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Articles: Poetry | | bhaavavIchikalu | |
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| Thanks to u all for ur comments and suggestions
Tulasimohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 13, Jun 2005 11:05:48 PM IST
chaalaa baagunnaayanDI tulasi gaarU , mI bhaava vIchikalu.
Posted by: పూలవాన At: 13, Jun 2005 8:41:49 AM IST
baagunnaai mee veechikalu.. mukhyangaa renDOdi
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 12, Jun 2005 5:00:28 AM IST
'aanandaM' ki nEnu raasina daanilO editor gaaru oka padaanni maarchinaTTunnaaru.
idi naa original version
aanandaM....
chIkaTirEkha kaaTukalaa parachukunnanantaraM
kanTilO prasarinchE kaantipunjaM
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 11, Jun 2005 7:06:53 PM IST
Second stanza is only good. First stanza is good in meaning but failed in expression. The first one can be refined more. May be our friends can explain.
The other two are quite confusing.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 11, Jun 2005 4:32:12 PM IST
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