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nidrapaTTakapOvaDamannadi bhUmmIda pratokkarikI anubhavamayyEdi.mI sOdaruniki kAkapovaDam gurinchi nE cheppalEnu mI anubhavAlni inkokariki kUDA kaliginchAlanTE A anubhavamlO lOtulni chUDagalagAli.A lOtuni vIlainanta simpulugA sTraiT gA cheppagalgAli.antE kavitvam gurtunchukOnDi kavitvam dwArA mIru chadivEvALLanu chErAlanukontunnAru (nAkOsam rAsukonTAnanE vitanDavAdulaku sAnubhUti prakaTinchakanDA vunDalEnu).anTE mIru pAThakulni dRushTilO vunchukoni vIlainanta jeneralgA rAyAli.lEdU krishNaSAstrilA mI bAdhanu prajala bAdha chEyagalgAli.aTu iTu gAkunDa madhyana nilabaDitEnE chikku bhAshakunna Sakti exgjibTTaidE kavitvamlO.vyAsAlu, kathalu bhAshA Saktini pUrtigA chUyinchalEvu.vATilO vunna vivaraNalu, viSEshaNAlu mI dRushTini asalu vishayam nunDi pakkadAri paTTinchE avakASam vundi.nAku konnisArlu vyAsAlu chadUtunTE brAkeTlu, fuT nOTlu chadivi chadivi intakI nEnekkaDunnAnanE anumAnAlochchina sandarbhAlunnAy.gAnI kavitvamlO allAnTi vankadArlaku avakASam lEdu.andukanE 'sUTigA' cheppanDani mottukonEdi.kavitvamlO bhAsha bhAvAnni kyArI chEyAlEgAni bhUstApitam chEyyakUDadu.bhAshaku aksharAla parimitulunnaTTE padAla korata gUDA vunTundi.konnisArlu bhAvAlaku tagina padAlu dorakavu.dorikinA efekTiv gA vunDavu.chUDanDi vyAsakartaku, kathA rachaitalaku lEni enni kashTAlu kaviki.inni edurItalunchukoni 'kavitvam 'rAsEstunnAmanE vIraSikhAmaNualku Em cheppagalam? nEnelA cheputAnani aDigAru. nE cheppadalchukonnadi appuDE cheppEsAnugA.iha maLLI rAyaDamenduku?

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 9, Jun 2005 8:54:30 PM IST

So ade bhaavaanni miivamtu miiru anubhavimchAru aa anubhavam tIvrata - bhaasha / bhaava vyaktiikaraNanu baTTi chadivevaaDu anubhuti chemdutaaDu amTaaru mii richhina udaaharaNalo - it is simple and straight nenu aadamarachi nidrimchaTam , nidrapaTTaka tannukunna rojulu vunnayi kaabaTTi , ardhamoutumdi eite ... nidrapaTTakapovaTam amTe emiTo teliyani naa sodaruni ki ... ide kavita amte tIvrata kaligimcha leka povachhu - nenu bhaasha / bhaava vyaktiikaraNanu tobaaTu mii anubhavam , aalochana dRukpadham mIde mIru chadivedi aadhaarapaDutumdi amTaanu- -- any way * premikulu prakruti voDilo samaaga mavaTaanni elA vokarikokaru prerepimchukumTAru , preraNaku kaaraNam , saamgatyam lekumTe aa preraNalE vedanalavutayi * miiru cheppamDi elacheputaaro - I am not telling I wrote 'THE BEST POEM ' trying to say u didn't think in this way ... After my explanation ... tell me is it giving the same meaning or need modifications ... if so what kind of...

Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 8, Jun 2005 9:33:46 PM IST

bhalEgaDigAru tiragarAstunnAnanTE adE bhAvAnni nA vantu nEnu anubhavinchE rAstunnAnanEgA artham idE kavitaku nA varshan rAsAnu.dAnni mIranubhavinchalEdemO.saampil kinda ikkaDO kavitanu ichchAnu.dAni gurinchi mIrelA fIlayyaranaDigAnu.dAni gurinchi rAyalEdenduku? vokkaTi gurtunchukOnDi mInunDi kavitanu viDadIsukoni chUsinnADE vimarSallOni asalu vishayamarthamautundi

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 8, Jun 2005 9:03:16 PM IST

mIanubhavam imkokaLLaku kUDA alagE kalagalanukOvaDam chuste jaalEstumdi ... ----------------------------------------------- alA eite alaamTi anubhavam kalagakumDAnE , verEvALLa kavitalanu mIru elA tiragaraastunnarU ?

Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 8, Jun 2005 8:39:40 PM IST

allAgA rivaivjI I lekkana jUstE nAku renDu kONAlagupaDutunnAy 1.bhAva vaiphalyam 2.bhAsha vaiphalyam E vidhangAjUsina idi kavi vaiphalyamE mI anubhavam inkokaLLakkUDA allAgE kalagAlanukOvaDAnni jUstE nAku jAlEstOndi. nEnu mATADutunDagAnE nuvvu mellagA nidralOki jArukOvaDam chUDDam nAku chAlA ishTam lAntaru bhUtamlA nidra nuvvu talachindE taDavugA nI mundu chEtulu kaTTukoni nilabaDDam tamAshAgA vunTundi pasipillavADu tana tallini chErinanta nirbhayangA, nilakaDagA ninnASrayistundi nidra ekkaDinunchO haTAttugA vachchina nidra nI kaLLa mIda rekka vippaDam chUDDam nAku saradA adE nAku nidranTEnA kOrkelu vETADAli bhayAlu venTADAli nAlOki nEnu nA nunchi nEnu parugetti alasipOvAli Uhala penugAlulaki gaDiyalEni talupullA reppalu vandasArlu TapaTapA koTTukOvAli chivarikeppuDO ardharAtrikadi kallOlita manastIrAlanu tAki kalala tupAnulni sRushTinchi E tellArEvELakO challAbaDAli nidra nAku maraNayAtana anAyAsangA ninnAvahinchaDam chUDDam nAkO goppa anubhavam pai kavitalO kavi vochchi varNinchAlsinavennunnAy ?chadivEvALLakartham kAni vichitra varNanalEmunnAy ? kaLLu, kALLu parugettaDam mATTADDam vanTi abhAvAlekkaDunnAy ? dInni sAntam chadavagAnE mIkEmanipinchindi?

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 8, Jun 2005 8:23:51 PM IST

sorry - Refresh chEste maLLi posTu eiyimdi - uhimchamDi vo dRuSyaanni - (iddaru premikulu voka amdameina prakRuti lo unnaaru ) vaaLLu ... mounam gaa maaTlaaDukumTaaru ... chupulato ne vokarikokaru prerepimchukumTaaru ( taDumukumTaaru ) adi masaka vennela ... idda ru vokarikokaru deggarei veLLato chUsukumTaaru ... chivaragaa aanamdistaaru , anubhavistaaru ( manasuto ruchimchaTam ) ivi Abstract elaavutaayo ... priyuraalini veLLato chUDalema ? I can tell what is what with my fingers adi amaavaasya einaa :- ) nEno chhi miiku explain cheste ne gaani ... amTe mIku comments raayaTamlo vunna imTrasTu kavita nu anubhavimchaTamlo ledEmo ... miiranna aa bulapaaTaale ... ea kavita ku aabharaNAlu

Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 7, Jun 2005 10:41:54 PM IST

priya naa chEtalaki ( mounamgaa cheppaTam ..vELLato chUDaTam .. ) nI sAmgatyam loni ea prakRutE kAraNam (pilla temmera , mettani pachhika , masakavenne lE ) viDichi veLLaku mA , ea prakRuti nanu vomTari chesi bhaadistayi - ippu Du cheppamDi ... ela cheppaalo Tell me how expression suppose to be ? you didn't mention the actions in your example -

Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 7, Jun 2005 10:05:46 PM IST

chUpulatO taDamaDam vELLatO chUDDam manasutO ruchinchaTam ivannI absTrAkT prayOgAlu.chadivEvALLaki ellAnTi khachchitamaina rUpAnni,imEjarInI andinchani vAkyAlu.illAnTivi chadivEnduku gammattugA vunTAy gAnI sIriyas raiTars vITini pUrtigA vodilEstAru.SrISrI kavitalO illAnTivunnAyEmO cheppanDi mari SrISrIlAnE rAstE nEnu rivaiv inDiyaneTlA autA anna praSna vEsukonTE, goppa rachaitallO manam nErchukOvAlsindi bhAsha.bhAshanTE a A i I lu gAvu. kavitva bhAsha.a A i I ellA andarikI kAmannO I kavitva bhAsha gUDA.prati rachaita modaTa paTTu sAdhinchAlsindi ikkaDE. kALLu mATTADDam , kaLLu parugeTTaDam vanTi vannI bulapATalu.nijavaina kavitaku atakani AbharaNAlu.anchAta vATinoggEyanDi mIru cheppadalchukonnadi mIru vochchi eksplain jEstE gAnI nA burrakekkalE.anTE mIru oka pAthakuNNi chEralEdu.nAlAnTOLLu padimadi vunTE?vandamandi vunTE?vALLandarnI pOgoTTukonnaTTEnA. anTE dInartham intE vIlainanta kAnkrIT gA cheppanDi

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 7, Jun 2005 9:29:18 PM IST

imAjin chEsukonnA revaivjI nAkillA anipinchindi (TaiTil ) veLLakumA pachchika bayalu kurisE vennela pArE Eru konDavAlu nEnu nI kOsam chUstunTE aTekkaDikI nI naDaka mI ekspreshan&lO lOpamunDochchannAru gadA mIrrAsinadAnlOnE vunna lOpam nI sAngatyamlOni I pillatemmera mettaTi pachchika masaka vennelE I sTAnjA sariggA vundA gamaninchanDi cheppanDi

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 7, Jun 2005 8:44:01 PM IST

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