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manassAkshi...
manaSSAntitO vibhEedinchindi !
Is something is penetrative.
mI bhAvAniki nAdoka mugimpu:
hattukunna hRudayamE...
kattipaTTukOgaladu.
Posted by: Mr. Vachaspathi V At: 3, Jun 2005 10:07:26 AM IST
vastav what u said is what I want to convey..
may be I didnt place the words well.
rOjukO kavita rAdu..ika maLLI imta tIrika eppuDu dorakaali....
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 3, Jun 2005 0:11:00 AM IST
AmdhruDu gAru ! ikkattu lESameinA ani emdukannAnani praSna..?. imta cheppi ani kUDA annAru kadA..imta kashTAlu anuBavimchEsA..ani chepppukumTU vachchimdi..ika kashTapaDalEnu bAdha paDalEnu..jarigEdEdo jarigipOyimdi..ippuDu nAkavasaram AdhAram ..eTuvamTidi..? lESameinA ikkaTTu ku kUDA paritapimchE hRudayam.. Ame kidi chAlA avasaram..ika EmAtram ikkaTlaku taTTukOlEnu Opika lEdu.. ani rachayatagA nA samAdhAnam.
dear friends
Thanks for all the comments
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 2, Jun 2005 8:14:55 PM IST
rOjukO kavit rAyAlani vratam peTTukonnaTlu anipistUndi nAku
nO prAblem
nAku modaTa nachchina vishayam pErAgrAphing .kalAgApulagangA rAsE kotta kavulakanTE mIru ennO reTlu merugu.anchAta mIru kavitalni (ikkaDivO, baiTivO)bAgA fAlO ayyAranEdi telstUndi
chivari sTAnjAlO AndhrAjI kan&fyUshan ku gurainaTlu kanapaDtOndi.
kashTAlu
lESamainA akkuna chErchukOnE
AdhAram kAvali
anunDAlsindi.lESam paikeLLi kashTAla pakkana kUrchODAmtO bhAvam mottam egiripOyindi.sO vinAyakamjI akkaDidAkA sariggA vochchina pErAgrAphing ikkaDenduku pOyinaTTu.tondarapaDi kAvochchu
nimpAdigA rAyanDi.nElalu samvatsarAlu rAyakapOyinA parlEdu kadilinchE kavita vokkaTi rAsinA janma dhanyam
mIlO spArkunna sangati ippuDandarikI telsindi kAbaTTi adE panigA kikku koTTi dAni masibArchakanDi.appuDappuDuu banDiki OvarAyiling kAvAligA
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 2, Jun 2005 8:05:30 PM IST
baagundi....
ikkaTlu laeSamainaa....alaa endukannaaru?...inta cheppi kooDaa ikkaTlu laeSamaenaa? ( expression sangati kaadu )
chaalaa mandi manchi kavitaa pravaaham own chaesukunnaa....kavitaa vastuvu nu address chaeyaDam loa consistency koalpoatunnaaru. modaTi khanDikaloa emannaaDoa kavi chivari varakoo adae anaali. ee tappu chaalaa mandi chaesae tappugaa kanipistundi ikkaDunna kavitalloa. expression koasam kavitaa vastuvunu wrong gaa address chaeyoddu. cheppadalchukunna daanTloa consistency laenappuDu elaa cheppinaa laabham unDadu kadaa? paaTakuDu aahaa...bhalae undi expression anTaaDu gaani...meeru chepptunna vishayaanni sariggaa aakaLimpu chaesukunTunnaaDaa annadi praSna.
kaanee vinaayakam gaaru...meeloa manchi flow undi. kinda vi vi cheppinaTTu old expressions anna maaTa konta varaku vaastavame. kavita mottam nootanatvam unDaalanTae chaalaa edagaali. inta varaku paerukunnaa kavitaa sravantiloa unna bhaavaala bhaavukatala prabhaavama toaTae kavita modalu peDtaamu. meeru ennoa kavitalu chadivitae tappa ee expression gurinchi avagaahana raalaedu karekTaa? edigae kramam loanae improvement chaesukunTaamu. kaabaTTi inkaa marintagaa edagaalanTae inkaa serious gaa meeru vimarSinchukoanDi. saraenaa?
tappaka adbhutangaa raastaaru meeru. vaastavaaniki ikkaDa vimarSa raastunna naenu inta baagaa raayagalanaa anTae sandaehamae....
naaku toachina frenDlee salahaa idi.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 2, Jun 2005 6:52:39 PM IST
EXCELLENT vinaayakam gaaru !!
cheera kappina dEhaanni
chigurulu choopeDutundi !!
ikkaTlu lESamainaa
akkuna chErchukonE
Adhaaram kaavaali !!
sooparanDi manasuku hattukonElaavundi
keep writing
Posted by: Mrs. ψ శకి౨ ψ At: 2, Jun 2005 2:11:25 PM IST
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