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| great work Vijay garu, chala baagundi poem....Keep it up ...:)
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 13, Jul 2005 4:24:02 PM IST
ikkaDa vimarSa raasina prati okkarikee naa vandanaalu. naaku chaata kaani kavitalu tanu naatoa raayistundi. naakeppuDoo alavaaTu laeni pani chaeyinchaDam tanaku alavaaTayyindi.inkaa ee kavita gurinchi naenu chaalaa possessive ga feel avutanu. deeniki sambandhinchi eTuvanTi dibaeT jaraga kunDa unTae baavuNNu ani ekspekT chaestaanu. ( tappainaa ) manninchanDi.
nijaaniki naenu ikkaDa naa ae riplai raayaDaaniki ishTam laedu. ishTa paTTam laedu. kaani naa gontuloa bhaavana ee maatram ayinaa kontaloa konta spashTangaa vinipistundaa ilaa kooDaa naenu kavitalu raayagalanaa anna naa sandigdhaanni meerandaroo clarify chaesaaru. naenu alaa noaru moosukuni unDaDam konta kRoorngaa anipinchi......
saadhyamainantavaraku kavi tana kavitanu nirdushTangaa vivarincharaadu ...kavitaloa tappa... ani nammae vaaDini. praSaanti gaaru ! u r hundred percent again i repeat hundred percent true in capturing the meaning . prati saari manam vyaakaraNam anae strict frame work loanae unDaalsina avasaram laedu.induku sambandhinchi shaekspiyar chaesina prayoagaalu Ngaptiki techchukoavaali. vimarSakuDi gaari varshan kooDaa baavundi. thyaanks anDi.
maLLee inkoasaari..kavitatoa paaTae kavini kooDaa chadavagaligina praSaanti gaariki pratyaeka vandanaalu.
unTaa mari...
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 12, Jun 2005 1:01:27 PM IST
nAkanipiMchiMdi cheppanA. oMTaritanaM vEru, okkaDugA uMDaDaM vEru. okkaDigA unnaMta mAtrAna, oMTarigA unnaTTu kAdu. mana bhAvAlu, Uhalu tODunnaTlE. oMTaritanaM (reMDu rakAlugA uMTuMdi. saMtOshaMgA unnappaDu, bAdhagA unnappuDu). reMDavadi batakanIyadu. ikkaDa oMTaritanaM, okkaDigA uMDaDaMlO chAlA lOtaina bhAvaM uMdi.
For the person surely knows that his lover going to leave him forever. He can never be happy being lonely. So he is alone and he is single. (I don't know how far I could convey the meaning as I perceive). The pain here is to the superlative degree.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 12, Jun 2005 10:09:31 AM IST
vimarSakuDu gAru, mI varshan adiriMdi. AMdhruDugAru pariSIliMchaMDi.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 12, Jun 2005 9:59:56 AM IST
baagundi aandhruDu gaaru
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 12, Jun 2005 5:04:16 AM IST
vadhiMchaDAniki siddhaMgAvunnappuDu hRudayaM pAShANa sadRuSaM ganuka EmI anipiMchakapOvaDaM sahajamE
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 11, Jun 2005 6:50:55 PM IST
EvI anipinchalEdu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 11, Jun 2005 4:27:21 PM IST
anipistE, an&yaM eMduku avutAru? mI kavita chadivi hRudayAnni kelikitE ivigO ivi dorikAyi.
avasaramA?
alA eMduku chEsAvu?
ilA eMduku annAvu?
ennO praSnalu.
avasaramA?
samAdhAnamE uMTE
saMdarbhAleMduku vastAyi.
manasE ayitE
gAyaM chEyadu
chEstE
mari lEnaTTEgA
alAgainA mATlADAlani
ubalATaM kAkapOtE
lEni javAbuki
praSnalEmiTi?
mAnani gAyAniki
maMdEmiTi?
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 11, Jun 2005 4:22:52 PM IST
bAvuMdaMDi. mana pichchigAnI, vadilEyAlani nirNayiMchukunna vALLaki, eduTivALLa guriMchi AlOchiMchEMta manasu uMTuMdA? uMTE vadilEstArA? EdO 'arakka' manaM rAsukOvaDamE kAnI. akkasu veLLabOsukOvaDamE kAnI . My heart aches with you....:( :)
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 11, Jun 2005 4:09:11 PM IST
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