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Articles: Poetry | | asamardhuDi anubhavaM | |
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| kiraN gAru, vAstav gAri kAmeMT chadivAka nAkO pedda DavuT vachchiMdi. AyanelA viSlEshiMchArO, alAgE mIru malichArA mI kavitani?
kavitalu elA rAstAru? padAlu elA pErustAru? O bhAvaM alA vachchi, padAlu pravAhaMlA rAlEdA? bhAvaM fasTu, bhAsha neksTu anEdi nA vyaktigatAbhiprAyaM. iMtavaraku vachchina Uhanu, taTTina padAlatO alA rAyaDamE tappiMchi iMta AlOchanE nAku kalagalEdu.
It is quite a good feeling to read this poem and the comments too.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 19, Jun 2005 3:39:36 PM IST
Kottaga sit lo ki vachha kasta telugu kavita lo
engili padadamani.
Ikkada kavita lu choostunte nenu pamarunni kadu parama pamarunni ani ardhami selavu teesukuntunna
Posted by: Mr. vihari vihari At: 27, May 2005 5:34:25 PM IST
Sastri gAru... Profile Delete chESArA? A pApam evaru mUTagaTTukunnAru?
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kiraN gAru....kavitani koddigA pAlish chEyalsindi!
Posted by: Mr. Vachaspathi V At: 27, May 2005 10:04:46 AM IST
yantamATannAru kiraNa kumARjI
sin&siyar efarT tO rAsina kavitakI rAyani kavitakI tEDA yanta vunTundanTE moguDiki prEmatO vaDDinchE bhAryakU, hOTellO vaDDakunnanta
koddimandiki rAyAlanna yAva tappinchi inkEvI vunDadu.adigUDA kavitvamanTEmiTO avagAhanatO gAdu 'vADu rayagAlEndi nEnu rAyalEnA'anna ahamtOnO, 'nEnu kavinahO'ani jeppukonE mEdhAvi pOjukO lEdoo rAstundEviTanna kanIsAvagAhana lEkunDA rAsE arbhakatanamO
illAnTi vALLu rAsEdantA inku kharchu rAtalE gAnI kavitalu gAvu
ippuDikkaDa nEnu dhATIgA kAmenTu rAsina vATillO ekkuva SAtam allAnTivE.vITiki vyangyamE gAnI nidAnapu vivaraNa anavasaram
mIlAnTi vAriki vivarangA rAstE O arthamundi.inku kharchu mahAprabhuvulaki rAstE nAku kILLanoppulu tappinchi vAri burra velagaDam asAdhyam
anchAta I kavita mIna nEnu rAsina kAmenTu sin&siyargaa rAsinde.nosalitO vekkirimpullEkunDA
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 26, May 2005 2:41:08 PM IST
kavitaloa bhaavukata baavundanDi kiraN gaaru !...sandarbham vachchindi kaabaTTi konni abhipraayaalu vaduldaamanukunnaa.
kavitaku abtstractness avasaram. kaanee bhaava prakaTana sacrifice chaesaentagaa unDa kooDadu. redundancy kooDaa emphatic tone loa vaaDitae adee o Teknik. manam ae kavitaa vastuvu ennukunnaamu eTuvanTi Teknik vaaDaalanukunnaamu anna daanni baTTi unTundi. kaabaTTi abstractness unTam vallanae kavitvam manchi bhaava prakaTana panimuTTu kaaballaedu.
idi oa frenDlee sajeshan. kaviki oka nirmaaNam avasaram anTae naenu konta vyatiraekinae. oka aaloachanaa vidhaananiki nirmaaNam avasaram kaani oka bhaava prakaTanaku nirmaaNam avasaram ani naenu anukoanu. okae nirmaaNam loa paDitae sRujanaatmakata debba tinae pramaadam undi. meeru oa level chaerukunnaaru. ika meeru chaeyaalsindi vibhinna prayoagaalu. aa pai careful selection of subject matter . suniSita kavitaa vastuvulanu cheelchi chenDaaDi vaeyinchukoavaDam. vachana kavitvam loa unna flexibility idi. mee sRujanaatmakata enta wild gaa veltae anta wild gaa vellochchu. meeru okasaari abstractness nunDi bayatakochchi kalaanni vidilchi chooDanDi. urumulu raalipaDitae aerukunTaam !
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 26, May 2005 2:28:38 PM IST
baavuMdi kiraN jee
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 26, May 2005 11:54:41 AM IST
1st dhi baaga nachindhandi....but endhuko incompletegaa anipisthunnayi
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 26, May 2005 6:38:27 AM IST
cheppAlanukonnadi sariggA vochchinaTTanipinchaDam lEdu
naa varakuu ikkaDa kluptatE aspashTAniki kAraNam
TaiTilnu paTTukoni kavitalOki digitE naakarthavayindi idee
vADina puvvu,enDina cheruvu,mustAbautunna vittu,asamarthuni anubhavam oka taragati chendinavi
gAli,kAki,nEla,gadigODaloka taragati
parimaLam , kalavaram , nissAram ,AkrOSam voka taragati
illA nAmavAchakAlu,kaaman naun&s ni,viSEshaNalni varsagA pErchina maanChi prayOgamanDI kiraNa kumArjee.really good poem
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 25, May 2005 6:44:06 PM IST
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