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| bhaavukata baavundi. perhaps konta anubhava raahityam valla laedaa fixed thinking valla bhaava vyakteekaraNa improov kaalaekapoyindaemoanani anipistundi. but all said and done its an appreciable effort #Te
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 6, Aug 2005 1:28:44 PM IST
gam~yam gam~yam
Posted by: Mr. HAYAGREEVA MURTY Rachuri At: 3, Aug 2005 9:02:24 AM IST
mottam antaa oka vachanam laaga vundi. gam~yam
Posted by: Mr. HAYAGREEVA MURTY Rachuri At: 3, Aug 2005 8:53:03 AM IST
verI guD
karuNaSrI gAri padyam chadavalEdani nijAyitIgA cheppAru dAnikO 20 mArkulu.tappaka chaduvutAnannAru dAnikO 80 mArkulu.verasi mottam vanda mArkulu koTTEsAru
gurtunchukOnDi kavi/kavayitri gAdalchukonna vALLevaLLakainA nijAyitI,nikkachchidanam ,nirbhayatvam vunDi tIrAli.idi chadivAnu, idi chadavalEdani cheppukODamlO avamAnamEvI lEdu.cheppina vishayAnni talakekkinchkoni prayatnistAnanTE vODipOyinaTTEvI gAdu.gAnI ikkaDa konchem mandiki A apOha vunnadi.allAnTidi mIku lEkapOvaDam mechchukOdagga vishayam
manasupeTTi manchi manchi sankalanAlni chadavanDi.mI kavitalni mIrE nishkarshagA vimarSinchukOnDi.itarulaki A avakASam vIlainata takkuvA vunDETTu chUsukOnDi.appuDu gelupannadi mIdi gAkapOtundO mIkE telustundi
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 2, Aug 2005 9:15:44 PM IST
Thank you so much for your valueable suggestions. tappanisarigaa manci books chaduvutanu Subrahmanyam garu,
Vastav, inthavaraku nenu Karunasri gari kavitalu yem chadavaledu, ippudu tappanisarigaa chaduvuthanu,
meeru cheppina tedaa gamaninchanu Vimarsukudu sir, It wont repeat next time...meeru raasinadi chadiventhavaraku aa thappu naaku teliyaledu. Thank you so much for your clean observation.
Posted by: Mrs. kalyani thota At: 2, Aug 2005 9:04:44 PM IST
'AyuvudIrinantanE hAyiga kannu mUsedamu Ayama challani kAlivrELLa pai' anTU karuNaSrI rAsina padyam mI kavitaku voravaDi gAvochchu.gAnI A padyamlO vunna chikkadanam indulO lEdu.kAraNAlanu vetakaDAniki pOtE nAku tOchinavi konni
1. bhAvAnni layabaddhangA naDapalEkapOvaDam
2. bhAshanu poortigA samskarinchakanDArawgA vADaDam
3. prejanTEShan Af thATulO hechchutaggulu
subramaNyam gAru cheppinaTTu kavitanu pErAgrAfula kinda viDagoTTi rAstEnE andangA vunTundi
bhAvam bAgundi gAnI prejenTEshanE Af thAT sariggAlEdu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 2, Aug 2005 7:51:50 PM IST
chaalaa rOjulaki raasinaTTunnaaru...
aksharaalu alikEsinaTTuMDi , mee kavita chadavaDaM kaasta kashTamaiMdaMDee.. Tipi vaaLLu ichchina ee soukaryaM upayOgiMchukOvachchu kadaa.. ilaa kavitani oka imEj&gaa aplOD cheyyakuMDaa...
kavita ni KaMDikalugaa viDagoDitE chadavaDaM, ardhaMchEsukOvaDaM iMkaa tElikavutaayi...
ika kavita lOki vastE , viSEshaNaalu ekkuva vaaDakaMDi. udaaharaNaki mee kavitalO mattugaa , gammattugaa oddikagaa, svachChaMgaa vagairaalu.. veeTanniTini teesEsi chUDaMDi , kavita mariMta aMdaMgaa kanipistuMdi. avasaramainaMta mEra maatramE viSEshaNaalu vaaDitE baavuMTuMdi.
veelaitE maMchi kavula kavitaa saMkalanaalu chadavaMDi.
ALL THE BEST!
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 2, Aug 2005 6:51:52 PM IST
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