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Articles: Poetry | | niTTUrpu | |
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| http://telugupeople.com/discussion/UserArticles.asp?userId=PRASANTHI
List of my articles here.
Check for the ones posted on Mar 9, 2003. Comments. Comments, their influence.
tAtagAru, :(((
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 8, Jun 2005 9:47:32 PM IST
padaala pondika baagundi
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 8, Jun 2005 9:27:06 PM IST
evarannAru andarU SrISrI tilak lAnE rAyAlani.rivaiv inDiyAgAri lETesTu kavita chUDanDi andulO nEnEm cheppAnO telustundi
allAnTi kavula daggira manam nErchukOvAlsindi kavitA bhAshanu.parugeTTE kALLu, mATTADE vELLu llAnTi prayOgAlni pai kavulenduku chEyalEdu? telIkana? rAkanA? bhAshapai bhAvam pai paTTulEkanA?avEvI kAvu.kavitvAniki A prayOgAlu ellAnTi andAnni ivvavuganuka.mahAkavulnunchi manam nErchukOvAlsindi intE.Sailini anukarinchaDam kAdu.
mI vyAsam ekkaDundO nAku telIdu chepitE tappakanDa chaduvutA
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 8, Jun 2005 9:11:27 PM IST
kalalukAlchina karuNAMtaraMguDu
kaTTenumAtraM migilcheneMdukO?
praSAMtI
ati durlabhameinadi mAnava janma.
konni konni saMghaTanalu mAnasikaMgA kRuMgadIyavachchu. beMbElupaDavaddu.
Ofcourse telling is easy.
ayinA manassu diTTaparachukOvaDAniki prayatniMchu
kAni nI viNgNjAnAnni saMghaSrEyassuku viniyOgiMchu.
ippaTikE nuvvu ennO dhArmikakAryakramAlu chEpaTTAvu
nI valla labdhipoMdinavAri kaLLalOni saMtOShAnni gamaniMchu. appuDu bhagavaMtuDu kaTTemAtraM eMduku migilchADO ardhaM avutuMdi.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 8, Jun 2005 8:59:19 PM IST
bhAva bhakti, vachana bhIti :))) bAguMdaMDI:))
prati okkarU SrISrI, tilak`, ismAyil`lu kAlEru. okavELa alA ayinA anukaraNE tappa aMdaM uMDadu kadA.
eMduku kavita kAdu, elA rAstE bAguMTuMdi, bAguMTE eMduku bAguMdi ani cheptE bAguMTuMdi. vimarSa tIvraMgA, tIkshaNaMgA uMDachchu. kUsiMta vyaMgyamU uMDachchu. kAnI prayOjanaM mAtramu kavita rAyAlanE utsAhamu kalavArini prOtsahiMchi, iMkA bAgA rAyAlanE uttEjAnni kaligiMchAli.
I think I shared my feelings here unnecessarily. Better write an article. Anyway, did you read my article on 'Comments'? What do you feel about it? I will be happy if you have time and let me know. Ofcourse this request is to everyone not just to Alokji.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 8, Jun 2005 8:58:50 PM IST
daivabhakti pApabhIti menDugA vunnAy ganuka mIku I sekshanlO annI kavitalEnanipinchAy .gAnI nAku bhAvabhakti vachanabhIti vunnAy gAbaTTi EvO konni mAtramE kavitalanipinchAy
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 8, Jun 2005 8:31:08 PM IST
subbu gAru, UhU iMkA velitigAnE uMdaMDi.
vimarSakuDu gAru, arigipOyiMdE, nijamE. kAnI kottadanaMlO kUDA aMdaM uMDAligA mari.
asalu nijaM cheppanA.
I am feeling terrible today and not knowing what to do, I just opened our site. (these days I am not visiting at all). Saw the poems in the poetry section and the comments too. To my surprise, being in intense grief also, I could smile. A smile, which is natural..:))
Though I keep on feeling, I didn't pen so far. After reading the poems, I wished to try and shed my grief (like I expressed in one of my previous poems) this way.
I really spent considerable time in framing and at last concluded at this output. I have the copy of the previous versions in the office. I will share them tomorrow. Actually I felt like posting all the versions of first stanza and thought of asking which one is the best one:)))
sO nA I sO kAl'D' kavitanu nEnu rAyalEdu. mana Ti.pi. kavi bRuMdamE rAyiMchiMdi. atiSayOkti kAdaMDI nijamE.
nannu kadiliMchi kavita(? :))) rAyiMchagaligAyi kanuka mana kavitvaM sekshan'lO kavitalE unnAyanukuMTunnAnu.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 8, Jun 2005 8:12:10 PM IST
Gap teesukuni raasinaTTunnaaru.chaalaa baavuMdaMDee.. modaTi KaMDika ni ilaa maaristE elaa uMTuMdi?
kaalaMtO paaTE
kalalu kUDaa
kaalaM chEsaayi
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 8, Jun 2005 7:01:35 PM IST
Thanks to everyone for your comments.
vAstav gAru, ikkaDa daivabhakti EmI lEdu. nA 'niTTUrpu' lO 'Ayana' kUDA oka vastuvu. aMtE. oka rakaMgA cheppAlaMTE iMta niTTUrpuki kAraNaM kUDA 'AyanE' :)) elA tIsEyanu ?:)
vimarSakuDu gAru, bAgunnAyi mI savaraNalu. kAnI gADhata pOtuMdEmO anipistOMdi (nAku). kalalu kAlaMtOTE kAlaM chEsAyi aMTE expression lAgA kAka statement lAgA uMTuMdEmO.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 8, Jun 2005 6:35:13 PM IST
praSAnti gArU...chAlA bAvumdi.renDO stanza adbhutamgA umdi...' kannIru nITini kAka bAdhanE kArchEstE emta bAguNNu'... great expression. nijamgA alA jarigitE emta bAgumDO !!! I stanza ku sambandhinchi vimarSakuDi gAri savaraNa kamTE orijinalE bAvumdi...kannIru maLLI nIru repetition lAgunnA kUDA!
Posted by: special_special At: 8, Jun 2005 6:31:09 PM IST
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