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| mee efarT baavundanDi !
'manasuku maroa manasugaa
manugaDaku bhaashyam naerpae bhaavanagaa..'
laanTi vaakyaalu meeloa bhaavukata padaalatoa bhinna prayoagam chaeddamanae tapana teliyajaestunnaay ! guD !
kaapoatae konchem roTeen loa paDipoayaaru konni choaTla. ' oa manasaa...' paeraanu gamanistae telustundi. adi aemee goppa porapaaTu kaadu gaani...konni manchi vaelyoos unna kavitala pai expoajar unTae adae kudurutundi. foToas veyinchukuni svaati aandhra bhoomi laanTi patrikalloa vachchae kavitalu saadhyamainanta varaku avaayiD chaeyanDi. Sivaa reDDi, Siva saagar, kundurti...kavitaa sankalanaalu adhyayanam chaeyanDi. Teknik meeda avagaahana perugutundi. kavitaa vastuvu vishayam loa kooDaa konta jaagarta paDaali. kavita raasae mundu kaviki clarity avasaram. clarity in thought vachchaaka clarity in expression koasam vetukkoavachchu. ' guppeDu manasuku moaya laeni baadhyatalu ' annappuDu ... maLLee 'baadhyatalu baruvugaa toachina vaeLa ' anTae?!...ilaanTi konni contradictions unnaayi.
parlaedanDi....oa saari kavita rasaakaa..meeru mimmalni niSitanga vimarSinchukoanDi. mohamaaTa paDoddu. kavitaloa aem cheppaaloa cliyar gaa unnaroa laedoa modaTa aatma vimarSa chesukoanDi. manchi kavitvam chadivina inspiraeshan toa mundukeLLanDi. eTochchee vishayam aenTanTae meeloa unna bhaavukatanu communication gap laekunDaa andivvaDamae mee tapana. naaku toachindi maatram cheppaanu.
once again good affort ! keep it up
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 14, May 2005 4:03:53 PM IST
keep it up u have good future
friendly,
nasaraiah golla
Posted by: Mr. NASARAIAH At: 13, May 2005 9:01:07 PM IST
amma chempa meeda koDitE tappaa?rachaita baagaa raayalani vimarSiste tappaa?vimarSa anunayangaa unTE chevikkekkadu saar . guuba guyyimanindanukOnDi gurtunTundi.annam ayindaa lEdaa ani telusukOvaDaaniki mottam cheyyeTTi choostaama?aTlaagE kavita gurinchi manakunna avagaahanatO idi kaadu adi ani cheppaDamlO anta ginjukunEdEmundi.
ati mati cherustundani saameta. ati manchidanam gooDaa lOpamE.
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 12, May 2005 7:36:03 PM IST
AmahAkavi SrI SrI ani gurtu. eppuDO chadivA
vimarSalanu kUDA anunaya padhdhatilO cheppAligAni cheMpamIda koTTinaTTu vuMDakUDadu. peigA itarula kavitanu sarididdakaligETaMta paMDituNNigAnu. aMta tAhatu nAkulEdu.
padyaM aMTArA, ChaMdassulOpAlanu cheppagalanEkAni, bhAvaM SeililO lOpAlanu cheppaDaM kAni, illAvuMDAlani nirdhiShTaMgA cheppagalagaDaM kAni nAku teliyadu.
nAku tOchina abhiprAyaM cheppAnu.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 12, May 2005 7:03:03 PM IST
Nice to see ur kavitha. Its really good.
Posted by: Mr. Srinivas RN At: 12, May 2005 6:36:21 PM IST
Saastreejee meeru cheppina mahaakavi antyapraasa EDsinaTTundi. mahaakavanTE raasindantaa kavitvamEnaa
vimarSanu sweekarincham pogaDtalE kaavaalanTE maatram kudardu.prOtsaahamanTE Em raasinaa baagundanDam gaadu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 12, May 2005 5:32:27 PM IST
Appreciate it..Good
Posted by: Mr. Reddy D At: 12, May 2005 3:47:20 PM IST
nijaM prasAd
I kavitalO nuvvannaTlu pAjiTiv tiMkiMg vuMdi.
kavita, Seili, bhAsha faravAlEdu
vAchaspati annaTlU rachayita mAnasika spaMdanatO veluvaDina bhAvAlu I kavitalO chOTuchEsuku vuMDavachchu
owtsAhika rachayitalanu protsAhistE muMdumuMdu iMkA maMchi maMchi kavitalu vrAyagalaru.
iMDiyA pradhAni kAgOru
ravIMdranAd TAgOr
idi oka mAhAkavi aMtyaprAsa kavita
ellAvuMdi?
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 12, May 2005 1:17:42 PM IST
The raw material u have taken may be your personal experience. So depth is has. Good approach!
Posted by: Mr. Vachaspathi V At: 12, May 2005 1:10:55 PM IST
Gud.
Basic ga nenu yeppudu Kavithalu Chadavanu.
So ee kavitha baagundho ledho nenu cheppalenu.
Eee kavitha chadivina taruvaatha maatram Eee ammayi ki Positive thinking vundhi ani ardham ayyndhi.
Anyhow keep going and write some more.
bye
Prasad
Posted by: Mr. Prasad Addepalli At: 12, May 2005 12:52:33 PM IST
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