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| Excellent!
You've gotta lucid style! I must thank Prasanthi garu for showing me the path to reach your doorsteps!
Entirely different from the other crowd. Keep up the good work!
Murali M.Mallareddy
Posted by: Mr. MURALI MOHAN MALLAREDDY At: 16, Jun 2005 8:42:09 PM IST
adbhutangaa undi.. renDava khandika koddigaa different from flow anipinchindi
Wonderful poem ... keep it up
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 14, Jun 2005 11:27:12 AM IST
maatallo cheppalenantha bagundhi andi mee kavitha...inkaa vuntey bagundunu chaduvutune vundaali anipisthundhi....
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 13, Jun 2005 10:57:04 PM IST
This is the url to the poem 'nEnu' which I mentioned.
http://telugupeople.com/literature/article.asp?category=22&ID=5667
All his poems are good.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 13, Jun 2005 9:05:26 PM IST
adirindhi pranavji
polikalu chla chala bagunnai
malli malli chadivmpa chese kavitha raasaru
hats off
Posted by: Mr. gopi kiran naidu At: 13, Jun 2005 4:14:52 PM IST
nijamE.... 5 va KaMDika teesEstE flO iMkaa baavuMTuMdi...
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 13, Jun 2005 3:38:40 PM IST
Thanks to all especially prasanti gaaru. aMdari sUchanalani dRushTilO peTTukuni 5 va sTaaMjaani vadilEstunnaanu. idivarakE vaaDina prayOgaalu vaaDaTam naakishTaM lEdu.
but i strongly feel that last stanza should be there!
Posted by: PRANAV At: 13, Jun 2005 3:03:40 PM IST
nO DauT manchi kavita gAkpOtE kavi anavasarangA konni bhAvAlni kharcheTTukonnaTTu anipistOndi.renDu kavitalaku saripaDA saranjAmA vokkE kavitalO kharcheTTaDam chUstunTE kaviki pariNititO bATu tondara kUDA ekkuvanipistundi
I kavita 'pATa lEkapOtE pUTa gaDavadu nAku' annachOTanE mugistE bAgochchEdi.chivari sTAnjAnu chErchukOvachchu kAvalistE.aidO sTAnjA anavasarangA vochchi kUrchunnaTTundi
mAnchi kavita rAsAru praNavjI
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 13, Jun 2005 2:49:26 PM IST
kavitalO maMchi Dept vuMdi
chAla pariNiti cheMdina rachana
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 13, Jun 2005 1:40:28 PM IST
The way you expressed it, is good. But the elements you have choosen are already old.
vasantam lO kOkila gontulOki
senTu vaasanallO, maTTi vaaasanakai
pasipaapa EDchE baasha
:-)
Posted by: Saleem At: 13, Jun 2005 12:47:27 PM IST
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