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Articles: Poetry | | kAluva BAshpAlu | |
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There was a mistake in my comment.
(Hence the content is modified.)
Central idea of the poem is good.
But, please use the word 'baashpam' ('baa' - alpa praaNa) but not 'bhaashpam' ( not 'bhaa' - mahaapraaNa)
This 'popular' spelling mistake is perhaps the contribution of some commercial & 'self-appointed'
grammarians & novel writers of yesteryears.
Sindhooram (wrong) for Sindooram is one more such 'popularised' mistake!
Hope this suggestion will be heeded to.
Hoping to read more poetry from the author,
Satya Rama Prasad
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 9, Jul 2005 0:31:31 AM IST
Central idea is very good.
But plese use the word 'baashpam' but not ''bhaashpam'. It is small 'bha'- not big 'bha'
Please take the suggestion positively!
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 8, Jul 2005 7:10:07 PM IST
impu kampula gurinchi baagaanE raasaaru :)
Posted by: Mrs. ψ శకి౨ ψ At: 1, Jun 2005 8:02:07 AM IST
habbE nachchalEdu.dInTlO kavitvam lEdu vinAyakamjI
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 31, May 2005 12:01:55 PM IST
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