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Articles: Poetry | | kavitva peitya prakOpaM (idi kavitvaM kAdu) | |
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| ayyA! vimarSakuDu vimarSakuDu gArU! mIru eMtasEpU vAdananu poDigistunnArEkAni nAabhyardhananu manniMchi kavitalaku EdeinA lAxaNika gramdhamulAMTidi vuMdO lEdO cheppaDaM lEdu. asalu allAMTi graMdhaMvuMdA? mIru chEsE vimarSalu, salahAlu, kavitalalO saviriMpulu dEnni AdhAraMgA tIsukuni chEstunnArO dayachEsi vipulIkariMchakOrtAnu. mI iddarilO evvarU I nA abhyardhanaku spaMdiMchakapOvaDaMtO, asalu mIku allAMTi graMdhAlu vunnaTlE teliyadani, mIku vyaktigataMgA tOchinadEprAmANikaMgA tIsukoni vimarSistunnArani anukOvalasi vastuMdi. dIniki kUDA samAdhAnaM mIru ivvaka vAdanakE parimitaM avutE nA vUha nijamE anukOvalasi vastuMdi. allAMTappuDu mIvimarSalu mIvyaktigata abhiprAyAlugA nirbhayaMgA cheppaMDi. aMtEgAni idi kavitva laxaNaMgAdu ani dayachEsi anakaMDi. nannu manniMchi nAku peina sUchiMchina vidhaMgA kavitala laxaNa NgNjAnabixa peTTaMDi
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 23, May 2005 11:12:01 AM IST
Sastri Gaaru,
These people are very good at CRITICISING other’s work. But, they are not good for producing any thing good on their own. Did you see any poetry posted by their ids?
Personally, I do think these soo called “Vimarsakulu”, especially the people who are not brave enough to use their real names, are spoiling the entire section.
Even though they may or may not admit openly but their conscious knows that they have been rude to others, that’s why they have to have the mask of fake id’s and fake names.
To the SO CALLED “VIMARSAKULU” why don’t you fulfill with your unlimited wisdom, Sastri gaari request?
Posted by: Mr. Venkat Kolli At: 23, May 2005 10:15:16 AM IST
1. rachayitalu nochchukunETlu vimarSimchAnE gAni ekkaDA tiTTalEdannAru..
alA nochchukunETlu vimarSimchakamDi.
2.kavitAvastuvugA EdemchukOvAlani kavikE vadilEyAli.
imdulO pAThakuDi pramEyam lEdu. mI dRushTilOnivE atanu vADAlani rUl lEdu. nUtanatvam kAvAlamTE mI rachanallO chUpimchamDi..samtOshistAm .anukaristAm.
3.kavitvam mIda mIkunna avagAhana arthamayyimdi.aBinamdanIyam . anusarimchina paddatE bAlEdu.
ika migatA vishayAlu nA kanavasaram...
Selav...
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 23, May 2005 9:25:54 AM IST
Mrs. Sneha! Thanks for the information. But
evari ei.DI. Edeina, okkokkaraki enni ei.DIlu vunnA nAku anavasaraM. kAni nAkukAvalisinadi mAtraM kavitva laxaNAla vivarAlu. vATi prAmANika graMdhAlu (ChaMdassulAga). eMdukaMTE nArachanalu asalu kavitalEkAvu pommannAru. nijamEnEmO! aMdukani I jIvitaM chAliMchElOgA laxaNapUritameina kavitvaM okkaTeinA vrAddAmani ASa. I veb seT lOki vachchEvarakU nAku teliyadu, evvarUcheppalEdu kUDA.
okavELa I saMdEhaMtOnE nEnumaraNistE, koMpatIsi dayyAnnei I veb seiTlOnE vuMDipOtAnEmO
aMdukani O vimarSakulArA ! mIpEru EdeinA, dayachEsi nA saMdEhaM tIrchaMDi. plIj
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 23, May 2005 8:38:39 AM IST
mIvimarSalO kavitva laxaNAlu cheppakanE cheputunnAyani annAru. avE kavitva laxanAlani Edeina sidhdhAMtaM vuMDA? pratibhAShaku vyAkaraNaM aMTU vuMdi. padyAlaku ChaMdassu vuMdi. allAga kavitvAniki kUDAvuMDA? mIrucheppiMdE laxaNaM aMTE adi mIvyaktigata abhiprAyaM mAtramE. kanuka allAMTivEmannAvumTE cheppaMDi. lEdA idi mAku nachchalEdu anaMDi. kavitva laxaNAlu kAvani DhaMkAbajAyiMchi cheppavaddu. mIru mIvimarSalanu svAti vamTi patrikalakupaMpitE avi buTTadAkhalA ayyAyi annAru. amTE A saMpAdakunaku mIvimarSa nachchalEdanEgadA ardhaM. mIvimarSalO kavitva laxaNAlu AsaMpAdakunaku kanapaDalEdEmO. lEka avi vimarSalu kAvani buTTadAkhalA chEsArEmO. I veb seT lO nirATaMkaMgA pOShT cheyyavachchukanuka dInini vADutunnArannamATa. dayachEsi okkaTi gurtuMchukOMDi. mIru chEsE EvimarSa ayinA sahetukaMgA prAmANika laxaNAla paridhilOvuMTE kaLLakaddukoni svIkaristA.
vinadagunevvaru cheppina.
iMkoka chinna salahA
ikkaDitO I kAmeMTulO mIru samAdhAnaM ivvaDa ApEsi, kavitva laxanAlanuvipulIkaristU okavyAsaM pOShT cheyyaMDi. dAnipei vachchE kAmeMTsunu pariSIliddAM.
eMdukaMTE mIku ellAgU kavitva laxaNAlu prAmANikaMgA elAvuMDAlO teliyadani anipistUvuMdi mIru vAdanakE parimitamavutunnArukanuka. mIru kanuka oka vyAsaM pOShT chEstE mEdhAvuleina mitrulu vATini viSlEShistAru. mIku teliyakapOyinA vArikeinA telustuMdanukoMTA kavitvAniki EdeinA prAmANika graMdhaM vuMdEmO. falAnAvAru illA vrAsAru adI kavitva laxaNaM aMTE anEdi prAmANikaM kAdu. nA kOrika mannistArani, ika vAdanalaku aMdarU svasti cheptArani ASistunnA.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 22, May 2005 11:11:03 PM IST
modaTi paayinT . ikkaDunna vaaLLalO evarO oharu eDiTarai vunDaali vaaru ee tiTTukavulatO kalisipOyunDaalanna naa kaamenT ku nO ani evvaroo samaadhaanam cheppalEdu.anTE naa anumaanam nijamanna maaTa.iha intakanTE Em kaavali?chadivE vaaLLaku teleekapOdaa evaru ee saiTunu dhwasam jEstunnaarO?evaru nijavaina saahityam kOsam vedukutunnaarO?inkaa evainaa tiTlu,toorpaarabaTTaDAloo migilunTE ippuDE vaaDEyanDi.janaalu mee venTabaDElOgaa
mEDam snEha meerikkaDa kavitvaanni uddharinchaDam lEdu sarigadaa lEni pOni vyartha prasangaalu matram kollalugaa jEstunnaaru.nannu gaaDida anna vyaktini inta nissiggugaa samardhistunnaaru gadaa nEnalaa evarinannaanO choopanDi.mahaa aitE rachaita chinnabuchukunETTu vimarSa jEsaanani cheppagalrE gaanee.anTE oka vyakti rachanakunna viluva ikkaDa vyaktiki lEdanna maaTa.kavitanEmi anagooDadoo gaanee vyaktini maatram akkasukoddee tiTTochchu.bhalEgundanDee
Evannaaru? oharu gaaDidaa annaaru maroharu inkEvainaa anagalaranaa?meeku lEnaTTE andarikee samskaaramunDadani enta goppa nammakam .asalu eDiTar gaariki vichakshaNa vunTE mee kamplainTnu mee bhaashalO 'tokkalO'ki tOstaaru.lEdoo maaku vaarning istaaru.kamplainT cheyyanDee vaarEm jEstaarO adee chooddaam .meelaanTi vaaLLa vallanE ee saiTulO 'kavita, vimarSa'anna padaalu pOyi gaaDida, tOkaveeruDu,daridrapu kavitalu, aSuddham laanTi mahattara padajaalaalu raajyamElutunnaay.maa iddari kaamenTlanannee vediki raayanDi allaanTi okka padam.avE ganuka vunTE kraanti gaari uutapadamaina 'moosukoni'pOtaam.
kraantigaari maaTalannee nEnu bhadraparichaanulEnDi.vaaTilni nEnu pablikggaa peDataanu appuDo chooddaam janaalu evaranTa vostaarO
aDDagOlu maaTalu meevi.sambandham vundiganukanE Sreelakshmi, baabuumOhan maaTa techchaanu.vaarini chinnavaaLLu,kampEr chEyadaganivaaLLani mee abhipraayamunnaTTundi andukE allaa pOlchakanDanaDigaaru.kaabaTTE aDigaanu vALLu meeinTikostE vaakilEstaaraani. indulO asambaddhamEmundi?anduvalla buddhi evarulEdanni adunnavaaLLaki meeru jeppakunDaanE telistundi
vinaayakamgaaruu, amma konDa kOna intE kaadu kavitalu raayaDaanikunDEvi.ippuDilaa raastE mEDamulu saaru vaarlandaroo kaakaa paDutunnaanani naa meena rechchipOgalru ainaa cheputaanu.mee kathalu chadivaanu.andulO modaTi kathalO meeru koddimandiki kRutaj~natalu cheppukonnaaru mee chEta raayinchinanduku.prEyasi priyuni prEma gurinchi gaDDipOcha chEta cheppincha joosina mee prayatnam abhinandaneeyam.adi mee modaTi rachana ani vaakya nirmaaNamtOnu,vishaya niroopaNatOnoo telustundi.appaTlO aa kathanu nEnu chadivunTE gyaranTeegaa konni sajeshan&s raasEvaaNNi meerannaTTu paajiTiv gaa.nijamaina TaalenT vunnavaaLLu eerOju gaakapOtE rEpainaa tama TaalenTunu velibuchchagalaru.gaanee assalu lEnivaaLLu elukatOlu laa EDAdulutikinaa antE.ivi vaari vaari toli rachanallO telisipOtundi.Sree smailee gaari modaTi kavitanu nirasinchina nEnu aaviDa 'aame'kavitalO raasina sajeshan&s chooDanDi.saumya raasina lajjaa anukaraNa kathalO aaviDakichchina sajeshan&s chooDanDi.raghOttama raavu gaari kavita chooDanDi.kavi gOparaaju gaari kavita chooDanDi.vochchina okka nijavaina vimarSakE chelarEgipOyE vaaLLu nErchukonEdi antantamaatramE.asalu meerelaa anukonTunnaaru ee saiTu maa valla kalushitamautOndani?gaaDida, tOkaveeruDu anna padaalu kalushitam gaadaa?avi meeku tagallEdani kalushitam gaadaa?
Saastri gaaru, maa vimarSalO kavitvapu lakshaNaalanu cheppakanE chebutunnaam. gamaninchi grahinchagaligE Orpu kaavaalantE. ikkaDa oha kavi tana kavita modaTa tallipai raasindani jeppi aa pai prEyasi pai raasaanani bukaayinchaaru.allaanTi vaariki meerenduku kankaNam kaTTukoni hitavu jepparu?enduku maa venTa paDutunnaaru?ainaa peddalaDigaaru gaabaTTi twaralO kavitvam gurinchi raastaanu
chivaragaa oka maaTa.nibaddhatalEni chOTa EkaLunnaa vyartham.akkaraku raani chuTTam laa mOtabaruvu.vyakti vEru kaLa vEru.rachaita taagubOtu kaavochchu gaanee adbhutamaina rachanalu chEyochchu.oka paaThakunigaa naakkaavalsindi atani rachana taagubOtaa kaada anna vishayam gaadu.ikkaDa gooDaa antE.vyaktigatangaa Sreesmailee evarO naaku teleedu.Saastri gaaru teleedu,snEha teleedu,kraanti teleedu. sO veeritO vyaktigatamaina kaamenT&sku doorangaanE vunToo vachchaanu.gaanee raanu raanu mee maaTalu vishayaanni doorangaa vunchEsi parsanal daaDiki tirugutOndi.gamaninchanDi.idi pramaadakaram.idi manalOni lEkitanaannE dappa telivini choopinchadu.prati kavitanoo pogiDiteeralanna ruululEnaTTE vimarSinchina prati vaarinee tiTTAlanna ruululEdu.kaaneesam ee vishayamainaa angeekaristaarani oka manishigaa talustaanu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 22, May 2005 10:17:21 PM IST
vAstav gArU
vastuvu pAtadeitE dAnnemchukunna dOsham rachayatadE tappa chadive pAThakuladi elA avutumdi.?annAru.
idekkaDi nyAyam. mI okkariki pAtadeina mAtrAnA amdarU mAnEyAlsimdEnA..emtO mamdi kottavALLupuTTukostAru.
komDa , kOna , vAgu , vamka , prEma , ammA , lapei ika kavitalE rAyakUDadA...kavitAvastuvuni nirNayimchE hakku kavidE mummATiki.. mIku nachchina nachchakapOyinA ...
pAtadA kottAdA peddadA chinnadA ani kAdu hRudayam kadilimchE E samGaTana ayinA kavitvam puTTistumdi.
A kavitvAnni A kONam numchE chUDAli. bAshA prayOgamlO BEdAlumDavachchu .
amdaru nishNAtulu kAru kadA .buDi buDi aDuguluvEsEvArini chEyichchi naDipimchE vidhamgA umDAli vimarSa. okkasAri anni vimarSalu chadavamDi...
imkokka vishayam ! mimmalni tiDitE mIru tiTTAlanukOvaDam mamchi paddati kAdu.. adi vALLakE cheppAlsimdi ani amTArEmO...imta raBasa avutumdani evarUhimchAru,,? mIkunna praNgNjA pATavAlu mI kavitallO chUpimchamDi. pAThakulani meppimchamdi. imkokaDi kavita kannA meruganipimchamDi.
ipaTikE ekkuva cheppAnu .
manaku I avakASAnnistunna I seiTu kalushitam chEyavaddu. idi mI okkarikE chebutunnA anukOkamDi.
imtaTito I charcha Api kottaSakAniki nAmdi palakamDi..
ALL THE BEST.
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 22, May 2005 5:38:39 PM IST
maMchi kavitani mEmu mechchukOlEdA? sajeShan&su ivvalEdA annAru?
aMtEgAni kavitvaM aMTE ellAvuMDAlO prAmANikaMgA, sAdOharaNagA vivaraNa ivvarannamATa.
pratibhAShaku vyAkaraNaM aMTU vuMdi. allAgE kavitvAnikikUDA nirdiShTameina sUtrAluvunnAyA?
dayachEsi teliyachEyaMDi. nErchukuMTAnu.
kAni mIru iMkAvAdananE poDigistUvuMTE mIkukUDA teliyaka cheppalEkO, lEkapOtE mIku telisinA vIDiki cheppEdEmiTi ani cheppakUDadanO nA abhyardhananu peDachevini peTtunnAranukOvalasivastuMdi.
pOnI kavitvam guriMchi vivaraNa ichchE pustakam vuMTE cheppaMDi. dorikitE koni chadivi AtaruvAtE chEtanavutE kavitvaM vrAstAnu.
I vebseiT nu saMpAdakulu chUsArO lEdO! help Desk kikUDA vrAsi vArinE aDagaMDi.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 22, May 2005 5:32:56 PM IST
ayyaa Saastrijee meerEmee kshamaapaNalu cheppanakkaralEdu.anduvalla kavitvaaniki origE upayOgamEmee lEdu.
Evannaaruu SreeSree raasinaa Seenayya raasina vishayaannE paTTinchukOvaalanaa?aitE inni rOjuloo Em chaduvutunnaaru?'manchi kavita'ni mEmu gamaninchalEdaa?mechchukOlEdaa?sajeshan&s ivvalEdaa?
havva enta guDDitanam ?mee mee (anTE ikkaDunna mottam kavula gumpu) kavitalni pogaDalEdani kaDupumanTE gaanee veeLLEm raasaarani chadivE nemmadi vundaa?
marEviTaDigaaru? patrikaa sampaadakulni illaa nilavEsi aDigaaranaa? ayyaa kaasta gamaninchanDi.swaati laanTi patrikallO vochchEvi 'kavitala'ni nEnu lekkinchanu.okavELa lekkinchi vimarSanu patriakalaku raasi pampina avi buTTadakhalayyaayi.meerannaTTE ee saiT valla abhipraayaalni ellaanTi eDiTings lEkunDaa buTTadakhalu gaakunDaa raasukOgalugutunnandukE maa abhipraayaalni sooTigaa chebutOndi.ee maatram tEDAnu telsukOkunDaa tiTTu kavitalu digutaaraa?ainaa oha mahaakavi nannaTTukoni 'gaaDida' 'tOka veeruDu' ani siggulEkunDA pilavagAlEndi nEnu kavitanu ghaaTugaa vimarSistE rOshaalu poDuchukostunnaay . mundu meelaanTi peddalu allaanTi vaariki cheppinchanDi 'buddhi'anTE EviTo.
vinaayakam saaru vaaru, 'E okariddarikO nachchaalaa' annaaru.chadivina vandamandilO maa laa baiTa paDEvaaLLu takkuvE.yadaartha vaadi lOkavirOdhi anna saameta meeku teliyakanDaa vunDadu.'kavitaa vastuvunenchukunE swEchCha kooDaa lEdaa' ani vaapOyaaru.mEmEmee ikkaDa 'kavitaa vastuvulu'ani lisTu peTTalEdE.raasina daaniki kaamenT raastunnaam. vastuvu paatadaitE daannenchukonna dOsham rachaitadi tappa chadivE paaThakuldi elaa avutundi?'EmiTO paityam 'annaaru. daanni tavikalu raastunnOLLaku cheppanDi baagaa atukutundi.
iha eDiTar gaaru tappulO kaalEsaaru, pakshapaatangaa vyavaharinchaaranna daanTlO ellaanTi sandEham lEdu.induvalla naaku telisEdEviTanTE ikkaDa maaTTADutunnaa vaaLLallOnE oharu eDiTarai vunDaali.lEkonTE anTa insTAn&T gaa aa kavita raavaDam daanni 'fram eDiTars Desk ' anna fuT nOT vEsi aamOdinchaDam kudardu.idi nijangaa avamaanakaram. saahityaannavapOSana paTTEsina goppavaaLLaki eDiTar ku vunDaalsina kaneesa dharmamaina pakshapaataraahityam gurinchi teleekapOvaDam ghOram. mari iha patrikalaku,ee saiTuku EviTi tEDA? ikkaDi Diskashan&sunu baTTi ee rachananu kavitala kyaaTagireelO vEstunnaanani prakaTinchina eDiTar gaaru EmEm faalO ayyaarO,EmEm artham jEsukonnaarO,vivarangaa raayaali.raasi teeraali.
iha mEDam snEhaagaarO help Desk nu choopinchaaru. akkaDaku raastE vishayam nirdhaaramautundanna nammakam naaku lEdu. eDiTar gaariki ikkaDi prati kaamenT nu faalO avagala teerika vunDunTE, vishayaanni nirdhaarinchagala teguvE vunDunTE nannu gaaDida, tOka veeruDu, daridrapu kavitalraasinaanani maaTTADina mahaakaviki kaLLem vEsunDaali. gaanee adi jaragalEdu. baT maapai anyaapadESangaa raasina tiTTukavitaku fuT nOT raasipeTTE teerika vundi.EviTidi?evarinaa chadivitE navvipOroo ee saiTu gurinchi?meeraa ee saiTu gurinchi kalavarinchi karigipOtunnOLLu?mee kuhakaalaku,kuTralaku upayOginchukonToo kavitvamanTE EviTO cheppaalani joostunna maa pai tiragabaDataaraa?idantaa pedda kuTra.vokka vishayam gamaninchukOnDi,mammalni tiTTi, maa pai kavitvaalu raasi, vaaTini prachurinchukoni tRupati paDE ee guNam avaguNam. tinnagaa sarichEsukOnDi.
ayyaa eDiTarjee,rachaitalu panikimaalina tiTTukavitalraasi vEstunTE,vaariki meeru sai anTuu ee saiTunu paNangaa peDutunnaaru.maLLee 'viSwamlOni teluguvaaLLani' kaluputOndani senTimenTal sTETmenTs .iha aapanDi.mooDurOjulnunchi ikkaDi prati kaamenT nu faalO ainavaaLLaki tappakunDaa telustundi evaru evarani?Em jEstunnaarani
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 22, May 2005 3:53:46 PM IST
lessa palikitiri SAstrigAru..
imtaTi viSAla prapamchamlo..
ennO kOTla Binna vargAla , viBinna manastatvAla madhya ,
E okariddarikO nachchAli..lEkumTE chetta anEstE elA..
AKariki kavitA vastuvunemchukunE svEchcha kUDA lEdA..rachayitalaki....EmiTO peityam..
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 22, May 2005 10:08:08 AM IST
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