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| baagundi ! second stanza artham ayyaeTTugaa laedu .
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 13, Jun 2005 11:30:11 AM IST
Once again:) Sorry for not keeping the word. Last stanza, most of us(writers) identify with it. What an expression. So Captivating :)
We read few poems and feel them good and forget. But there are very very few who haunts us. Out of all the poems in TP so far, I liked the 'nEnu' from Mallareddy garu and this one from you. If possible read that poem too.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 13, Jun 2005 11:07:28 AM IST
alA chaduvutUnE uMDAlanipistOMdi. The best in your poems. Kudos. I will just skip. otherwise I may feel like adding and adding comments.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 13, Jun 2005 11:01:59 AM IST
Send to Andhrajyothy or Varta or any poetry competition. It will definitely get the first prize. Except the 'nILLallO nAnabeTTE' stanza(this get the last mark when compared to other stanzas.), all the others are marvellous (with equal marks).
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 13, Jun 2005 11:00:15 AM IST
Wow, splendid. iMtakaMTE tIvraMgA, sUTigA tAkE kavita uMTuMdA. IDchi tanninaTTu uMdi. chAlA chAlA bAvuMdi. elA taDtAyaMDi iMta maMchi pOlikalu! Finishing touch iMkA adiriMdi. Every line is beautiful.
I wish to see how our 'V' duo (Vastav and Vimarsak) receives this:))
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 13, Jun 2005 10:57:15 AM IST
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