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| It is really wonderful. Being a girl, I can understand what all you wished to say.
These many comments are due to the various meanings those simple words generate. One can perceive in the way one supposed to.
I will give a perfect 5 for this poem. Keep it up.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 11, Jun 2005 10:55:24 AM IST
chaalaa baagundanDee
inkaa raayanDi
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 24, May 2005 2:33:04 PM IST
avunu A Bayam umDAli E paneinA Sradda Bayam BaktulatonE chEyAli. idi ADa maga iddarikI vartistumdi.
ADu magADE.. tirigitE tappulEdu..
vADu magADu alAchEyyochchu..
nIvu ADadAnivi ilAnE umDAli..
ilAmTi samdarbaalalO ..mI svEchchaku aDDupaDE A kaTTubATlu durAchArAlu DhamkA bajAyimchi ChEdimchamDi... mI vemTa mEmumTAm...
sahRudayamtO...arthamchEsukunnAru..
mIru cheppina samGaTanalO I BAvam rAkUDadu ani nA aBiprAyam.
Thanks All the Best...
awaiting for ur next poetry....(not to criticize)
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 24, May 2005 6:41:15 AM IST
aMdarikee Thanks...
vinaayakaM gaaru ee kavita oka chinna pilla raMgulu vEstuMTE chUsi spaMdiMchi raasinadi. meeru cheppiMdi nijamE ayinaa vaaLLalO aa geeta daaTipOtuMdanna bhayaM inherent gaa uMDaTaM nEnu chUsaanu. aMdukE alaa raayaalsi vachchiMdi. aa chinna saMGaTana aadhaaraM gaa Saastrigaaru cheppinaTTu taraala aMtaraala kaalaMlO saMdigdhata chUpiMchaDaaniki prayat&niMchaanu.
Posted by: Mrs. Jyotsna Kumar Mantha At: 24, May 2005 0:39:33 AM IST
jyothsna gaaru,
raasina vidaanam baanE undi kaani kavita bhaava paramgaa nEnu vinaayakam gaaritO Ekeebhavistunnaa.
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 23, May 2005 11:57:50 PM IST
jyOtsna gArU ! bommalaki rangulEyuTa annadi oka kaLa.ikkaDa mIru nErpAlsimdi kramabaddam gA giridATakumDA ramgulEyaDam , Opika ,nErparitanam , meLakuvalu ,ramgula empika ,pOTIki taTTukunE parfekshan` itYaadivi.
imdulO girigIsukunE svaBAvam mIkelA anipimchimdi..
adoka parIksha..
mI mATavini haddulu cherapi ramgulu pulimi skUl keLLitE Emoutumdi.. AlOchimchamdi.
alA anipiste adi nirASAbAvam.. pillalaki alAnErpakamDi..
BAvaparamgA viBEdistunnA !
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 23, May 2005 6:15:18 PM IST
EmO konni konni paristhitulalO girigIsukunE batakAli - haddudATitE jarigE pariNAmAlanutaTTukonE dheiryam lEkapOyinappuDu
tarAla aMtarAlalO kAlaMlO jarugutunna mArpulalO IsaMdigdha mAnasikasthitini chUpiMchina tIrubAguMdi
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 23, May 2005 6:07:45 PM IST
kavita chaalaa baavuMdi kaanee anavasaraM gaa poDigiMchaarEmO anipiMchiMdi.kiraN gaari salahaalu baavunnaayi.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 23, May 2005 5:51:45 PM IST
kavita modalu baagundanDi.
mooDoa khanDika ae purpose serve chaesindi? deviation gaa anipistundi.
' naa talli naaku cheppalaedae '...ayitae andukae cheppakooDadanaa? cheppadalchukunna bhaavam loa balam loapinchindanDi. 'giri geesuku batakoddu ' anae maturity unDae amma ' maa amma naaku chepplaedu ' kadaa ani tappinchukunTae pontana unDadu kadaa? okae vyaktilo renDu vibhinna bhaavaalaanu vyaktam chaeyinchaDam sarigaa laedu anipistundi. gamaninchanDi meeru kooDaa.
naadoa chinna salahaa....manchi kavita manchi vastuvu teesukuni raayaalanae uddaeSyam abhinandinchadaggadi. kavita raasaeTappuDu vastuvu gurinchi dissect chaesi aloachinchanDi. oka clear perception aerpaDDaaka prayatninchanDi. kavita prati vaakyam loa adae flow continue avutundoa laedoa regular gaa check chaeyanDi. meeku apt gaa padaalu vaaDae skill undi. konchem jaagarta teesukunTae naa noaTitoa paaTu andari noaLLu mooyinchagalaru.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 23, May 2005 4:42:45 PM IST
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