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Articles: Poetry | | oka baalyaM | |
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| Satisfaction will put and end to growth not only in art but also in every field. How far one will go is judgemental.
There is difference between what i meant by satisfaction and what u guys understood.
I am not at all in a mood to scribble something, say it a poem and post it here for the sake of it.
kavita baagunDaalanTE raasinavaaDE toli vimarSakuDu avvaali ani nammEvaanni. nEnu trupti paDDaakE ikkaDa aa kavita ni pOsTu chEsaanu. So that i can get other comments which i overlooked,.. Here satisfaction means i am done with my side...
Thats all i meant..
Perfection is something like infinity, which no body can define. Improvement leads towards perfection and the only reason i post my writings here is to get those comments which helps me in improving.
If you dont mind, Please mail further comments to my tp inbox instead of here.
Thanx,
~Sree
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 11, May 2005 2:04:59 PM IST
Alok gaaru.. leave it, i am not here to argue with you.
meenunDi oohinchani maaTalu.simpulgaa vimarSistE padunugaa unDaalannaaru. padunugaa vimarSistE aargyumenTannaaru.
meerannaTTu raasindaanikE tRupti paDEstE kavitvam chachchuurukunTundi.suSeela, leelalchEta okkO paaTanu 20, 30 saarlu rihaarsaljEyinchina ghanTaSaalaku ee buddhE puTTunTE lavakuSa paaTalu dummulO kalisipOyEvi.pOtanaku kRushNaSaastriki SreeSreeki tilakku iTlaanTi buddhE puTTunTE telugu kavitvam murikkaalvakanTE adhwaannangaa vunDEdi.
asalekkaDinunchi vastundee tRupti. vimarSanu deeTugaa edurkOlEnappuDaa? lavar bhaama cheppu tiragEsindani raasina viraha geetaanni chadivi vimarSakulu karraTTuku venTabaDDappuDaa?
Sreedhar gaaru kaLa vunDi meruguparuchukOnanTE naakochchina nashTamEmeelEdu. ubusupOni kavitalraasi, vimarSistE 'naa kOsam raasukunnaa'nani dabaayinchE puTTagoDugu kavullOki chErE uddESam vunTE cheppanDi, mee kavitalakEsi chooDanu gaaka chooDa.
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 11, May 2005 12:55:06 PM IST
Thats ok Mr. Vimarsakudu, every one has their own way of percieving things.
I dont care whether i failed or passed, i made an attempt and am satisfied with that. And taking help of the picture neither was my intention nor close to it.
how much time does it take to watch a movie and a picture ?
Anyway.. its pretty clear that our views differ.. So, there is no point in arguing. I appreciate your comments about the poem.
Alok gaaru.. leave it, i am not here to argue with you.
Thanx both of you for your comments :)
~Sree
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 11, May 2005 11:28:36 AM IST
padunaina vimarSa
aakali kEkalaki
aksharam bhaaramaindi
chaduvu dooramaindi
idi vaartaa vilEkari sTail .indulO kavita lEdu
paTTeDannam kai pasinaaDE
baadhyata bhujaalakekkindi
baruvu nettikekkindi
pElavamaina niroopaNa
aiduvELLu nOru chErEnduku
batuku modalaindi
baalyam kanumarugayindi
asambaddha vaakya nirmaaNam .puTTagaanE batuku modalayindi.kooleeki chEraDam daanitO 'pOraaTam ' modalaindi.baalyam undi baT anubhavaaniki dooramaindi
poTTapOsukunE prayatnam lO
teepi gurutula praayam
chEdu kashaayam taagistundi
kavitvapu Chaayalu tongichoostunna vaakyaalu
chivari sTaanjaa mottam slOgan sO kavitvam kaalEdu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 11, May 2005 10:47:31 AM IST
Ooops sorry...
Please read the 3rd line in my comment as..
I cant really agree *with* your comments about having a picture. I dont see any*thing wrong* in posting one. here are the two main reason for doing so...
thanx..
~Sree
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 11, May 2005 9:54:51 AM IST
Thanx all you for your comments.
vimarSakuDu gaaru,
I cant really agree your comments about having a picture. I dont see any reason in having it. here are the two main reason behind posting that pic..
1. A picture says thousand words and writing a poem for that is merely a challenge, bcuz i have to show the intensity of the picture in my words. I tried for that.
2. I come across some of those pics and they are my inspiration for this poem. So, i want to tell that by posting one.
meerannaTTu kavita inkaa inTen&s gaa undaalsindi. Will keep that in mind.
alOk gaaru,
mee vimarSaku padunu peTTanDi.. avi chaala viluvainavi.
Ravi gaaru, please check your mail for explanation.
~Sreedhar
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 11, May 2005 9:48:47 AM IST
mee sthaayi lO lEdu Sreedhar gaarU..
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 10, May 2005 10:09:48 PM IST
sreedhar gaaru,
the poem made a good reading.
i don't read much of poetry..so, can't say much abt the style.
alok gaaru, meeru ey uddeshyam to annaro naaku teleedu kaani oka baalyam ante-okari baalyam ani sreedhar gaari uddeshyam ayi undavachchu.antey kani oka baalyam,rendu baalyaalu…....n baalyaalu ani ayiundakapovachchu. oka jeevitham, oka galam ala ayiundochchu.
anyways, good luck sreedhar gaaru. Keep writing.
s.
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 10, May 2005 8:45:53 PM IST
oka baalyamaa? anTE renDO baalyam mooDO baalyaalu guuDaa vunnaayaa?
mee kavitalni chadivaanu. aandhraajee annaTTugaanE ee madhya kaalam lO impruuv menT undi. indulO adi pOyindi. endukO vimarSa chEsukoni cheppanDi
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 10, May 2005 6:16:38 PM IST
aidu vaeLLu noaru chaeraenduku
batuku modalayindi
baalyam kanumarugayyindi
meeru cheppaalanukundi Tach avutundi.
meeru improvmenT ku perfection ku taeDaa telusukoa galaranukunTaa.
paaThakuniki tanu cheppalsindi elaagainaa cheppi oppinchaalanukunae paTTudala oarpu kaviki avasaram.
Sreedhar ! guD jaab ! goa ahaeD !
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 10, May 2005 4:09:06 PM IST
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