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| maryaadaa mohamaaTam ane^ renDu boochulu parishkaaraanni minge^stunnaayaa?
avunu avunu manamentainaa inDiyan&s kadaa prakkavaaLLa ko^sam bratukutaam. :)
chaalaa chaalaa baavundi Sreele^kha (naa kannaa vayasulo^ peddaite^ 'gaaru' yaaD che^suko^nDi), kavitani pogaDaTaaniki maaTalu dorakaTamle^du. :)
Posted by: Mr. Srinivas Turlapati At: 18, Aug 2005 7:03:57 PM IST
mee kavitalu chala bagunnai..articles kuda chaala intresting ga vunnai...future lo kuda inka enno rayalani korutunnanu..
dhairyam kosam ...eppudosthav kavita chaala bagundi..
cvchaitanya..
malinichaitanya@yahoo.co.in
Posted by: Mr. cvchaitanya cv At: 24, Jul 2005 12:43:55 PM IST
Sree laekha gaaru ! mee goppa tanam meeru contaminate kaakapoavaDamae. mammalni chooDanDi ( maemu anTae intaesi chaantaDanta viSlaeshaNa raasae naalaanTi prabuddhulu ) anni dhoaraNulatoa kalisi kalagaa pulagamai daenikee paniki raaka ilaa migilaem. mee kavita pai raasindi pogaDta kaadanDi. adee vimarSae ! vimarSa anTae tiDtoonae unDaalsina avasaram laedu. meedi miDi miDi Ngaanam ani oppukoavaDam mee nijaayitee. sRujanaatmakata nu manam conscious gaa formulate chaesaenta varaku blurred gaa anipinchavachchu. daanikoa systematic paint vaeyanDi. meeru choosi abbura paDakkapoatae nannaDaganDi. all the best and keep writing !
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 16, Jul 2005 3:51:57 AM IST
Chala Bagundhi,sri lekha garu.
Last varaku meeru wait chesedhi DHIRYAM kosam ani nenu guess cheyalekapoyanu.Nenu eppudo rasina oka chinni kavitha ni gurthu chesaru.Thanks.
-- sri
Posted by: SriSai At: 16, Jul 2005 3:10:11 AM IST
ee kavita gurinchi naa abhipraayaalu / viSlaeshaNa /vimarSa -
nijaaniki ee TP loa ee madhya entoa utsaahavantantulaina kavulu kavayitrulu vastunnaaru. chaalaa muchchaTaestundi. santoasham vaestundi. anduloa Zeal choosi. ika ee kavayitri nijaaniki chaalaa paata ( ai think seeniyar anTae baavuNNu ) membar ikkaDa. kaani enduvalloa chaalaa gyaap vachchindi. tanu raasina ' amma vachchi vellindi' ' goarinTaaku' ' siggu dontaralu ' etc loa vachchina adae sensitivity ee kavitaloa kooDaa dhvaninchindi.kaviki anubhooti mukhyam. anduloa nunDae Silpam puTTukostundi. adae nibaddataku naandi palukutundi. jeevitam loa prati anubhooti prati okkarikee unDadu. aa anubhootulanu pondae anubhavam prati okkarikee raadu. kavi baadhyata prati sensiTiv anubhootini paaTakuDiki tanaku telisina Teknik ..adee prajala bhaasha nunDi prajala vaaDuka nunDi prajala maaTala nunDi teesukuni......vaaDi paaTakuDiki vinipinchaDam.
ee kavitaloa kavayitri kRushi gamanistae - pradhaananga vaaDina Teknik loa vaaDina bhaashaloa goppa tanam kanipistundi. ayitae inta kanTae mukhyangaa vastuvu - niraaSaku guraina vyakti batakaDaanni enta niraaSagaa oppukunnaaDu ani. tanaloa kshaNikaavaesam loa jarigae sunnita maina sangharshaNaloa enta vairudhyam unTundi ani.
andukoasam kavayitri vishayanni modalugaa cheppadu. alaa ani paaTakunni saspen s loa peTTadu. alaa ani chikku muDi vaeyadu. allagae tegae daakaa laagadu....chivaragaa viDamarichi cheptundi ---dhairyamaa ekkaDUnnaav ni. paaTakuDu elated gaa feel ayyaedi akkaDae. anta varaku tananu abbura parichina vishayama gurinchi aloachinchaedi akkaDae.
asalu ae kavitakainaa manchi praarambham vannenistundi. modaTagaa paaTakuDini inkaa chadavaalanipinchaelaa chaestundi. tarvaata aem cheppalani kavi choostunnaDoa instigate chaestundi. oka seeriyas and machyoorD paaTakuDi koasam raastundi kavayitri. 'poddunnunchi ikkaDae koorchunnaa / chachchi poadaamani / nee jaaDa laedu ' ani. mari venTanae ' bayalau daerutunnappuDu naatoanae unnaavugaa ' ani chaTukkuna aaScharya poatundi. gamaninchanDi ee Teknik nu. poddunnunchi vaechi choosae manishi chappuna tanatonae unna oka vishayam maaya mayyindani aascharya poavaDam. idee chaalaa saadhaaraNangaa prati roaju mana jeevitam loa manam expereicne chaesae vishayamae. ayitae manam dainandina vaaDukaloa nunDi vaakya prayogaalanu aeri manaku oka vishayaanni vivarinchaalani chaesae kavayitri prayatnam abhinandaneeyam kaadaa? aemoa? naaku telisi ee kavayitri kavitalloa yati praasalu adhi vaastavikata goDavalu unDavu. alaa ani vaTTi vaaDuka vachanaalu unDavu. kaani mana bhaasha manam roajoo aloachinchae teeru manakae kottagaa vinipistundi ee kavayitri.
renDoa khanDika loa choostae oka gharshaNa kanipistundi. maLLee batakaalanae tapana kanipistundi. ika batakaDam tappadu anna preparation kanipistundi. ' amaantangaa oa chinna aaSa eduraitae enta baavuNNu ' anaesi ' neeDalaa venTabaDae ee cheekaTi karigipoatae ayinaa baavuNNu ' ani nissahaayangaa koarukoavaDam tappa aemi chaeyalaeni aSaktata. anTae chaavaDaaniki chaata kaanappuDu batakaDaaniki saakulu vedukkoavaDam anna maaTa.ayitae batakaalani saaku choosukunnaa tanaloa taragani gharshaNa inkaa undi ' maryaada mohamaaTam ee renDu boochulu ...' anTae ika tappadu batakaDam ani nissahaayangaa oppaesukunae paristhitini taeTa tellam chaeyaDam. ee kavita mottam meeda jarigina adbhuta prayoagam...maamoolugaa ayinaa sare ee kavayitri sTail ...idae...saadhaaraNa bhaashanu manam maaTlaaDukunae bhaashanu manaku vichitrangaa vinipinchaDam. nijaaniki ee kavita migataa kavitala kanTae oa millee meeTar sthaayi tagginaa manchi pada prayoagaalatoa vaakya nirmaaNam toa...manaloa aaloachananu sunnitangaa
ee kavayitri loa machyooriTee undi. bhaashaa aaDambaram laedu. kaani manasuku taakae sunnita maina bhaasha undi. modaTa chadivitae abba baagaa cheppindanipistundi. renDoa saari chadivitae nijangaa aem goppa bhaashaa prayoagam chaeyalaedae ani aaScharyam vaestundi. mooDoa sari chadivitae bhaashanu kaamplikaeT chaeyakunDaa inta sunnitangaa cheppaDam elaa saadhyamayyindi ani abburapaDDam avutundi.
ee kavayitriloa machyooriTee undi. alaa ani tana kavitalloa kavitvaanni saahityaanni aavaahaana chaesina vyaktilaa unDadu. goppa goppa maaTalu unDavu. nijaaniki tanu conscious gaa ee prayoagam chaestundo teleedu. gurajaaDa appaaraavu kanyaa Sulkam loa kaevalam stree samasyae kaakae maanava sambandhaalu, prabhutva aprajaaswaamika dhoaraNulu, braahmiNeeka vyavastha ilaa ennoa Tach chaestaaDu. ayitae anta conscious gaa prayatninchaaDaa anTae kaakapoavachchu kooDa. udaaharaNaku guarajaaDa anta saanghika Sastra vaettaa ..anTae sari ayina adhaaraalu dorakka poavachchu kanyaa Sulkam kaaka. ee kavitanu inkaa konta improov chaesae chaan s undi. ayitae kavayitri orijinaaliTee idae sTail loa ilaanae baavunTundaemoa?!
ee kavayitri nunDi naalaanTi vaaLLu edugutunna kavulu kavayitrulu naerchukoavaalsindi entoa undi. naenu prati okka paaTakuDike chaesae vinnapam aemanTae aa kavayitri intaku mundu raasina kavitalu kooDaa chadavanDi. elaa feel avutaaroa elaanTi anubhooti kammaestundo oa saari taDimi choosukoanDi. mee
expectation miss avvadu. ippaTi varaku jarigindi idae !
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Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 15, Jul 2005 2:22:16 PM IST
chaalaa baagundanDi...
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 15, Jul 2005 10:45:58 AM IST
This is one poetess whom I am envy of.....
(great job anDi...in fact I have been waitin to see a poem frm u for a long time after...'amma vachchi vellindi' 'siggu dontaralu''gorinTaaku'...:) )
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 14, Jul 2005 10:45:57 PM IST
chaalaa rOjula tarvaata raasinaTTunnaaru... chaalaa baavuMdi... muKyaM gaa mugiMpu...
mee nuMDi marinni maMchi kavitalu aaSistU..
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 14, Jul 2005 6:04:28 PM IST
chAlA chAlA chAlA bAvumdi... chachchipOvAlI anE aalOchana kaliginappuDu paDE mAnasika sangharshaNa marI bhayankaramainadi...' bayaludErinapuDu nAtOnE unnAvugA' nijaM ... entO AvESamgA modalainA prayatnaM EdO O chinna AlOchanatO AgipOtundi...
marO vishayaM... dhairyamA ekkaDunnAv annAru? avunu, chAvaDAniki dhairyaM kAvAli...kAnI bratakaDAniki marekkuva dhairyam kAvAli...A prakAramgA chUstE ikkaDa kavitalOni kyaarekTaruki chAlA dhairyamE undi.
Posted by: special_special At: 14, Jul 2005 3:24:33 PM IST
wonderful. excellent. nenu kuudaa death theme meede o story raasi paareddaamu anukunnaanu. mallee emduko aapesaanu. meeru nannu motivate chesaaru. choostaa gelukutaanemo. appudu mari meeru chadivipettaali:) Really good one.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 14, Jul 2005 2:50:42 PM IST
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