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Articles: Poetry | | paaThakula samasya | |
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| kavitvam lO ettipoDupuloo, veTakaaraaloo eenaaTivikaadu. kavitvam puTTinappaTinuMchE unnaayi. tenaaliraamakRiShNuDu tana tOTi (pOTee) kavini veTakaaraM chEsina padyaMlO konnipadaalu..
'emidini sepitivi kapitamu, ummetakayatini sepitO, veripuchakayadini sepitO' (anToo kaavaalanE vattuloo dheerghaaloo teesEsi vekkiriMchaaDu). aa veTakaaraaniki guri ayinadi peddana. kaanee tanavekkiriMpuki guri ayina vaaLLa kaavyaalu kooDaa vaMdala ELLa tarabadi nilabaDDayi. aMchEta kEvalam okariddari vekkiriMtalu evarinee Disqualify chEyajaalavu
Posted by: Raju Raju At: 6, Jun 2005 3:06:30 PM IST
i too agree with andhrudu gaaru.
vimarSa anEdi eduTa vaari porapaaTunu sutimettagaa etti chupEdi gaa vunDaali gaani mana chIpu buddi bayaTa peTTEdi gaa vunDakUDadu.
ika kavita vishayaaniki vastE phannigaa baavundi.
Posted by: Mrs. manvita manvita At: 6, Jun 2005 11:31:53 AM IST
:).....
chivaragaa paaTakuDi samasya baavundi. balavantangaa kavitvam vinipinchae kaviki balavantangaa madhyaloa vachchi gontu nokki vimarSalu poasi identity prove chaesukoavaalanukunae vimarSakuDiki madhya paaTakuDi manoagatam baavundi.
paapam gunDe gontuloaki vachchinappuDae kavitvam raayaalanukae kavi nijaayitee kallavaaDani kadanDee ? ....alaanTi vaallanu encourage chaeyaali. aedoa ubusupoaka kavitvam raastae anaali gaani...ika vimarSakuDanTae ( ID kaadu ) tanu cheppae vimarSa chempa debba laa unDaali ani koarukoakooDadu. elaa ayinaa sarae noppinchae cheptaanu anTae ika anduloa oka aham tappa vimarSa unDadu. alaa ani vimarSa vennela kurisinaTTae unDaballaedu. tana vimarSa paaTakuDi requirements nu dRushTiloa peTTukuni deergha kaalikam loa bhaashaa abhivRuddhi ki sambandhinchina toaDpaaTu nu dRushTiloa peTTukuni baadhyataa yutangaa viSlaeshincha galagaali. paaTakuDiki oka kavita elaa chadavaaloa naerpinchi kaviki oka kavita elaa raayaaloa cheppagaliginavaaDu manchi vimarSakuDu ( ID kaadu ). alaagae kaviki conviction avasaram. baadhyata avasaram. ivaevee laekunDaa eduTi vaaLLa jeevitaalatoa chelaagaaTam aaDDam tappu.
style baagaa paTTaaru gaani....konchem padaala pondika improve chaesi unTae vyangyam inkaa baagaa vachchaedi.
mari inta pedda kaamenT raasina nannu joo, sarkas, myoojiyam, laibraree, ....aedi disaiD chaesaaru? :)
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 4, Jun 2005 10:52:37 AM IST
paramachittu chetta tukku
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 3, Jun 2005 2:54:37 PM IST
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