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| baavundi kavita
Posted by: Mrs. ψ శకి౨ ψ At: 17, Jun 2005 11:47:39 AM IST
chAlAkAlamayiMdayyA viplOv nI kavita chUchi
bhAva garbhitaMgAvuMdi kavita
TeiTil sariggA kudiriMdi
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 17, Jun 2005 7:44:41 AM IST
baavuMdi viplav ... Sree Sree 'verri vaaDaa kurravaaDaa.. aTula chUDaku aTula paaDaku' anna kavita gurtochchiMdi..
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 16, Jun 2005 11:29:09 AM IST
viplove subject is good. bagundhi inkonchem baaga rayavachu try it man
Posted by: Mr. gopi kiran naidu At: 16, Jun 2005 10:50:16 AM IST
Hello Viplove, you can rewrite the whole poem and make it beautiful. The subject has worth but wordings must be taken care of.
Every person is mad inside. But few control and pretend and stay in house. Few stay in lunatic asylums. What for we become 'mad' should be the most important one which should be introspected time and again :)) Again this is only advice which is to be stated not to follow:)
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 16, Jun 2005 10:26:45 AM IST
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