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| simply superb
Posted by: Mr. praveen b At: 27, Feb 2006 9:10:56 PM IST
rythmatic ga rayalane tapatreyem tho asalu bavanni pondikaga cheppalekapoyaru...koncham try chesthe inka baga rayochu..
Posted by: Mr. M.S.Reddy At: 1, Jun 2005 2:05:14 AM IST
smailee gaaroo ! u have done a gud job ! oka vibhinna prayoagam chaeddamane mee tapana baavundi. konni contraductions kavitaloa unnaa...parlaedu..nemmadigaa telusukunTaaru. okaTi gurtunchukoanDi...kaviki kaavaalsindi bhaavam paTla conviction adi paaThakuDiki andinchaalanae balamaina urge . ee renDoo unTae refine avutaaru. I think u have calibre to write even better poems .
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 21, May 2005 10:46:34 AM IST
kraanti mee prati kaamenTulOnoo EdO oka aavAku chevAku vunDanE vunTundi.adi mee lakshaNamainappuDu, gooba guyyimanipinchaDam maa lakshaNam.saripOyindaa?
intakoo mEDam Sree smailee gaariki nEnEm jeppaanO chadivaaraa?adi prOtsaaham kaadaa?artham kaani kavitani ennisaarlu chadivi artham chEsukODaaniki Trai chEsaano cheppukonTE adi avalakshaNamaa?pOnee intagaa udrEkapaDutunnaaru gadaa okka sajeshan ichchaaraa kotta kavayitriki?ikkaDa gooDaa mammalni tiTTE prayatnamE jEsaaru.
illaa okari kavitalOkochchi mEmiddaramEmi raasaamaa ani choosi SoshinchEdaanikannaa aa vElu paTTuku naDipinchE kaaryakramamEdO meeru kaanivvanDi mEmu choostunTaam
adE Sreelakshmi, baaboo mOhan mee inTikochchAranukOnDi appuDEm jEstaaru mEDam snEhaa?chinna ArTisTulani vaakilEsEstaaraa?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 20, May 2005 9:17:23 PM IST
evarnainaa magavaaNNi baTTukoni 'ayyaa meeru en Tee aarlaa vunnaa'ranTE adi avamaaninchaDamaa? lEdoo 'mee vaayis achcham baaloolaa vundanDee' anTE tiTTA? kaadugaa
maamoolugaa 2,3 saarlu chadivi kaamenTraastaanu.ee kavita enta kanfyuujingaa vundanTE nEnu kaamenTraayaDaaniki 6 saarlu chadavaalsochchindi.reeDarsini tikamakapeTTETaTlu raayaDam kavi tappu.tanaku arthavaina reetilO vimarSinchaDam paaThakula vantu
anchaata vimarSakuDu allaa annaa nEnu illaa annaa lakshyammaatram vokkaTE.kavitanu kavi sariggaa raayaalani
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 19, May 2005 10:04:29 AM IST
i agree with subramanyam gaaru totally.
u can write even better with some effort. all the best.
s.
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 18, May 2005 11:27:33 PM IST
chaalaa maMchi bhaavaM.. saraina padaalu lEka pElavaM gaa tElipOyiMdi.
aaKari lain lO
'ammaa' anna pilupu vinnappuDu maatraM ani maarchaMDi.. bhaavaM tElika gaa aMdutuMdi.
ALL THE BEST
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 18, May 2005 8:30:56 PM IST
ajantaa Silpamannaa, mEghaala maaTuna SaSivannaa streeni 'ammaa' annappuDu maatram streelaanE tappa SilpamO, mEghamO gaadu ani cheppabOyinaTTundi.
EdO prayOgam cheyyaalanna tapana vundi.gaanee raayaDamlO unna anubhavaraahityam prayatnaanni champEsindi.
kavita raayaalanna aiDiyaa vochchinappuDu tondarapaDaka nimpaadigaa vunDaDam nErchukOvaala. aalOchana paadarasamlaa pichchipichchigaa gantulEstunTundi.daanni adupulO beTTi manakkaavalsinaTTu tippukOvaDamlOnE kavi satta.
eesaari nimpaadigaa koorchOni avasarapaDakunDaa nemmadigaa raayanDi
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 18, May 2005 2:04:45 PM IST
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