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| prayatnam baavundi Sreedhar gaaru !!
Posted by: Mrs. ψ శకి౨ ψ At: 17, Jun 2005 11:45:57 AM IST
idi viparItamgA vundi.andarU nA pai paDDam. vimarSakuDu mArpulu chEstE bAvundanTAru.nEnu chEstE rachaitalki salahAlistAru 'vADi prabhAvamlO paDoddu' anTU.
kiraNjI,subramaNyamjI
indulO alOk vAstav prabhAvamekkaDundO vivarinchanDi.vuttinE sTETmenTu ivvaDam kanTE prUv jEstEnE mIning fulgA vunTundi
koTlATallO tappa kavitvam pai konchemainA avagAhanalEni mEDam snEhalAnTi vALLa mATalaku nEnu viluvivvanu.
ainA rachaitE evvari prabhAvam lEdani mundE DiklEr chEsinA venTabaDi hechcharinchaDamlO gala artham ?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 17, Jun 2005 9:47:48 AM IST
kiraN / subbu gaaru,
idE vishayam intaku mundu subbu gaaru anTE alaanTidi emilEdu ani cheppaanu. kaani ippuDu meeru kooDaa adE vishayam cheptunnaaranTE, tappakunDaa nEnu marOsaari pariSeelistaanu.
prabhaavam unnamaaTa nijamE kaani naa Saili maarchukunenta assalu kaadu. adi gaaka adi vaastav gaari prabhaavam antakannaa kaadu. ee madhya abstractness kOsam prayatnistunnaanu adE tEDaa.
snEha gaaru,
nEnu adE stitilO unnaananDi.
dhanyavaadaalatO,
~Sreedhar
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 17, Jun 2005 8:37:17 AM IST
mugiMpu adbhutaMgAvuMdi
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 17, Jun 2005 7:58:36 AM IST
kiraN gaaritO pUrtigaa Ekeebhavistunnaanu...
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 16, Jun 2005 12:40:15 PM IST
vaav .. chaalaa baavuMdi Sreedhar gaaru.. maMchi pariNati kanipistOMdi mee kavitallO... keep going...
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 16, Jun 2005 11:27:39 AM IST
chala bagundandi saili bagundhi keep it up
Posted by: Mr. gopi kiran naidu At: 16, Jun 2005 10:45:43 AM IST
chAlA bAvuMdi. Simple and sweet.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 16, Jun 2005 10:28:39 AM IST
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