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Articles: Poetry | | asthitva vEdana | |
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| Dear vimarSakuDu gaaru,
mee kavita baagundi.
aitE,
'asthi' = bone (emuka) with pedda aksharam/mahaa praaNam (as in 'ratha'; 'artha' etc.)
Hence 'asthitwam' is possessing bones - which is the feature of all animals too!
'asti' = it is/there is
Hence 'astitwam' (with small letter - alpa praaNa) is having/retaining one' own individuality/personality. This is your 'bone of
contention' Am I right?
Hence, 'astitwa' is correct, but not 'asthitwa'.
This is suggested to you with a positive approach.
I saw another title of some other author in tp : 'bhaashpa' ; sorry, it is
'baashpa'.
How nice it would be if all of us care for spellings of 'FREQUENTLY USED WORDS' ?
'vimarSa' need not be 'verbal attack' & randhra anvEshana. That is not my mission please!
Any way, one of my early 'vimarSa's is addressed to a vimarSakudu! What a coincidence!
Once I get the facility of telugu script, we will do our vimarSas in 'teTa telugu'.
By, for the time being.
Yours
Satya Rama Prasad
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 8, Jul 2005 7:03:01 PM IST
porabaDDaaru vimarSakuDu gaaruu. tappulu paTTaDam naa uddaeSyam kaadu. naaku amta saamardhyamuu laedu. eTochchii naenu vishayam etti chuupinademduku amTae manam Edainaa raasinappuDu daanini chadivina prativaaruu ardham chaesukoevaali amtae gaani komdariki anumaanaalu ( naaku vachchinaTlugaa ) raakuuDadu. oppukumTaaraa. miiru gaani naenu gaani Edoe raayaDam adi chadivina vaaru diini bhaavam EmiTii ani manani aDagaDam jarigimdaa aa kavita pasalaenidae ani ( naa) abhipraayam
amtae
ikkaDa oka chinna udaaharaNa cheppaalanipistoemdi.
poetanaa SriinaadhuDuu bavamarudulu ani cheppukoevaDam kaddu. nijamaa kaadaa anaedi aprastutam
okasaari SriinaadhuDu poetana raasina Sirikin cheppaDu padyaanni vimarSimchaeDuTa. aitae aa vimarSaloe bhaavaanikunna sahajatvaanni maatramae vimarSimchaeDaTa. alaagae naenu kuuDaa mii kavitaloe konni poelikala sahajatvaanni anumaanimchaenu amtae. naaku alaagae anipistumdi anaedi saraina samaadhaanam kaanaeradu kadaa. EmamTaaru??
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 11, Jun 2005 10:10:22 PM IST
vIru munigindEmiTO valachindEviTO cheppanDI. ganga rambha gAkapOtE appuDu mATTADudAm
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 10, Jun 2005 6:06:37 PM IST
taanu munigimdi gamga taanu valachimdi rambha
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 10, Jun 2005 2:00:05 PM IST
vuTTikekagaralEnamma ani vUrikE annArA vimarSak
rAjU rAjU gArU
mIrU kolli venkaT gAru vokkaTE abhiprAyallO.bAgundi.parAyi dESAllOni teluguvALLu tama bhAsha marchipOgUDadani tamakunna limiTslO kavitalrAstunnArannAru. 'bAgundi' 'chAlA bAgundi' anEstE vAri j~nAnam perugutundA? lEdU 'idi kavitvam gAdu, idi bhAsha gAdu, illA rAyakUDadu, idi chadavanDi' ani chepitE perugutundA?vochchE vokaTI arA nijavaina vimarSalakE allA bediri pAripOtE iha vALLa 'profeshanalijam ' prayOjanamEviTi?vudyOgAllO vimarSalunDavA?akkaDa manasu lEkunDAnE panjEstArA?bAsu tiDitE manasu gAyapaDadA?bAsu tiTTEdantA mana cheDDa kOsamEnA?
ikkaDa koddimandi chitramaina mATalrAsi dAnni vimarSalani bhramistunTAru.'mIru vADina ka kha ga gha anna hrasvAlu adbhutangA vunnAy ' anO 'prati modaTaksharam va tO modaleTTi prati chivaraksharam ga tO muginchAru.idi mI bhAshASaktiki egjAmpu'lanO, 'mAnchi bhAvAnni nokki gontulOki dinchA'ranO.illA vintagA analasissulu jEstunTAru.vATilni chadivESi 'ahO manam rAsindi jasTu kavitagAdu pEdda prayOgamani'murisi mUrchalu pOtunTAru.illAnTi lollAy vimarSalaku nEnu gUDA dUramE.
aDakkunTE ammainA peTTadu.avunA kAdA?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 9, Jun 2005 9:38:57 PM IST
bhaashaabhimaanaanni chaaTukoMdiki chaalaa prakriyalu ee saiTlO unnayannaaru. kaakapOtE bhaashalO/ kavitvaM lO kaasta DokkaSuddhi unnavaaLLu (I say Creamy-Layer of TP-Browsers) iMdulO uMTaaranna uddESyaM tO nE outsaahikulu iMdulo EdO raayaTaaniki prayatnistE, meeru bedaragoTTEsElaa vimarsalu raayavaDaM guruMchE, nEnayinaa, kolli veMkaT gaarayinaa (vaarini ardhaM chEsukOvaTaM lO if I am not wrong ) anEdi
Posted by: Raju Raju At: 9, Jun 2005 4:54:37 PM IST
Mr Vimarsak,
Telugu movies also make jokes on 'DARK/Black' people, 'Fat' people and other handicap people.
Do you think those people are responsible for Telugu movie jokes?
I hope you have already got the message, that we all appreciate your knowledge and that should not give you right to criticize the people to the extent that people will be discouraged by your comments.
You may or may not realize that speaking Telugu is becoming rare in lot of families. Let us all appreciate the fact that some people are taking time to login to this site and trying to write in Telugu. Finally pls. realize lot of people here who are writing poetry is to express their feelings in their mother tongue and most of them are hardly studied Telugu beyond Intermediate and most of them are making a living in different professions.
Posted by: Mr. Venkat Kolli At: 9, Jun 2005 11:07:43 AM IST
mimmalni evaroo vimarsiMcha lEnaMta baagaa raasaaru. telugu meeda gaanee kavitvam meeda gaanee meekunna paTTunu evaroo Emee analEru.
ika pOtE let me respond to each line you wrote (you are free to reject my observations. kolimi lO inumu debbalu tinitini soodigaa tayaaravutuMdi, poDavaDaaniki veelugaa.
oMTari kaakini (aMdunaa kareMTu teege meeda) choosthE jaalEstuMdi. kaanee manamadhyaki vachchi adi chEsE gOla maaTemiTi?
koDavaLLu chEsE gaayaalu sarE. paapaM telugu meeda abhimaanaM koddhee (abhimaanaM telugumeedayinaa kavitvaM meedayinaa or Mix and Match of both) raayaTam meeda aasakti choopE vaaLLaki 'telugulOnoo kavitvaM lOnoo nipuNulu' chEsE gayaalamaaTEmiTi?
appuDappuDu... paaripOvaalanipistuMdi. nijamE deeply-hurt ayina chaalaa maMdiki TP lOnuMchE paaripOlanipiMchavachchu
chivarigaa
bhaaSha meedaa kavitvaM meedaa adbhutamayina paTTu saadhiMchinavaarE raayaalee aMTe asalu evariki paTTu vunnadO nirNayiMchEdi evaru?
You may criticize-to-correct. But plz don't frighten others. Showing interest in Telugu is becoming a rare trait. Almost all corporate schools in AP are penalizing their students if caught red-handed while speaking telugu during their school hours.
Posted by: Raju Raju At: 6, Jun 2005 12:56:52 PM IST
saarii maLLii vachcinamduku.
puliki buvvagaa poevaboeyina goevu tanalaegaku paalivvaDaaniki vachchimdi ani kadha. mari aagoevu praSaamtamgaanae svaamtana chittayai paalichchi umTumdaa anaedi pedda koDavali saijuloe unna praSna.
ennoe iDumula paDutunna paDati aakonna chinnaariki sthanyamichchaeTappuDu praSaamtata pomdae umTumdaa anaedi maroe koDavali?? :):)
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 3, Jun 2005 12:36:06 PM IST
baagumdi. kaanii konni upamaanaalu...........
praSnala koDavaLLu prayoegam chaalaa baagumdi.
upamaanam advitiiyamgaa umTae aa kavitvam padi kaalaalu nilustumdi anaedi naa abhipraayam (maatramae)
udaaharaNaki karemTu tiigelapai kaaki maatramae kuurchumTumdaa. vaerae pakshulaeviikuurchoevaa, pillaku paalistunnappuDu goemaataekaadu Emaatainaa praSaamtamgaa umDaalsina avasaram umTumdaa ani evarikainaa anumaanam vachchimdoe paDina Srama amtaa vRudhaa ainaTlae kadaa.
kaevalam naa abhipraayamae sumaa.
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 3, Jun 2005 12:32:26 PM IST
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