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| baagundi....parlEdu anDi... first stanza lO last line endukO suit kaalEdanipistundi keep writing
Tulasimohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 30, Jun 2005 6:12:16 AM IST
chaalaa baavuMdi... iMkaa saraLaM gaa raayaMDi.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 29, Jun 2005 12:02:03 PM IST
First stanza last line is not impressive. The poem is good. Is the title apt?
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 29, Jun 2005 11:23:19 AM IST
2nd stanza varaku baagaanEvundanDi taruvaata artham kaalEdu :(
Posted by: Mrs. ψ శకి౨ ψ At: 29, Jun 2005 10:42:34 AM IST
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