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rasAlu teliyavu rangulu teliyavu
alankAramU Chandas teliyav
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pai vAkyAlEmjebutunnAy ?telIvU anE gadA ? tiliyappuDu telsukonTAnannA anAli.antEgAnI 'tOchindi' rAstAnanTE ellA ? allA rAstE 'garam masAlA' Taipu kavitalostAy .avE ishTamaitE chadUkOnDi
I kavita prakAram kavi lakshyam avArDulu rivArDulu anna tappuDu vUha kanapaDutOndi.nijavaina kavitvam rAsEvALLu sadaru rivArDulni lekkalOki tIsukOru
'manasukochchindi' kAdu rAyaDam 'nachchindi' rAyaDam kavi prAthamika lakshaNam .goDDu AvESam arupulu kavitalu kAlEvu.AllAgE enDu vUhalu kUDA.vokkOsAri kavikE tana rAtlu nachchav , A mATalu kavi manasulOnunchi vochchinA.dInni yE gATana kaTTEstAru? kavi anni samayAllOnU kavi kADu. vokAnoka kshaNamlO mAtramE. A kshaNamlO kavini kaTTivEsEvi balamaina bhAvalE gAnI manasulOki vochchina annI bhAvAlu kAvu.
ihapOtE kAmarsu vidyArthini telugu mAshTAru diddaDam nE kannadi vinnadi gAdu.anchAta dInnO pedda lAjikku kinda tIsukOnu. pOnI illA voddAm .kAmarsu voka sabjekT telugu voka sabjekT .dEni lakshaNAlu dAnivi.allAnE vyAsam vEru kavita vEru kathalu vEru viSlEshaNalu vEru. kavita rAsETappuDu dAnni lakshaNAlnE anusarinchAli.antEgAnI ishTam vochchinaTTu rAstAnanaDam bhAvyangA lEdu. kavitvam illAgE rAyalnna rUlu enduku vunDakUDadu? bomma gIyAlannA, sangItam pADAlannA, tabalA vAyinchAlannA chivaraku TelifOnulO mATlADAlannA konni 'skils ' kAvAli. atyuttama kaLaku avEvI vunDakUDadanaDam yentavaraku sarinO mIrE yOchinchanDi
pAThak tambI. voddammA anta virasamoddu.muduru benDakAyalni tarigE badulu lEta benDakAyalaku ruchuladditEnE mElu.ainA nI kOrikanenduku kAdanAlA. daggari bhavishyattulO sO kAlD sankalana chakravartula pai kUDA rAstAnulE.andAkA veyiT vAch anD rID
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 14, Jul 2005 8:43:24 PM IST alOk gArU
nE chadavanu telsukOnu ani kavitalO lEdu..
tochimdi rAstAnannADu. manasukochchimdi rAyaTamE
kavikumDAlsina pradhamalakshaNam..amTAnEnu..
alA amchelamchalugA edugutAru..
kAmarsu rAsina vidyArtini telugu
pamDitulu tappamTE oppukumTArA..
alAgE udyogulu kUdA evari fIlD vALladi
imkO fIlD atanu vachchi EdEdO rAsAvE amTE..
oppukumTAmA..
mIru cheppimdE pramANam kAdu ..ilAgE umDAlanna nibamdhanalu lEvu aTuvamTappudu
evari aBiruchiki vALLani vadilEstE mamchidi ani nA aBiprAyam..
ilA rAsinA alA rAsinA faravAlEdannachOTallA ..ilaagE rAyAli..amTam bAlEdu....adE goDavaki kAraNam.
ekkaDo o chOTa mugimpu palakAli.. adi ikkaDE emduku kAkUDadu..?
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 13, Jul 2005 10:57:38 PM IST rOkaTlOnU,pulinOTlOnU EkangA talE dUrchAka iha bhujAltO panundanTArA?
bahuSA mI arasunnA anta panI jEstunDochchu adi tIsEsi chUDanDi
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 13, Jul 2005 10:12:56 PM IST
kaadaMDee, einaa alaa bhujaalu eMduku taDumukuMTaaru?
marO saMgati
'nava@M ta' aMTE oMTlO nalata, alasaTa, daaridryaM vaMTi dikkumaalina arthaalE dorukutunnaaYi. krottatanaM anE arthaM dorakaTaMlEdu - eMdukanO!
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 13, Jul 2005 8:31:58 PM IST mI salahA nAkEnA sAr ?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 13, Jul 2005 7:21:52 PM IST
ayyaa,
entamaMdi taamu vraayabOtunna daanini vraayabOyE muMdoo, vraastunnappuDoo, vraasina taruvaataa
choosi maree 'pOshTu' chEstunnaaru?
adEganuka jarugutoo uMTE inni
spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes & syntax mistakes#TEl eMduku vastaayi?
'navyata'ni mechchukuMdaaM. 'nava@M ta'ni kaadu.
aalOchiMchaMDi!
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 13, Jul 2005 5:01:52 PM IST ayyA vinAyakamjI
mIru kavitanI, nA kAmenTunI chakkagA chadivinaTlu lEdu.'nE chadavanu, telsukOnu, manasukochchindi rAstA'nani kavigAru prakaTinchAru.allAganTE kavulu SuddhamoddulaipOgalru, allA kAvaDam bAgOdu, anchAta chadUkOnDani nE cheppA
vO sTUDenTU, vO emplAyI 'nA ishTam vochchindi rAstAnu, chEstAnU' anTE evarinA voppukonTArA? allAnE 'kavita' rAyabOyE mundu asalA padArthamEnTi? dAni paddhatEnTi? manakanTE mundara evarainA yEvainA annArA,rAsArA vagairAlannI telsukOkanDAnE 'nA ishTam vochchindi rAstA' ani prakaTinchEstE ellA?oha vELa avEmI chadavakanDAnE rangamlO digAranukondAm.appuDevarainA vochchi 'illA kAdu sArU allA' ani cheppAranukOnDi rAtrantA nidra kaTTO,TIlu tAgO annOLLa pai kavitalrAsEkanTE adE Sraddhani goppOLLa kavitalni chadivEnduku kharchu jEstE bAgu paDEdi vALLEgAnI salahA ichchinOLLu gAdu.
iha entO mandi mechchukonnArannAru.AnandistunnArani gUDA annArukaDupumanTaltO vochchE mATalni lekkinchanavasaram lEdu.allAgE A AnandAnni guDAnU
arthamjEsukOrU
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 13, Jul 2005 2:22:53 PM IST kavi amTE Sudda
moddani tElchinavArevvarO..!!
vAri kosamEgA I kavita
imta mamdi mechchukumTunnAramTE..kavita bAgumdani kAdu... ayinA AnamdistunnAru..
artham chEsukOrU..!!
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 12, Jul 2005 11:05:08 PM IST
baaguMdi!
akavi eitE koMpalEM mulagalEdu
kukavi kaakuMDaa uMTE chaalu.
praacheena kavulaMdaroo
sukavistuti chESaaru,
kukaviniMda chESaaru.
akavini evaroo Emee anaru.
eMdukaMTE ataDu vaanapaamu maatramE!
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 12, Jul 2005 5:21:29 PM IST niraMkuSAya kavaya: annAru. kavi sarva svataMtruDu. eduTivALLani paruSha vAkyAlatO noppiMchakuMDA tanabhAvAlni velibuchchinaMtavarakU faravAlEdu. aMdarakI nachchAlani EmuMdi. nIguriMchE cheppukunnAvugAni, iMkokaLLani EmI analEdu kanuka bujAlu taDumukonnA lekhkha cheyyakkarlEdu. bAgA cheppAvayyA!
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 12, Jul 2005 5:05:32 PM IST
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