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Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 15, Apr 2006 7:37:08 PM IST
salIM gAru, oka bhAvaM kavitO, kAdO cheppE saMpUrNa avagAhana kavitvaM mIda nAku lEdu. kAkapOtE tOchina bhAvAnni rAsukuni ikkaDa pOsT chEstuMTAnu. nAku idi kavitE anipiMchi pOyeTrI sekshan`lO pOsT chEsAnu.
Sometimes when I doubt whether something is a poem or not, everyone liked it. For example my poems, niTTUrpu, paMDuga Selavalu and un&mattAvastha . I felt like I will get comments like, 'Is this a poem?' etc., But most of the members liked them. But I liked nEnu, avunA and saMvEdana . Our members didn't like them much. So there is always difference of opinion.
As I do not have authority or extensive reading experience, I cannot determine authentically that some lines can be stated as a poem or not. Even to know whether something is a poem or not, we need to post it here only in the 'Poetry' section because here only we get reviews when compared to articles.
Anyway, thank you for your feedback. I felt like why I didn't get comments for my poems(?! :)) from you and thought 'ok. they might not be upto his standards'. This one compelled you to write one:)
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 18, Jun 2005 10:52:29 PM IST
satyaM vadha
dharmam cheR~a
idi nETi lOkarIti
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 18, Jun 2005 3:13:33 PM IST
sarE ..!!
satyam dharmam mIku kanapaTTamlEdu..vetikipeTTamamTAru..
tappakumDA..
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 18, Jun 2005 2:36:46 PM IST
naalugu praSnalu, alOchana rEkEttinchinavaa lEdaa kotta rakangaa aDiginaraa anTE, lEdu.
idi enduku kavitvamayindi, eTlaa kavitvamayyindi?
Posted by: Saleem At: 18, Jun 2005 1:54:23 PM IST
kiraN gAru, nEnu enni nErchukuMTunnAnO. ippaTiki 3 karekshan&s. 'pUrvajan&ma pApaM, kASI dAkA dEkaDaM, dharmaM - nyAyaM - evariki enni kALLu :))) Thanks for the corrections.
vimarSak gAru AvESaMtO rAstE bhAsha padunugA uMDEdi. AvEdanatO rAsiMdi kAbaTTi ilAga uMdi.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 18, Jun 2005 12:39:37 PM IST
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