| Anni Kaanivvandi, Tarvaata Mataadukundam. Sarena :P
Bavundi :)
Posted by: Mr. Raj Raj At: 9, May 2005 10:39:11 PM IST
u seems to be very famous here, Mr AndhruDu. So don't wonder how and when and where and why u hv suggested Madam Sri Smily to read poetry.
meeru cheppinaTTu annEsi praasalni mEDam telisO teleekO vaaDinappuDu, SreeSree ni chadavoddanTaarenduku? SreeSreelO kavitvam lEdanaa? vErEvaaLlalO adi paravaLLu tokkutOndanaa? SreeSree mahaakavi. atanni chadavani naaDu adi chaduvanipinchukOdu. tilak ennichOTla dorlipaDDaaDO meeru jaagartagaa chadivitE telustundi. samskRutaanni vyaavahaarikaanni okE kavitalO eDaapeDaa vaayinchEsinavaaDu tilak . af kOrs ennO manchi kavitalu raasaaraayana. kaanee SreeSree modaleDitE mottam graadhikam lEdanTE mottam vyaavahaarikam . kanuka SreeSree sthaayi praathamikam , tilak sthaayi atyunnatam annaTTunna mee pOsTing naaku nachchalEdu. vaaLLiddaroo CLASSES APART.
vimarSakuDu chEsina vimarSa kattilaagundi. evarevarO vaakyaalu vaaDEsukoni 'nEnu daanni chadavalEdu baabuu' anaDam ebbeTTu. asalu kavitvamE chadavalEnappuDu raayaDam maatram endukanTa. poddupOkanaa?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 9, May 2005 2:25:51 PM IST
jaagartagaa abjarv' chaeyanDi...kavita mottam ekkuva hrasvaalatoa unDi prati vaakyam ending oka laya baddangaa saagindi chaalaa choaTla like ' chaesindi ' , ' allukundi ' ....' chooDanee ', ' daachukanee' , 'nimpukoanee'..laanTi padaalatoa regular intervals loa vaaDaDam valla kavitaku andaanni techchi peTTaaru. oka series loa okae roopam loa vadilina vaakyaala valla paaTakuDiki meeru anukuna bhaavam naalukanunDi manasuloa dimpe prayatnam chaesaaru. kadoo?..uddaeSya poorvakangaa chaesi unDaka poavachchu. kaanee adi meeloa unna bhaavukata manasuloa ega dannina bhaavaala parampara valla kooDaa jariginDochchu. antaenaa?
kaviki bhaavukatatoa paaTu tactics kooDaa avasaram. adi undi meeloa. ae sthaayiloa undi annadi vaerae vishayam.
ee qualities improve chaeyaDaaniki vistRutangaa kavitvaanni adhyayanam chaeyanDi. ( Sree Sree kavitvaanni chadavakanDi ippaTloa. meeku kaavaalsindi kavita raayaDaaniki oka anuvaina expression oka vibhinna pada prayoagam. )ika kaviki kaavaalsina modaTi qualification kavita raayalanae daaruNamaina tapana !. adi meeloa undi. ika manchikoa cheDukoa mee kavita kRushNa Saastri kavitvam gurinchi charchinchimpa jaesindi. oa rakanga choostae adi mee kavitaloa unna paajiTive vishayamaemoa?! ayinaa aem parlaedu...inkaa meeru ae daevara konDa baala gangaadhar tilak sthaayiki chaera laedu... its a journey !....kramangaa artham chaesukunTaaru vishayaalu. kaa poatae pada prayoagam loa ' oa laalityam pavanamai ' laanTi phrases toa kotta danaanni iddaamanae prayatnam jariginaa.... improve chaesukoavaalsina avasaram undi ee samayam loa.
soa....goa aheD !
PS: naeneppuDu meeku kavitalu chadavamani suggestion ichchaanu? ( aemanukoakanDi ! sarigaa gurtu laedu !)
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 9, May 2005 1:03:50 PM IST
Ms. Sri Smily garu!
enno saarlu mana baavalu inkokaritho kalavachchu..alage mana aalochanalanu kuda...kabatti ekkado okachota mana poetry kuda kalavachchu...kabatti meeru ivemi pattinchukokandi...ayina meeru anni rakaala kavithalu chadivithe inka koncham professionism ravachchu..maremo, mundu mana mastarlu chinnappudu chuchi raayincha batte kada manaku aksharalu vachchayi...koddiga inspiration techchukovadamlo tappu ledu...mana identity kolponanthavaraku
Posted by: Miss Suneetha Thaduri At: 9, May 2005 12:28:49 PM IST
i actuallycame to this poem just out of curiosity to see wht Mr Vaastav alok wrote.....
anyways, it was a good reading.
i don't know abt those words of krishna sastry or anything.........
but, keep writing.
it is a bit senti. guess u wrote it with strong feeling! all the best
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 7, May 2005 11:50:52 PM IST
'eda'lOpali 'eda'lO
'manO' aakaaSam
'madi' chemmagillina choopulatO
'manasu' teeraa nannu chooDani
mamatala 'eda'lO chigurulu viriyanee
maunangaa ee bandhaanni 'gunDe'lO nimpukOnee
'eda'lOpali 'eda'lO
paryaaya padaala veera kavaatu. bhaavaala kunTi naDaka.
edalOpala edanaa? adi nemmadinaa? EdOkaTi raasEyaalani Edi paDitE adi raaseyyaDamE. aksharaalanTe lakshyam lEkunDaa paaThakulanTE bhayam bhakti lEkunDa raasEstE ilaagE unTundi mari.
hEy telugu kavita pO paaripO neeku edalOpala eda unTE
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 7, May 2005 2:48:34 PM IST
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