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| Ento rasav...parledu....mee akka kante betteray..
when is your next posting?
Posted by: Mr. ramukgs ramu At: 23, Dec 2005 0:32:19 AM IST
Every Critic helps you to write better..!
Posted by: Mr. Cupid Cuddlesome At: 30, May 2005 9:15:08 PM IST
hey bhavani ..dont get discouraged..it's not that bad and definitely NOT childish!
Keep writing more :)
Posted by: Krishna Ch At: 19, May 2005 1:41:56 AM IST
this piece is looking childish for me....
trying to have a rhyme in the end and failing in it by using silly wordings.
t be frank, i don't understand why this is written.
anyways, try to improve. good luck.
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 18, May 2005 11:22:28 PM IST
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