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Articles: Short Stories | | kiTikI - prayANaM | |
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| naaku aitE nijaaniki renDO pEjee vipareetangaa nachchindi. aa TempO taruvaata kathalOnoo lEdu mundu kathalOnoo lEdu. asalu katha raaddaamani modalupeTTi adi maree parsanal ayi Dairee laa ayipOyindEmO ani naa sandEham. renDO pEjee raasina vidhaanam baTTi choostE meeku manchi skil undi. daaniki baagaa padunu peTTi kaasta nEpugaa katha naDipinchanDi.
Keep writing. BTW..I am not an expert. I jus wrote wht i felt abt the story. this is a 'aam aadmee' view about this story. U can ignore these comments if u prefer to. Don't come for a war on me.... :))
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 15, Apr 2006 7:19:13 PM IST
Hello prasanthi gaaru,
Nenu ippatidaaka mee abhimaanini...ee kadha chadivaaka mee veerabhimaanini ayyayanu. Kitiki prayaananni intaa baaga varnichachu...daanini jeevita prayaananto compare chestoo inta baagaa visleshinchachu ani teliyaledu...bahusaa ee vyaasaanni ye kadhala poteelaku pampinaa first prize kottestundi...
adbhutamgaa raasaaru...Hats off! keep it up
Posted by: Mrs. kavita ganduri At: 6, Apr 2006 3:56:38 AM IST
ee katha 'gunDammakatha', 'missamma' levello unnadanTaaraa Mr.Rudra?
Posted by: Mrs. Neelima At: 8, Jul 2005 10:05:56 AM IST
Thank you all once again. I have many more in the kitty. Few I pen and left. Didn't have time or may be concentration to type and post. Everytime I see some comments, I wish to type them and post. Let us see. Meenakshi garu, you need not feel sorry. You expressed your opinion.
Kiranmayi garu, Yes. I like the word Snigdha very very much. That name will be there in each and every story of mine:))
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 30, Jun 2005 9:38:16 AM IST
Prashanti garu,
naku ilanti feelings vastu untayi kani express cheyatam radu. mana manasulo emanukuntunnamo chadivevallaki arthamayyela cheppatam goppa art. chala bagundi. mee ongol passenger, Geeta gari Vijayawada passenger la maku maa kakinada velle Prashanti Express, Seshadri express chuste ade feelings. ippatiki nenu, maa husband, maa tammudu ilane kottukuntam window seat gurinchi.
Entha exact ga rasaro...
Keep it up. Expecting many more such good articles from you....
P.S : Meeku Snigdha anna perante chala istama? mee 2,3 stories lo ade peru pettaru?
Posted by: Mrs. Kiranmayi P At: 30, Jun 2005 9:09:51 AM IST
praSaanti gaaru chaalaa baagaa raasaaru :-)
enta chakkagaa manasulOnibhaavaalaku addam paTTi choopinaTTu cheppaaru anDi ...
ayyO raama ee kiTikI kOsam nEnu oka saari abaddam kooDaa cheppanu pakka sITu vaaLLatO .. naaku saradaanE kiTikI prayaaNam :) naaku haidaraabaad nunchchi vijayawaada pravaiT bas ayinaa kiTikI pakka dorakalEdu sarE oka peddaavida koorchunnadi naa pakkana aviDaki naaku bas prayaaNam anta paDadu tala tirigi vaantulu avutaay ani cheppi marI koorchchunnaa anta ishTam naaku :(
nijamE manalO chaalaa mandiki chinna chinna chilipi kOrikalu unTaay vaaTiki vaysutO sambandham unDadu ..enduku anTE naa kooturini uyyaala ooginchaTaaniki paark tisuku vleitE nEnuu oogakunDa raalEnu ... naaku adO saradaa uyyaala oogaTam :)
snigdha laa naaku onTari prayaaNam lO bhayamu ... bOr fIl avvanu frenDs unTE sari kaburlatO lEkapOtE aa kaasEpaTiki adE naa prapancham laa fIl ayipOtaa andarini absarv chEstuu nO inkaa pakka vaaLLatO kaburlu cheputuunO lEkaa gata smRutulani nemarEsukOVaTam lOnO ( naaku baaga ishTam gaDichina rOjulani nemarEsukOvaTam ) ... :-)
ongOl paasenjer laa naaku vijayawaaDa veLLinappuDu 222 vijayawaaDaa - vuyyuru bas choostE EdO teliyani aanandam kaligiddi anDi
prati okkariki evO evO bhaavaalu unTaayi kaani andaru avi expres chEyalEru mIru mI bhaavaalani chaalaa chakkagaa raasaaru praSaanti gaaru :-)
Posted by: Mrs. ♪ ♪ music ♪ ♪ At: 30, Jun 2005 7:29:25 AM IST
praSaanti gaaru mee articles,poetry anni chaalaa baagunTaayi.
specially articles they give fresh,natural feeling.
I like your positive attitude very much but I feel some change these days.
Sorry to interfere.
Posted by: Mrs. Meenakshi S At: 30, Jun 2005 2:41:56 AM IST
chaalaa chaalaa baavundanDi praSaanti gaaru... prayaaNamlO edurayyE prati anubhavaanni chaalaa suniSitam gaa pariSeelinchi, vaaTiki mee bhaavaalni jODinchaaru...
Posted by: Nishigandha At: 29, Jun 2005 10:23:03 PM IST
Somehow the story got deleted when it posted first time. I have been thinking of posting it and postponed it:) I am happy that second innings is also doing well :) Thank you all for your comments.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 29, Jun 2005 9:51:18 PM IST
sekanD rilIjo Emo teliyadu kaani nEnu modaTisaari chaduvutunnaa...chaalaa adbhutamgaa vraasaaru ....nijamgaa uuhaku praaNam pOyaDamE asalu sisalaina kathalanTE.....
mitrulu cheppinaTTugaa..manchi sinimaalu sekanD rilIj ainaa baagunTayi oka 'gumDamma katha' mari 'missamma' laagaa...
Rudra
Posted by: Mr. Rudra Kottu At: 29, Jun 2005 5:16:09 PM IST
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