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egjaam taga labeTTi vachchaanu. sare ika maaTlaaDudaam.
mottam meeda ee charchaloa aalasyangaa pravaeSinchinaa....andaroo gaayab ayyaru...naenu maatram okkannae migilaanu !.....:)
ika nannu kooDaa...vimarSakuDu ( idi maatram ID gurinchae ) maniddari madhyaloa doori better stop discussion anaesaaru. naenu mundae vinna vinchukunnaanu....aedoa porapaaTna maedhaavula paerlu mee gurinchi abbura paDtoo prastaavinchaanu kaani...naa maaTalu authenticate chaesukoaaDaaniki kaadu moRRoa...ani...ayinaa sarae durmaarguDu ani tiTTaenta varaku manaSSaanti laekunDaa poayindi !....sarae oppaesukunTunnaa ! ika prose ku poetry kee taeDaa teleedaa? ani visukkunnaaru. naenu prose and poetry gurinchi eppuDu maaTlaaDaanabbaa? vachanam kaanidi kavitvam ani meeru anTae vachanamaina kavitvam avutundi annaanu. antae kaani gadyam oosae laedu!.....ika elaa kavitvamautundoay anTae....aem chappanu?...maLLee dont throw some nice dictionary words without proper justification ani impression aeDchi chachchindi kadaa okaTi !.....meeru elaa unnaaru anTae aedoa ilaa unnaa ani samaadhaanam ivvaDaaniki prayatnistaanu gaani elaa aeDchaaru anTae inkaem samaadhaanam aemistaanu? vaastav gaaru ee vishayaalni vimarSukuDi ( ID nae !) ki andajaeyanDi aemee Srama anukoakunDaa. I dont know if he is following this or not .
kaamenT raastoo salahaa ivvaDaaniki, mukku moham teleeni vyaktini aandhra bhoajaa aem chaestunnaaru maunanni koasaesuku tinnaraa ani praemagaa pilavaDaaniki taeDaa laedanTae... perhaps .... aemoa abhimaanaani artham chaesukoalaeni banDa raayini ayyanoa laedoa aatma vimarSa chaesukoavaali...telugu artham avvaDam aa pai daevuDaeruka ! ayinaa mee style of abhimaanam variety gaa undi. kRutaNgatalu.
Sree Sree gurinchi meeru aatrangaa naenu aDigina venTanae raasina maaTala gurinchi.....ayyaa kavi gurinchi oka vimarSanaatmaka abhipraayam raayanDi anTae oka systematic flow vaddaa anDi?...oka vyaasam raasoa...konni kavitaa sankalanaalu gurinchoa...aayana paDDa kashTaala gurinchoa...aayana oka samstha naayakuDigaa aayana chaesina kRushi aenToa...alaa aedoa oka flow expect chaestaam. idenTi ...aakasmikangaa madhyaloa dorikina kavitanettuku vachchaesi Sree Sree jindaabaad ani aristae naaku peerla panDaga roaju maa ooriloa arichae arupulu gurtochchaayi. andukae oka navvu mukka paaDaesaanu. aem chaeyaali mari? ila kaadu anDi charchinchaalsindi...chaala nirdushTangaa...chaalaa focussed gaa....Sree Sree enduku goppa? Sree Sree mundu Sree Sree tarvaataa viplava kavitvam laedaa? Sree Sree loa nibaddhata enta? Sree Sree loa oka kavigaa unna parimitulu aenTi? Sree Sree kavitaa vastuvulloa Silpam loa aayana vaaDina Tekniks loa unna vairudhyam aenTi? viSishTata aenTi?...oka organised flow avasaram. meeku samayamunTae raasi chooDanDi. ilaa telugu sinimaaloa asandarbhangaa asambaddangaa raali paDae paaTallaa unDoddu charcha. meeku charcha jarigae vidhaanam gurinchae vibhaedham unTae...naenu nissahaayunni. ika Sree Sree gurinchi meeru aerukuni vachchi maree paaraesinamaaTala gurinchi okka mukkatoa mugistaa...puraaNa prateekalni abhyudaya vaadaaniki vaaDukoavaDam aayana vidvattuku nidarSanamaa? ilaa vachchi Sree Sree ni nichoni aa maaTa cheppaneenDi....puraaNa prateekalaku abhyudaya vaadaaniki ekkaDannaa posugutundaa? aayanukunna naepathya samskRuti alaa raasi champindi aayannu. aa kavitaloa Sree Sree chaesina asambaddha prayoagam bahuSaa aayana jeevitam loa kavitvam loa chaesina konni tappulloa pradhaanamainadi kaavachchu. mana vaaDu sinimaa paaTalu raasina alavaaTu nnavaaDu kadaa paigaa....andulao maatrala prayoagam tappa aemannaa aa Teknik vastuvuku atukundaa ani aloachana chaeyakunDaa poayaaDu mahaanubhaavuDu. poayi poayi adae meeru ennukunnaaru. aa kavitaloa aayana chaesina prayoagam elaa undanTae ....juTTunu rampam toa duvvukunae prayatnam laa undi. aa chinna vaakyaalu Sree Sree ki tana kavitaa vastuvu paTlae unDae avagaahanaa parimitulu aayana aloachanaa chaTram loa unDae anaeka tappuDu dhoraNulu clear gaa prasphuTistaay. meeru mallee ' elaa aeDchaaru ' laa aDigaaranukoanDi naenu nijangaa aeDvaDam tappa aemi chaeyalaenu.
padya kavitvam gurinchi na raasina vyaasam gurinchi mee abhiyoagaalu...sarae cheppae mundu naenu vedhava tanam toa raasaanu ani oppukunTa..meeru mee kavitvam anTae ani raasina vyaasaanni vedhava tanam toa raasaaru ani oppukunTaaraa? inta week gaa aargyoo chaeyoddu. naa gurinchi vimarSa kooDaa chooddaam. adee vastundi. ippuDu maaTlaaDae maaTalanu vadilaesi naeneppuDoa raasina vyaasam gurinchi enduku maaTlaaTTam? adae aarTikala loa vachchi nirdushTangaa aDaganDi charchiddaam. ikkaDa adi anavasaram anukunTaa. inkaa meeru avasaram anukuni alaa tappinchuku poataavaem ani venTa paDDaaranukoa.....ika appuDu nae vedhavanu ani anaesi mee respaan s koasam weyiT chaestaa ika.
:)....chivari paeraaloa mee ' yuga dharma karta ' style mallee nachchaesindi. ayinaa vyaktula maanasika parivartana koasam kRushi chaestunnaaraa? laeka saahityaabhivRuddhiki kRushi chaestunnaaraa meeru? evaDoa aedoa vaesukunTae ikkaDa kavitaabhimaanulaku aem kompa mungindi? ...alaa kaadu...meeru nae oppukoanu antae nae oppukoanu antae ..anTae...naenu madhyaloa dooranu. naenu baadha paDDadi okkaTae.....kavitaa sthaayi baTTi kavi paripakvata nu anchanaa vaeya laeka vyaktigatangaa eduTi manishini andari mundu nindichaDam manishigaa naaku nachchalaedu. mari kavitvam raasina vaaDi gurinchi maaTlaaDavaem? ani nannaDigitae naenu ' vaaDU naenu unDae saahitee loakam loa laeni vaaDu. vaaDi gurinchi naakenduku aatma prakoapana ? ' anTaanu. manchidi kaadanDi vaastav gaaru...meeru sariggaa aatma vimarSa chaesukoanDi. naa kavitaku raayanDI mee vimarSa ( ayitae konni kavitalanu maatram specific gaa exempt chaeyanDi. avi andari mundu peTTaalanae uddaeSyam toa raasinavi kaadu. avi nijaaniki baagunnaa baagundi maatralu baagaa vaaDaaru annaa naenu teesukoalaenu. naenu nijaaniki mee anta ettuku edigaaka anninTi meeda mee vimarSa raadduru ) . ikkaDa entoa mandi saahitee abhimaanulu unnaaru. moha maaTam laekunDaa vimarSa koarukunae vaaru unnaaru. vaaritoaTae mana loakam. ee process loa utsaahavantului kooDaa discouraging gaa feel avutaaru. adi mana laanTi saahitee abhimaanulaku manchigaa anipinchadu. alaa ani ikkaDi paaTakulni takkuva anchanaa vaeyakanDi. nae monna raasina kavitaku nannu chaalaa diplomatic gaa cheelchi chenDaaDaesaaru. nijangaa ee saiTloa naenu kavitalu post chaeyani roaju vastae baaguNNu. inta mandi mundu naenu marugujjugaa ayipoatae baagunnu.
vimarSinchaDaaniki mohamaaTam avasaram laedanDi. mari aatma vimarSaku kooDaa kadaa?
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 4, Jul 2005 0:15:59 AM IST
hey ippuDae oka sinima prograam undi. mallee raepu egjaam undi. raepu saayantram raastaa. anta varaku oka kaamaa ikkaDa.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 2, Jul 2005 12:00:51 PM IST appuDE yEvaindi,mIku tIrikainappuDu antA kudirinappuDu nA gurinchi mIrAScharya paDagalavennO vunnAyilEnDi
mI visurla gurinchi jAbitA avasaramlEdu.I kAmenTokaTi jAlu.inkA kAvalanTE kavitvamanTE vyAsamlOnivI chAlu.nA sTayillO pAvO vantu kuDA vunDavu mI mATalu.mIru nErchukonna mATalu annE aitE nEnEmjEsEdi?
mIrrAstunna vATini jUstE mIku telugochchinaTTE telustOndi gAnI mATaleppuDu vin&lEdu sO mIkochchina telugentO nE cheppalEnu
mEdhAvitanam gurinchi mI namrata nAku nachchindi.kIpiTap.allAnE AndhrabhOjatvam gurinchInU.nAtO ellAnTi parichayam lEkanDAnE salahAlivvanochchAru gadA,dInni prEmanTArA lEka daurbhAgyamanTArA?tElchukOnDi
ainA nIku evaru cheppinArannA nAku rAyalasIma bAsha rAdani?karNa piSAchi yEvainA vachchi cheppinAdA?pedda pedda baruvulu talakAya paina EsukOni EsukOni chitikipOyinAvEmO maLLI I baruvendulE annA
SrISrI gurinchi nE jEsindi asamabaddha prayatnamA.mIru chEsi chUpanDi sambaddha prayatnamellA vunTundO.nE jeppina vudAharaNalO prajalu arthamjEsukODAniki yEvI lEdA?purANa pratIkalni abhyudayavAdAniki vADukOvaDam SrISrI vidvattuku nidarSanamni nE rAsindi evari kOsam ?mIrannArE 'pichchikalu'vAri kOsam.mIlAnTivAru avE panktullO Em kottagA kanipeTTAro cheppanDi chUddAm
yEvannAru? nAku anukUlangA vunna vATi mIdanE mATTADutAnA?EdI mIku anukUlangA vunnadAnnivvanDi chUddAm .chEsi chUpichchinadAnni 'habbE'ani chapparinchEyaDam chAlA suluvu.
Dhamarukam lAnTi 'kavita'ni vachanamani tElchEsina mIku nA jOhArlu.EdI koddigA mOginchanDi vindAm A SabdAnni
padya kavitvAnni enDagaTTina mI vyAsamlO enta sin&siyAriTI vundi?asalu padyakavitvAnni avagAhantO chadivArA?lEdE.A prakriyani vO sAmAjika Arthika kONamlOnunDE jUsAru.mI dRushTi O kavigA pAThakunigA kAka vO rAjakIyavEttalA vunDabaTTi andulOni goppadanam kanipinchakapOyindi.vEmana padyAlni,SatakAlni yE lekkalO vEstAru?jAshuvA gabbilam sangatEviTi? DabbulistE vilAsam ivvakapOtE vilApam chEshTalu ippuDulEvA?avArDullannI nijamaina arhulakE ichchArA?
padya kavitvam paTla yEviTi mI dRukpadham ?mIkunna avagAhana?nAlugu yUnivarSiTi chachchu rIserchulni chadivi A kavitA prakriyani praSinchE levelukeLLAru gadA,mundoka padyam rAyanDi appuDu telisostundi andulOni Sakti.
mA prayAtnAlni nIrugArchaDAniki mIrevvarani praSinchukonnAru chUDanDi adi nAku bAgA nachchindi.mIrevvarO kAdu ganaka chEtanaitE yuktiyuktangA mATlADanDi, mA vyAsamku sambandhinchina vATikE parimitamavvanDi mA tIrutennU pai puchchu salahAloddu
kavita rAyAlanTE oka ettuku edigE rAyAli.asalu oka levelukochchAkE rAyaDAniki dhiryam puTTEdi.gAnI ikkaDadEmI lEdu.vEsina venTanE pablish avutundanna vokka sAkutO vADu rAsindi rAngA lEndi nEnu vUrukODamEnTani rASi pOyaDam tappinchi.mA vyAsam telIkanDA mUsukupOyina kaLLanu teripinchEdukE.adE panigA kaLLu mUsukonnOLLaku gAdu.mEm pichchukalam gAmani mIku telsindi gadA chachchu salahAlApi ippaTikainA asalu vishayamlOki ranDi chUddAm
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 1, Jul 2005 9:45:26 PM IST appuDE yEvaindi,mIku tIrikainappuDu antA kudirinappuDu nA gurinchi mIrAScharya paDagalavennO vunnAyilEnDi
mI visurla gurinchi jAbitA avasaramlEdu.I kAmenTokaTi jAlu.inkA kAvalanTE kavitvamanTE vyAsamlOnivI chAlu.nA sTayillO pAvO vantu kuDA vunDavu mI mATalu.mIru nErchukonna mATalu annE aitE nEnEmjEsEdi?
mIrrAstunna vATini jUstE mIku telugochchinaTTE telustOndi gAnI mATaleppuDu vin&lEdu sO mIkochchina telugentO nE cheppalEnu
mEdhAvitanam gurinchi mI namrata nAku nachchindi.kIpiTap.allAnE AndhrabhOjatvam gurinchInU.nAtO ellAnTi parichayam lEkanDAnE salahAlivvanochchAru gadA,dInni prEmanTArA lEka daurbhAgyamanTArA?tElchukOnDi
ainA nIku evaru cheppinArannA nAku rAyalasIma bAsha rAdani?karNa piSAchi yEvainA vachchi cheppinAdA?pedda pedda baruvulu talakAya paina EsukOni EsukOni chitikipOyinAvEmO maLLI I baruvendulE annA
SrISrI gurinchi nE jEsindi asamabaddha prayatnamA.mIru chEsi chUpanDi sambaddha prayatnamellA vunTundO.nE jeppina vudAharaNalO prajalu arthamjEsukODAniki yEvI lEdA?purANa pratIkalni abhyudayavAdAniki vADukOvaDam SrISrI vidvattuku nidarSanamni nE rAsindi evari kOsam ?mIrannArE 'pichchikalu'vAri kOsam.mIlAnTivAru avE panktullO Em kottagA kanipeTTAro cheppanDi chUddAm
yEvannAru? nAku anukUlangA vunna vATi mIdanE mATTADutAnA?EdI mIku anukUlangA vunnadAnnivvanDi chUddAm .chEsi chUpichchinadAnni 'habbE'ani chapparinchEyaDam chAlA suluvu.
Dhamarukam lAnTi 'kavita'ni vachanamani tElchEsina mIku nA jOhArlu.EdI koddigA mOginchanDi vindAm A SabdAnni
padya kavitvAnni enDagaTTina mI vyAsamlO enta sin&siyAriTI vundi?asalu padyakavitvAnni avagAhantO chadivArA?lEdE.A prakriyani vO sAmAjika Arthika kONamlOnunDE jUsAru.mI dRushTi O kavigA pAThakunigA kAka vO rAjakIyavEttalA vunDabaTTi andulOni goppadanam kanipinchakapOyindi.vEmana padyAlni,SatakAlni yE lekkalO vEstAru?jAshuvA gabbilam sangatEviTi? DabbulistE vilAsam ivvakapOtE vilApam chEshTalu ippuDulEvA?avArDullannI nijamaina arhulakE ichchArA?
padya kavitvam paTla yEviTi mI dRukpadham ?mIkunna avagAhana?nAlugu yUnivarSiTi chachchu rIserchulni chadivi A kavitA prakriyani praSinchE levelukeLLAru gadA,mundoka padyam rAyanDi appuDu telisostundi andulOni Sakti.
mA prayAtnAlni nIrugArchaDAniki mIrevvarani praSinchukonnAru chUDanDi adi nAku bAgA nachchindi.mIrevvarO kAdu ganaka chEtanaitE yuktiyuktangA mATlADanDi, mA vyAsamku sambandhinchina vATikE parimitamavvanDi mA tIrutennU pai puchchu salahAloddu
kavita rAyAlanTE oka ettuku edigE rAyAli.asalu oka levelukochchAkE rAyaDAniki dhiryam puTTEdi.gAnI ikkaDadEmI lEdu.vEsina venTanE pablish avutundanna vokka sAkutO vADu rAsindi rAngA lEndi nEnu vUrukODamEnTani rASi pOyaDam tappinchi.mA vyAsam telIkanDA mUsukupOyina kaLLanu teripinchEdukE.adE panigA kaLLu mUsukonnOLLaku gAdu.mEm pichchukalam gAmani mIku telsindi gadA chachchu salahAlApi ippaTikainA asalu vishayamlOki ranDi chUddAm
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 1, Jul 2005 9:44:48 PM IST appuDE yEvaindi,mIku tIrikainappuDu antA kudirinappuDu nA gurinchi mIrAScharya paDagalavennO vunnAyilEnDi
mI visurla gurinchi jAbitA avasaramlEdu.I kAmenTokaTi jAlu.inkA kAvalanTE kavitvamanTE vyAsamlOnivI chAlu.nA sTayillO pAvO vantu kuDA vunDavu mI mATalu.mIru nErchukonna mATalu annE aitE nEnEmjEsEdi?
mIrrAstunna vATini jUstE mIku telugochchinaTTE telustOndi gAnI mATaleppuDu vin&lEdu sO mIkochchina telugentO nE cheppalEnu
mEdhAvitanam gurinchi mI namrata nAku nachchindi.kIpiTap.allAnE AndhrabhOjatvam gurinchInU.nAtO ellAnTi parichayam lEkanDAnE salahAlivvanochchAru gadA,dInni prEmanTArA lEka daurbhAgyamanTArA?tElchukOnDi
ainA nIku evaru cheppinArannA nAku rAyalasIma bAsha rAdani?karNa piSAchi yEvainA vachchi cheppinAdA?pedda pedda baruvulu talakAya paina EsukOni EsukOni chitikipOyinAvEmO maLLI I baruvendulE annA
SrISrI gurinchi nE jEsindi asamabaddha prayatnamA.mIru chEsi chUpanDi sambaddha prayatnamellA vunTundO.nE jeppina vudAharaNalO prajalu arthamjEsukODAniki yEvI lEdA?purANa pratIkalni abhyudayavAdAniki vADukOvaDam SrISrI vidvattuku nidarSanamni nE rAsindi evari kOsam ?mIrannArE 'pichchikalu'vAri kOsam.mIlAnTivAru avE panktullO Em kottagA kanipeTTAro cheppanDi chUddAm
yEvannAru? nAku anukUlangA vunna vATi mIdanE mATTADutAnA?EdI mIku anukUlangA vunnadAnnivvanDi chUddAm .chEsi chUpichchinadAnni 'habbE'ani chapparinchEyaDam chAlA suluvu.
Dhamarukam lAnTi 'kavita'ni vachanamani tElchEsina mIku nA jOhArlu.EdI koddigA mOginchanDi vindAm A SabdAnni
padya kavitvAnni enDagaTTina mI vyAsamlO enta sin&siyAriTI vundi?asalu padyakavitvAnni avagAhantO chadivArA?lEdE.A prakriyani vO sAmAjika Arthika kONamlOnunDE jUsAru.mI dRushTi O kavigA pAThakunigA kAka vO rAjakIyavEttalA vunDabaTTi andulOni goppadanam kanipinchakapOyindi.vEmana padyAlni,SatakAlni yE lekkalO vEstAru?jAshuvA gabbilam sangatEviTi? DabbulistE vilAsam ivvakapOtE vilApam chEshTalu ippuDulEvA?avArDullannI nijamaina arhulakE ichchArA?
padya kavitvam paTla yEviTi mI dRukpadham ?mIkunna avagAhana?nAlugu yUnivarSiTi chachchu rIserchulni chadivi A kavitA prakriyani praSinchE levelukeLLAru gadA,mundoka padyam rAyanDi appuDu telisostundi andulOni Sakti.
mA prayAtnAlni nIrugArchaDAniki mIrevvarani praSinchukonnAru chUDanDi adi nAku bAgA nachchindi.mIrevvarO kAdu ganaka chEtanaitE yuktiyuktangA mATlADanDi, mA vyAsamku sambandhinchina vATikE parimitamavvanDi mA tIrutennU pai puchchu salahAloddu
kavita rAyAlanTE oka ettuku edigE rAyAli.asalu oka levelukochchAkE rAyaDAniki dhiryam puTTEdi.gAnI ikkaDadEmI lEdu.vEsina venTanE pablish avutundanna vokka sAkutO vADu rAsindi rAngA lEndi nEnu vUrukODamEnTani rASi pOyaDam tappinchi.mA vyAsam telIkanDA mUsukupOyina kaLLanu teripinchEdukE.adE panigA kaLLu mUsukonnOLLaku gAdu.mEm pichchukalam gAmani mIku telsindi gadA chachchu salahAlApi ippaTikainA asalu vishayamlOki ranDi chUddAm
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 1, Jul 2005 9:42:34 PM IST
inta deesenT gaa maTlaaDutaarani modaTa mee daggara nunDi ekspekT chaeyalaedu. aemainaa....mee maaTalaku samaadhaanam cheppalsina karTasee feel ayyaanu.
meeku samaadhaanam raaya boayae mundu...... naa meeda inta pedda abhaanDam vaeyaDam tagadu. mee meeda sagam visurlu naavaenaa? mee 'absarDiTee ' lisT laa jaabitaa teeyanDi. ayinaa induloa visurlaemundi? meeru ikkaDa unna vaLLaku naerpinchina sTailae kadaa? nijaaniki mee sTaillo naa maaTalu paavu vantu kooDaa laedu. meeraemoa vaaTini visulru anTaaru. okka saari naa mooti tippuDu gurinchi kaaka nae cheppina vishayam gurinchi maTlaaDudaamaa?
modaTa goppa vimarSakulatoa maaTlaaDaanu ani naenu anaDam loa I am not authenticating myslef annadi meeru artham chaesukoavaali. meeru nannu telugu kooDaa sariggaa maaTlaaDani vedhava anukunnaa naaku parledu. ( sariggaa ilaanae kaakunnaa ilaa annaaru, anTaaru, anToo unTaaru ) nijaaniki naenu maedhaavini kaadu meelaa.
aandhra bhoajaa annadi ae maatramoo parichayam laeni nannu inta praemagaa pilichaarani telusukoalaeni daurbhaagyunni. mee abhimaanaaniki arhuDu kaani ee aandhra bhoajunni kshaminchanDi.
ika naa 'faisal ' gurinchi. prati kaviki prati vimarSakuDiki ( ID kaadu) prati kaLaakaaruDiki tana samskRuti chaTram nunDi bayaTa paDi vaastavaanni chooDDam chaalaa choaTla feilyoor gaa nae proov ayindi. meeku raayala seema maanDaleeka maina faisal anna prayoagam artham kaapoatae artham chaeyinchae bRuhattara baadhyata nu tala meeda vaesukoalaenu.
ika Sree Sree gurinchi meeru prayatninchina asambadhdha prayatnam gurinchi. vaastav gaaru....ilaa aavaeSangaa oka kavita raasaesi naaku ' aemee teleedanukunTunnaavu kaaboalu choosaavaa naa taDaakhaa ' anToo modalu peTTaDam charcha kaadu. prati charchaku konni prerequisites unTaayi. andukae systematic ground avasaram. antae gaani charchinchaalsina vishayam kaaka meeku telisina vishayam maatramae maaTlaaDaalani aa vishayam daggarae charcha modalu peTTaalani koarukoavaDam chinna pillaaDilaa goamu chaeyaDam tappa...induloa charcha raekittinchae uddaeSyaalu aemee laenaTtae. ippaTikee cheptunnaa...modaTa oka avagaahanaa vyaasam raayanDi. oka systematic gaa modalu peTTanDi. charchiddaam. (ee nela padi varaku konchem kudaradu. aa tarvaata naenu paarTisipaeT chaestaa. ) ekkaDoa aedoa oka kavita teesukuni vetukkuni mee Ngaanam ekkaDa enta ekkuvundi ani chooyinchae prayatnam kaakunDaa Sree Sree nunDi prajalu telusukoavaalsindi aemiToa teliya jeppanDi. andarikee upayoagam adi.
ika mee kavitvam meedi vyaasam....janaala kaLLu teripinchaDaaniki raasaaraa? mimmalni gaaDida ani tiDtunnaa entoa oarimitoa inta mandi manasulu maarchaDaaniki meeru kavitvam anTae ani vyaasam raasaaraa?....ika anduloa sTaf..nijaaniki naenu peddagaa charchincha dalchukoalaedu aa vyaasam. aa vyaasam loa nibaddhata laedu. sin'siyaariTee laedu. vachanam kaanidi kavitvamaa? chooyinchanaa vachanalatoa ninDi poayina Dhamarukam laanTi kavitvaanni. nijam mimmalni chaalenj chaeyaDam kaadu. modaTi vaakyam toaTae mee avagaahana artham ayyindi. meeru eTu narukkellalanukunnaaroa telisindi. meeloa vachanaaniki vyaavahaarikangaa unDae spoken telugu ku ( chee vedhavanu ! telugu sariggaa aedchi chaavadu ) kavitvaaniki linku peTTaeppuDu unna kanfyoojan telustundi. idi randhraanvaeshaNa ani meeranukunTae adi meekae vadilaestunnaanu. I think aa vyaasam meeda naenu tega eksaiT ayyi charchinchae vishayam aemee laedu anipinchindi.
ika meeru aadhunika kavitvam gurinchi chaesae prayatnaalu ...andunaa anenu neeru gaarchaDam. chooDanDi...mimmalni neeru gaarchaDaaniki naenevvaranu? mee ishTam? ayinaa meeru koarukunae janaalu mimmalni nammae janaalu ' sTaf ' nu kadaa choostaaru? naa maaTalloa neeLLanu choostaaraa?..kaabaTTi naenu mimmalni neeru gaarustunnaanu ani meeru feel kaavaDam....ukroasham tappa aemee kaadu. mee ' sTaf' meeru kanTinyoo chaeyanDi. mee ' yuga dharama karta ' sTail meeku elaagoo undi daanitoa paaTu. meeru adae beleev chaestaaru elaagoo.
vaastav gaaru...chaalaa baadhatoa cheptunnaa....( appaTikee naa badhaa choosi meeru karigae simpathee naakoddu gaani naa concern artham chaesukunTae chaalu)...kavitvam choosi kavi sthaayi anchanaa vaeyalaeraa meeru? kavitvam choosi kavi enta varaku edigaaDoa telusukoalaeraa meeru?...kavi saamskRutika sthaayini kavitvaanni baTTi anchanaa vaeya laeraa?...antaa telisi aedoa konta prayatnam chaestunna vaarini vyaktigatangaa ( meeru 'sTaf' toa chaesina vimarSa paTla naaku ishyoo laedu. saahitee vimarSa suti mettagaanae unDa kooDadu ani nammae vaaDiloa okaDini. alaa ani vyaktigatanga moadaDam kooDaa sari kaadu. kavi aatmaabhimaanaaniki respekT istoo..kavitvam loa oka deergha kaalika dRukpatham toa enDa gaTTaDam saahityaaniki entoa avasaram. paigaa nijaaniki meeru vaestunnadi pichchuka pai brhamaastraalu. adi sari kaadu. vimarSukuDi ( ID kaadu ) kanTae mundu meeru manushyulu. kaadaa?
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 1, Jul 2005 6:27:46 PM IST AndhrAjI
goppa vimarSakultO mIru mATlADAru.santOsham .nEnu kUDA kalisAnu, mATlADAnu,telsukonnAnu.nA pai vunna tiTlu,visurlu ellAgu ikkaDa kanipistUnE vunnAyi.andulO sagam mInunDE vochchAyi.ikkaDa ati nIchamaina tiTlanu nEnu edurkonnAnu.nannu gADidA annA paTTinchukOlEdu.gAnI mIku AndhrabhOjA annadi maha cheDDa ekasekkengA anipinchindi.AndhrabhOjuDiki anta viluvundannamATa
sAhitI charcha gurinchi.nA kavita 'adi'lO nE jEsindEviTi?charcha kAdA?faisal anna vokka padam vADi adoka prayOgangA nirUpinchukObOyAru.andulO mIrichchina vivaraNalu chadivAnu.adE nA kavita gurinchi vivarinchabOtE 'chachchinA mI kavita gurinchi cheppukOkanDi'nAkoka salahAnichchAru.'SrISrI gurinchi vimarSinchanDi chAtanaitE' ani savAl visirAru.'vimarSalO nA vantaipOyindi iha mI vantu' anTE nuvvu bommokkaTi vEsi veLLipOyAru.?'adi' kavitalO guDA SrISrI kavitanokaTi ichchi idE rakam imEjarIyO cheppanDanTE mI nunDi riplai lEdu.idEnA mI sAhitya charcha?
ikkaDa kavitalrAstunna vALLallO koddimandiki dAni vivarAlu telIka rAstunnArani,koddimandi konni chadivi adE kavitvamanukoni rAstunnArani,koddimandi profeshal jIvitam nunDi rilIju kADAniki kavitvam rAstunnArani,kontamandi ennArailani, vALLaku telugu bAgA rAkapOyinA prayatnistunnArani rakarakAla kAraNAlu vinipinchAru.anchAta vyAsAnni vIlainanta saraLangA vALLa kOsam rAstE, 'I vishayAlu andarikI telsinavE' ani mIru chapprinchEsAru.padyakavitanu pakkana neTTEddAm anna vyAsam rAsina mIru Adhunika kavitvam gurinchi vILLaku mundastugAnE vivaristU vyAsam enduku rAyalEdu?mI vantu prayatnam lEdu gAnI mA vantu prayatnAnni nILLu gArchaDam ,andulO maLLi mAku salahAlivvaDam ! EviTidantA?
kiraNajI,SastrIjI gAri sAhityapu balam pai ellAnTi takkuva bhAvanallEvu.ikkaDunna kavitallO konni patrikallO vostunna kavitala kanTE unnatasthAyilO vunnAyi.mA baiTa prayatnAlu mIku cheppanu gAka cheppa.yendukanTE maLLi vO vuchita salahAnivva galru 'mI gurinchi mIru kattitO poDichinA cheppakUDadani'
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 1, Jul 2005 11:53:03 AM IST ayinaa mee saahitee prapancham loa kaerakTars kiraN, aandhruDu, minee, Saastri veellaenaa....laif bolaDu undanDi bayaTa. inkaa kuLLu saahityam vastundi samaajam loa. nikRushhTa saahityam vastundi pustakaala shaap loa. daanni enDagaTTanDi. kavitvam evari prayoajanam koasamoa taelchi cheppanDi. kavitvam evari koasam elaa unDaaloa cheppanDi. oka pustakam raddaam. mahaa anTae oa padi vaelu iravai vaelu egurutaayi. antaenaa?....mee oopu mundu idi pedda lekkanukoanu. meeralaa chaestae naa boaTi vaallu samidha nokkaTi aahutivvalaeraa?
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 1, Jul 2005 1:58:45 AM IST :)
idaem laajikku anDi ? :) :)
nijangaa naaku navvostundi......baaga ...chaalaa.....:) :)..
mimmalni pogiDIna vaaLLa lisT...tegaDina vaaLLa lisT kampaer chaeya laeka poaayaaraa?....maree inta immaechyoorD maaTalu vaddanDi. maLLee cheppaedaemanTae responsibe criticism mukhyam. mana vimarSaku manam baadhyata teesukoavaali. eduTi vaaLLaa ignoarens mana blessing kaadu. inkaa meeru raasina vimarSala lisT teesi viSlaeshinchudaamaa? meeru mee abhinandalni kanveeniyanTgaa teesaaru. absarDiTee lisT chadivaaru. adee chaeddaam !...kaapoatae enta samayam vRudhaa..enta samayam upayoagam? kashTamae cheppaDam !
aemee anukoavaddu.....meeloa unnadi vimarSakuDaa ( ID kaadu) laekaa saahitee yuga purushuDaa? laeka yuga dharma sidhdaanta kartaa? laeka kaliyuga purushuDaa?
idaem paTTudalanDee?...kae vee aar, chaeraa, koDavaTi ganTi, tripuranaeni.....enni vimarSalu choosaanu...chadivaanu...maaTlaaDaanu.....vaaLLaaku kooDaa inta paTTudala kanipinchalaedu.
ilaa naenu manchi vimarSakunni nammanDi baaboay ani enduku mottukoavaDam? anta avasaramaa? ponanee vedhavalu purugulu paTTi chastaaru....
alaa kaadu manam oka Sree Sree gurinchoa, kavitaa Saili gurinchoa oka professional discussion peDdaamaa? everyone can enjoy it . mallee eka sekkam chaestoo..ahoa aandhra bhoajaa anToo pilichi..maunaanni cheri sagam koasukunnaavaa anToo naa kuSala samaachaaraalu tarvaata maaTlaaDudaamu. naa vykati gata praSnalu meekoddu. mee vyakti gata dhoaraNulu naakoddu. andarikee upayoagapaDae charcha modalu peTTanDi. mana samayaanni padi mandiki organised gaa upayoaginchaDaaniki naenu reDee
PS : parsanal gaa konta vichaaramae. kaanee saahitee prayoajanaanni saadhinchani Ngaanam prajalaku prayojananni ivvani maedhaavi tanam vaLLa evvarikee origindaemee laedu. parsanal gaa meyil chaeddaam anukunnaa nijaaniki. kaani alavaaTu laedu alla. tappaeTTu laedani ilaa....
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 1, Jul 2005 1:49:54 AM IST i am back here to answer the comments not to comment on budding talents.for that u r there & many elder r there
when i hv written those comments poet has used krishna sastri's lines as it is.against two of us so many r there.so both the statements were & are not only vindicated but gained enough strength
if copying poems is a regular practice of this site learned persons like u shud try to stop that than pulling down critics like us
i am sure that at lest Ms.Mini wud stop copy & pasting of somebody's poems.i feel that i cud stop one person from doing so.if some body does it in future same policy of me wud stop them.so our policing is paying some good results
let me see if the following lines from some budding talents emails can say something to u all
'Your comments are quite good. In fact, Vimarsak's too. '
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hi alok,
thnx for ur comments.further suggestions are always welcome.....
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'hai andi vastav gaaru,nenu oka pranayam raasina ammayini.thanks andi opigga suggestions ichinanduku.meeku tella kaagitam nachindaa.adikooda nene rasanu'
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Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 30, Jun 2005 8:43:41 PM IST
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