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| inkoka vishayam cheppaDam marichaa...abhyudaya kavitvam loa inkokaLLa baadhyata nu kavi gurtu chaestaaDae tappa annee tana nettipai vaesukuni ninaadaalivvaDu annaaru. ee baadhyataa raahityam vallanae abhyudaya kavitvam chaalaa chinna vayasuloanae samaadhi kaabaDindi. eduTi vaaDi baadha netti meeda vaesukoakunDaa kavitvam raayaDam loa baadhyata aemundi?....oka baala kaarmikunni paTTukuni ' baaboo ! nee paristhiti idee..neeku chokkaa laedu...neeku nikkar laedu....' anToo oka anaatha bikshagaaDini choosi ' baboo ! neevu snaanam chaeya laedu ...neevu aakalitoa unnaavu' ani cheptoo...pakka vaaLLaku ' aa pilloaDiki chokkaa laedu choosaaraa? aa bikshagaaDiki snaanaaniki sabbu laedu telusaa? ' anToo kavitvam raayaDam mahaa anTae ' fyaakTaree loa kaarmikuDu chemaTa toa chokkaa taDichipoayindi paapam ! polam loa raitu naagali dunnaDaaniki ennoa keloareela Sakti upayoagistunnaaDu ' laanTi kaLLaku kanipinchae vaastavaalu enni roajulu cheptoo gaDuputaaru?....ika ee baadhyataa raahityam vallanae kavitaa prapancham loa abhyudaya kavitvam palaayanam chittaginchindi.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 31, May 2005 12:50:03 PM IST
@Alok
maryaadatoa charcha kanTinyoo chaesina meeku unDabaTTalaeka istunna frenDlee sajeshan.....eppaTikee mee kavita meeru explain chaeyoddu. conceptual clarifications kaavaalanTae cheppochchu. kaanee vivaraNa maatram ivvaddu. mee praaNam poayina sarae !
meeru cheppina Sree Sree kavitalloa bhaadyataa raahityam aemundoa naakartham kaalaedu. meeru specific ga cheptae telusukunTaa.
ika abstractness anTae sarigga cheppukoavaalanTae naa uddaeSyam loa.... conrete expression kaanidi. idi ilaa anToo oka formula nu tayaaru chaesi abstractness nu nirvachinchaDam kashTam. ayitae pai cheppinaTTu concrete expression kaanidi abstractness ani avagaahana unTae chaalani naa nammakam. ippuDu oa Sree Sree kavita chooddaam.
narajaati charitra samastam
parapeeDana paraayaNatvam
narajaati charitra samastam
paraspara haraNoadyoagam
induloa unna abstractness nu gamaniddaam. asalu Sree Sree, maarks cheppina The history hitherto is the hostory of class struggle anna vishayaanni enta abstract gaa cheppaaDoa gamaninchanDi. ayitae induloa concelament aemee laedu. oka kavigaa oka vishayaanni prajalaku arthamayyae reetiloa artham chaeyinchae reetiloa kavi bhaadyata teesukoavaDam entoa avasaram. ayitae aa kramamaloa enta chandassu pai vaakya nirmaaNam pai enta pariSoadhana jaripinaa cheppaalsina vishayama paTla bhaadyata teesukoanaTTaitae kavita e laabhaanni chaekoorchadu. except to create an impression that ' ammoay ! veeDevaDoa evarikee artham kaakunDaa maaTlaaTTam loa ghanuDu ' ani. pai kavitaloa motta marks chaaritraka dRukpathaanni vanTa baTTinchaaDu Sree Sree. adi abstractness anTae. aemee pedda lekcharlu laevu. aemee pedda vivaraNalu laevu induloa. inkoa udaaharaNa istaa.
ataDu mogavaaDayyaaDu
loakam ninDaa chappaTlu
aame laechipoayindi
idi oka rakamaina abstractness . magatanam gurinchi enta vyangyangaa cheppaaloa cheppaDu kavi. kaevalam mooDu chinna phrases . induloa concealment gaani poDupu kathallaanTi vaakyaalu gaani aemee laevu mari.
ikkaDa artham chaesukoavaalsindi aemanTae degree of abstractness maarochchu. kavitaloa abstractness valla vachchae andam endukanTae paaTakunni matured gentleman gaa treat chaestundi. antae gaani telivi takkuva tingari raamuDilaa anukoadu. anTae kavita chadivaaka alaa Soonyam loa chooDa kooDadu. ika anduku kavi bhaadyataa raahityam toaDaitae paaThakuDiki aatma hatya minahaa vaerae gati aemee laedu.
abstractness Soabhanapu paDakapai parichina puvvullaa gumbhanangaa unDaali. andangaa unDaali. appuDae aa kavitaku oka saarthakam. inkaa chaalaa preliminary gaa explain chaestae viDamarichi cheppae joak ku konta abstract gaa cheppae joak ku unna taeDaaloa paaTakuDu aa abstractness nu entagaanoa enjaay chaestaadoa cheppalaem. adi kavitakoo vartistundi.
mari concrete expression Sudhda danDugaa? kaadu. idi oka style of expression Sree Sree elaa vaaDukunnaaaDoa chooDanDi
raa ! naestam , poadaam ! choodaam!
muvvannela jenDaa panDuga
raa ! naestam ! laedaam ! choodaam !
mana bhaarata jana saubhaagyam
aTuchooDu samudram naestam
harshaaniki paryaaya padam
svaatantryam vachchina sandarbhangaa raasina kavita idi. cheppukoaDaaniki idi mana svaatantryam gurinchi harshaanni vyakta parachaDamae. kaanee induloa padaala pondika vaakya nirmaaNam maamulugaa telisina vishayaannae paaTakuDu uttejitangaa aanandangaa feel chaeyinchae prayatnam idi.
ika mee kavitakostae induloa naaku nijanga nachchindi ' koapaaniki munipanTiki madhya khaidee' anna expression tappa vaerae vaakyaalu peddaga impress chaeyalaedu. aemee anukoavaddu. meeru manchi Srama peTTi unDavachchu. mohamaaTam laekunDaa cheptunnaa. abstarctness paaTakunni matured gentleman gaanae treat chaeyaali. kaanee ilaa kaadu. ayitae ilaanTi kavitalu koakollalu. endukanTae ee kavita raayaDam kooDaa chaalaa suluvu. intaku mundu mee kavita choosi spontaneous gaa oa chinna kavita raasaanu gamaninchanDi.(daya chaesi aedo goppa cheppukoaDaaniki id prastaavistunnaa ani maatram anukoakanDi. ilaa bhaadyataa laekunDaa kavitalu raayaDam enta suluvoa cheptunnaa. ) enduku cheptunnaananTae kaviki bhaadyata laeka poavaDam valla vachchae expression idi. idugoa paaThakuDu meeru cheppina vishayam toa convince kaapoate mee meDa teggostaa ani evarannaa anTae elaa raastaamu?...laedaa paaThakuDiki neevu cheppaalsina vishayam enta chakkagaa viSadeekaristae anni lakshalu istaamu anTae elaa raastaaroa anta bhaadyata unDaali kaviki. adae conviction unDaali kaviki. kavi laanae kaadu. oka maanavuDilaa.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 31, May 2005 3:07:19 AM IST
indulO kavitvam lEkapOvaDam gurinchi konni praSnalu
kAnkrIT nes anTE kAkinADa subbayya hOTElu vaDDanannAru gadaa
bhuutAnni yaj~nOpavItAnni
vaiplavya gItAnni nEnu
idi yE mAtram kAnkrIT ekspreshan kAdu. alAgani kansIlmenT lEdu.alAgani absTrAkT kAdu.idE kETagirI kavitvamO/imEjarIyO cheppanDi
nippulu chimmukonTuu
ningikegiritE
nibiDAScharyamtO vIrE
netturu kakkukonTuu
nEla rAlitE
nirdAkshiNyangA vIrE
I kavitaku TaiTil aah ! kavitalO vADinavannInon concrete expressionslO undi.konnisArlu kavitalO DairekTugA pErkOnivATini TaiTillO unchaDam vADuka.gAnI I kavitalO allAnTidi kUDA pATinchalEdu.maralAnTappuDu I kavitanu elA vargIkarinchaDam ?paikavitalO kavitvam pAlenta?indulO kavi bAdhyata yenta vundi yenta lEdu?
kavitalO nUtanatvam lEdannAru.niSasundari swEdabinduvuku Alchippa anna prayOgam vErevarinA vADDam chUDalEdu.sO indulO koddigA nUtanatvam vundani nEnanTAnu.
bhAvakavitallO kavi elAnTi bAdhyata vahistADu?abhyudaya kavitallO kUDA kavi inkokaLLa bAdhyatalni gurtinchi gurtuchEstADEgAnI annI tana nettipai vEsukoni ninAdAlivvaDu.
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 30, May 2005 10:24:58 AM IST
kiraN gaaru ! u r close to the point
abstractness ku concealment ku oka fine difference undi. concreteness in expression loa vistari vaesi vaDDinchae mundu ( kaakinaaDa subbayya hoaTallo maadiri ) aa aiTam aenToa cheppi maree vaDDIstoo poavaDam. abstarct form of expression and conrete form of expression both are styles of communication in poetry . manam ennukunna kavitaa vastuvu baTTi kavitaa Silpam baTTi manam ae vidhaannainaa ennukovachchu. abstract form of expression eppuDoo sari kaaballaedu. concrete expression nu even manamanukune redundancy nu kooDaa jaagartagaa vaaDukunTae kavitaloa upayoaginchukoavachchu. manaku Sree Sree kavitalloa redundancy mariyu konni choaTla concrete expressions agupaDtaayi. ayitae veeTini emphatic tone aa vaaDutoo Sree Sree vaaDukunnaDu.
ika prastutaaniki manamundunna kavita choostae ...induloa intaku mundu naenu cheppinaTTu nootanatvam gaani kavi yokka bhaadyataa yutamaina kRushi aemee laedu. kaapoatae ee limited TP world loa vachchae kavitalatoa poalchi choostae variety gaa anipistundi. antae kaani ee sandarbhaanni vadili choostae kavitvam ani cheppukoadagindi aemee laedu. ilaanTi sambandham laekunDaa...poDupu kathalu chikku muDulu vaesinaTTu unna kavitalu koakollalu. 1990s nunDi paaThakunni gandara goaLa parichi kavitvam anTae entoa chemaToaDchi artham chaesukoavaalsindi gaa project chaeyaDam modalayyindi. prati telugu paaThakuniki daggaragaa vastunna vachana kavitvaanni paaSchaatya samskRuti snatch chaesae paroaksha prayatnamidi. idi artham chaesukoaDaaniki nijaaniki ennoaa laibraree pustakaalu chadavaalsina avasaram ledu. of course oka vaeLa idi kavita ani anTae alaa chaeyaalsi vachchaedaemoa !. ae saahitee vimarSa ayinaa ae kavitva viluvainaa oka saamaajika sandarbham baaTTi oka nirdushTa paristhitulanu baTTi unTundi unDaali annadi vaastavam. alaagani...ee sandabham loa eduTi vaaLLa ignorance nu mana advantage gaa maluchukuni negguku raavaalani choosi deeniloa kavitaa vilualu unnaayani ee kavita meeda pratyaeka charcha peTTaDam sari ayindi kaadu ani naa abhipraayam.
ika ee saiT loa tilak lu Sree Sree lu laeru. oka vaastava loakaanni gamaninchi literary moral police gaa kaakunDaa responsible literary critique gaa unTae kavitvam meeda abhi ruchi unna ae okkaroa inspire ayyi encouraged gaa feel ayitae oka vimarSakuDiki ( ID gurinchi kaadu ) anta kanTae aanandam unDadu.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 29, May 2005 1:53:52 AM IST
arE alA veLLochchAnO lEdo mIriddarU charchanu kanTinyuu jEsArE. baagundi
kiraNajI mIru jUpistunna inTaresTulO padOvantu ikkaDa tiTTukavitalrAsEvALLu chuupistE mA prayatnam saksessainaTTE
vEliki chuTTukonna
pachchaTi ungaram
anEdaanTlOnE pedda kluu vundani cheppA.idi TIjar kavita gAdu .rAvugAru AmbigviTI annAru gAnI adi kUDA lEdani cheputunnA.endukanTE renDO khanDikalOni 'pachchaTi'anna ekspreshan cheerakongu anna uuhani, pedavi anna uuhani koTTipArEstundi.anTE rIDar konchem SraddhapeDitE iTTE telisipOtundi
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 28, May 2005 2:26:05 PM IST
namastE kiraN jI
adEviTi alA annAru?I kavitalO kAnkrIT bhAvAlu lEvA?
niSAsundari
swEdabinduvuki
Alchippa
I kavitalO absTrAkT lEdani mIroppukonnAru.pai vAkyAlni chadavagAnE mIkelAnTi chitraNa tOchakapOte absTrAkT nessavutundi.ganuka pai ekspreshan chadavagAnE mIkelA anipinchindO cheppanDi.anTe oka dRuSyam AvishkarimpabaDDam vagairA
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 28, May 2005 1:49:42 PM IST
salImjI mIru kUDA poyeTrI pipAsilA agupaDtunnAru.adEdO linkunu paTTukochchAranTE kavitvam gurinchi yanta chadivArO ani Uhinchochchu.mIru kUDA I DiskashanlO pArTisipET jEstE bAgunTadi
pleej
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 28, May 2005 12:42:58 PM IST
Sorry to barge in here. I have an off the topic comment.
'Posted by: Mr. vimarsakuDu vimarsakuDu At: 27, May 2005 4:41:23 PM IST'
VimarSakuDu garu,
When you directly pick up lines from an article, it would be nice if you give reference to that article and author. You are a critic, you should know better.
http://teenwriting.about.com/gi/dynamic/offsite.htm?site=http://webster.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/abstract.htm
Have a nice discussion and weekend :-)
Enjoy!
Posted by: Saleem At: 28, May 2005 11:25:32 AM IST
ayyA puTrEvujI meerrAsindi kavitvamanukonTE jAlipaDDamE taruvAya.Saili, SilpamanTE EviTo telIkonDAnE 'kavitvam' rAstunnAranTE iha Em cheppEdi?
raavugAru absTrAkT gurinchi ejrA paunD mATTADutU
'Go in fear of abstractions…the natural object is always the adequate symbol'anannADu.anTE sahajamaina vastuvuleppuDuu spashTamaina chitraNalE.udAharaNaku
pOgoTTukOvaDameppuDuu nAdE
mArpula prasthAnamlO
marapu kUDA nAdE ( okAnoka anuvAdam )
ikkaDa kavi Em pOgoTTukonnADO Em mArpulaku lOnayyADO Em marchipOyADO telIdu.EdAnikI spashTamaina vivaraNa lEdu.annI kaaman naun&sE.sO iddI absTrAkT kavitanTE
I rakangA nA kavitalO yekkaDEkkaDa absTrAkT vAkyAlunnAyO AndhrAjI payinT auT chEstE baagunDu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 28, May 2005 10:21:54 AM IST
idi chadivaekaa naenasalu telugu marachipoayaena,
naaku telugu asalaerada ani sandaehamloapaDDaanu
kavitwam maaTa asalae marchaenu.
kavitwam anTae idi chusi naerchukoavalaemoa
ee Silpam aaemiToa eppuDu vinalaedae.antaa ayoamayam
Posted by: Mr. venkataramayya putrevu At: 27, May 2005 7:47:50 PM IST
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