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| hrudayam lo daagina malinanni kadige oka divyamaina sopanam la undi mee poem. jyothi garu nice expression keep it up.
vennela sree
Posted by: Mr. vennelasree sree At: 3, Mar 2003 12:15:29 PM IST
If u really have some divine power, loving u and caring for u, inside ur heart, u dont need to say " i need u"
i loved the poem, but the title dint seem apt.
I too feel the same that God lives inside me,but what i wish is not to go away from me, i always wish that this divinity should be there in evryone's hearts.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 1, Mar 2003 10:01:12 PM IST
same thing from my side...
after reading few sentence i thoguht its a regular love peom..
but it has divine touch at end make feel good..
keep it up
sree
Posted by: Mr. M.S.Reddy At: 1, Mar 2003 1:21:15 PM IST
hello Jyothi garu,
Very nice poem andi...as I was reading I thought a regular love poem but you made it a divine love .
Like it very much.Congrats.
--sri
Posted by: SriSai At: 1, Mar 2003 0:50:36 AM IST
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