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Articles: Poetry | aakulu aaDukunTunnaayi | |
| baavundi sowmya !!
subramaNyam gaaru cheppinaTlu inkaa baagaa raayochchu :)
Posted by: Mrs. ψ శకి౨ ψ At: 17, Jun 2005 11:40:38 AM IST bAguMdi nIanubhavaM
nijaMgA adRuShTavaMturAlivi
ikkaDa vijayavADalO asalu chinukE lEdu
chIkaTi paDDA kUDA rAtri eMDalA maMDipOtOMdi
sUryuDu dAkkoni marI mAtO ADukoMTunnADu
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 17, Jun 2005 8:05:52 AM IST baagundi anDi.kaanI davaDa anEkanTE kUDAnu chempa anTE baagunTundi anipistundi....
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 16, Jun 2005 9:39:10 PM IST baavuMdi... iMkaa baagaa raayochchu...
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 16, Jun 2005 11:25:29 AM IST chakkani dRuSyaM. AhlAdaMgA uMdi. kAnI bhAsha bAgA rifain chEyAli especially the last two stanzas. The finishing touch is normally given at the end. But it is missing here though the meaning is wonderfully good.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 16, Jun 2005 10:05:06 AM IST
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