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Articles: Short Stories | | aMtA iMtE | |
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| manakEmi kaavaalo nirdhisTam gaa telusukOgaligi (amdukei Sramistu )
spasTam gaa itarulaku cheppagaligite ( kamunikeshan gyaapu lekumDaa )
E iddarimadhya bamdhameinaa , snehameina chakkagaa vumTumdi
vokarikokaru sahaayam cheyagalagaTam sulabhamutumdi
kaani praNav cheppinaTlu
kOlpoyina kshaNAlAlo jIvistU
jIvimchaalsina kshaNAlanu kOlpOtu ..
emto aspasTataku , asahananiki guriavutaamu ...
amduke chinna chinni vijayaala (vivaadaala )dvaaraa mana ahaanni truptiparuchukumTaamu
Posted by: Realize - Revive At: 7, Jul 2005 10:50:38 PM IST
nEnu cheppadalchukunnadi kiraN gaaru, vimarSakuDu gaaru, soumyaa cheppEsaaru.... :)
kaanee mee bhaavaalu baavunnaayi... keep writing...
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 7, Jul 2005 7:29:29 PM IST
Thank you Vimarsakji and Sowmya. Yes. I should learn to develop the plot and create and infuse life into the characters. I will keep on hold the other themes and work out on them and then post.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 7, Jul 2005 5:40:37 PM IST
indulO katha laKshaNaalu takkuvanE cheppaali . chinna skiT laagaa undi.
kaani mee theem baagundi. ee theem ni kaasta DiskaShan dhOraNi lO kaaka katha laa raayaDaaniki prayatninchanDi. ika ' yang vimen - feminisT sTOrees' viShayanikostE adi evarevari vyaktigata abhipraayam anukunTaa ... inkaa vimarSakuDu gaari kaamenTlu kooDaa naaku sababu gaanE tOstunnaayi.
chinna kathalu annavi eppuDu puDataayO gata aadivaaram andhra jyOti anubandam sanDE kaamenT SeerShika lO ilaa undi -
' bahuSaa renDu sandharbaallO chinna kathalu puTTukostaayEmO .
andarikee telisina jeevitham gurinchi chePPeTappuDu, okaanoka jeevita Sakalam gurinchi maatramE cheppETappuDu. Sakalaala madhya sambandam artham ayyE koddee, jeevitham paripoorNangaa telisE koddee aa chinna kathalE kaavyaalavutaayi. aa kaavyaalE malli chinna kathaloutaayi. '
idi ikkaDa relavent kaadu. kaani , cheppaalanipinchindi.
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 7, Jul 2005 5:00:32 PM IST
nEneppuDU ijaala gurinchi aalOchimchalEdanDI.. kanuka mIraDiginaTlu nEnu dInni gurinchi vyaaKyaanimchaDaaniki anarhuDini. saarI..
Posted by: పూలవాన At: 7, Jul 2005 3:15:18 PM IST
To be frank there is nothing artificial here and completely true. It happened in our hostel, the same flow, the same questions etc., Nothing came from the ideas but I just wrote as it is as what was happened. I was reading 'I Dare' of Kiran Bedi and Pratima has Adbul Kalam's 'Wings of Fire' and Rama read few of Volgaji's books at that time.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 7, Jul 2005 12:42:10 PM IST
Thank u Kiranji. I want 'nirmohamaatamaina' feedback only. I always welcome the frank opinions and the positive criticism.
I didn't master the art to create characters and master the plot.
Reg. the chance for opposition, 3 girls in the hostel are talking and one of them is in confusion with respect to supporting the views and her opinion. If I project any male character there, then there might be some opposition or their point of view. I didn't. My intention in this so called story is to project the views of women. Thats it.
I didn't declare that it should be so and so as an author.
Coming to the question of 'pichchi pichchi praSnalu', I meant it. Because the girl asked them and she after listening to all the answers, still opined that 'Male are like that only and it is good and required of them'. This is not related to her. It is in the subconscious of women. 'purusha swAmya vyavasthalo jeernimchukupoyina bhaavaalu'.
The title is decided keeping in view this notion only.
I know many people, great writers too, who suggests young women not to read the stories of feminists. This is true and the fact.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 7, Jul 2005 12:36:47 PM IST
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