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| nijaaniki meeku assimilation of thoughts baavundi. bhaavukata koasam prayatninchae paTTudala abhinandaneeyam. konchem anubhava raahityam ani meerae annaru kaabaTTi adi bayaTa paDtundi. kaanee improov chesukunTae koddigaa...khachchitangaa manchi kavita raayagalaru. machchuku - ekkuva punctuation marks vaaDoddu. avi reader nu divert chestaayi. oa saari kavita random flow laa vachchaaka teeriggaa chek chaeyanDi. redundancy ni teesaesi chooDanDi. paaTakuDIki annee vivarinchaali ani kangaaru vaddu. ataniki cloo istae chaalu telusukunTaaDu annaTTu chooDanDi. naaku telisina konni meeku upayoaga paDtaayaemoanani cheppaanu. all the best !
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 30, Jul 2005 1:04:33 AM IST
nEnu dRuSyam gurinchi yEvI cheppalEdu mEDam .cheppindallA mI prejanTEshan Af thAT gurinchE
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 28, Jul 2005 4:21:17 PM IST
Kshaminchaaali oohoo ni ooha ani chadivaanu
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 28, Jul 2005 2:05:34 PM IST
alOk gaaru ,
mee kaamenTlaku thaanks .
meeru annaTlu adi kavita laa lEdEmO kaani ooha maatram kaadu . inkevarannaa cheppi unTE nenoo nammEdaanni kaadu .... kaani nEnu alaa paDDa varShaanni choosaanu . akkaDa ooru pEru cheppalEdu ...ippuDu chebutunnaa .... gOvaa teeraaniki daggaralO kaigaa anna TounShip undi. adi western ghats aDavullO kaTTinadi ...ilaanTi varSham nEnu akkaDa choosaanu. bahusaa anubhavaraahityam valla sarigaa cheppalEkapOyundochchu kaanee idi ooha maatram kaadu .....
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 28, Jul 2005 2:04:01 PM IST
UhU assalu nachchalEdu.vyAsAlrAsi rAsi alavATayyi kavitvam rAyabOtE vachanam ChAyalostunnAy
inkA bAgA prayatninchAli
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 28, Jul 2005 1:43:20 PM IST
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