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Articles: Poetry | | oka sandESam | |
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| cool bagane vundhi
inka manchi sarlamga arayalani try cheyandi
Posted by: Mr. gopi kiran naidu At: 29, May 2005 11:33:07 AM IST
kadilinchEsantagA lEdee kavita.paipechchu konni arthamkAni vaakyaalu
oka jeevamlaa ikalEka
vairAgyam modalayye
kOrukOni pradESAniki vachchi
EviTidi?dEnikavi viDigA vunnAyA vAkyAlu.kalipi chadivitE arthamgaakunDA vunnaay
sarkas mugisina taruvAta
bOnullO chErE jantuvullA
ee SmaSAnamlOni samAdhulu
avi
cheppabOyEdi intE
jeevitam
alpamani
andukE
nEnu ahAnni vadilEstunnaa
kavitanu sandESAlakanTE parsanal Desishan&s nu kan&vE chEyaDAniki vADukonTE bAgunTundi
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 24, May 2005 7:56:21 PM IST
baagundanDee .... manchi sandESamE .
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 24, May 2005 0:03:51 AM IST
mRutyuvu tO yuddhaM chEsi ani uMDaalEmO.. Emainaa baavuMdi kavita
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 23, May 2005 5:54:06 PM IST
chakkaTi saMdESaM
chivari nAlugulein&lU bAgunnAyi
mukhyaMgA Akhari leinu nAku chAlAbAgAnachchiMdi
nijaMgA ahAnni vadilEstE SAMtaMgA AlOchiMchE avakASaM kalugutuMdi
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 23, May 2005 5:45:29 PM IST
baagochchindi kavita !
'oka jeevam laa ika laeka..' ...tamaashaagaa undi :)
oka salahaa - ' vairaagyam modallayyae ' anaesi venTanae ' koarukoani pradaeSaaniki vachchi '.... incomplete phrase nu inkoa vaakyam toa kalapakunDaa independency vadili unDaalsindi. meeru and ani vaaDDaaniki try chesinaTTunnaaru kaaboalu.
oka abhipraayam - chivarloa ' ahaanni vadilaeddam ' annadi sariggaa fit kaalaedu. cause and effect kaastaa blur ayyindi.
aedi aemainaa chinna porapaaTlu vadilaestae manchigochchindi kavita ! keep writing madam !
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 23, May 2005 4:15:22 PM IST
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