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Articles: Poetry | | amRutam kurustOndi !! | |
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Posted by: Ms. Gautami S At: 23, Mar 2008 1:37:24 PM IST
mIru nannu chEpa ani tElchi cheppangA lEndi nEnu mIru phalAnA aipOE pramAdamundi ani hechcharistE tappEvI lEdu gadA
nEnu kUDA gariTa paTTi vanTinTi pan&laku digAnu.marappuDE gadA ammakunna kashTAlu telsEdimA amma vanTa sariggA chEyalEdanukOnDi mohamATam lEkanDA cheptAnu.dAntO Ame inkOsAri chEsETappuDu nE kOrukonnaTTugA chEstundi.antEgAnI nEnu moham mIda cheppEsAnani mukku chIdutU mUlana kUrchOdu.mari Amekunnanta kAmpiTiTivnes ikkaDOLLaku lEkapOtE ellA? vADu vimarSinchADO ani chengulu mATu jEsukOni kuLLi EDvaDamenduku ? dAntO vALLakochchina lAbhamEnTi.
andAkA yenduku ippuDu chakradhar gArini konni praSnalEsAnu.Ayanochchi vATiliki samAdhAnAlichcheyyanI.avi sariggA vunTE voppEsukonTA.lEkanTE inkonchem Diskashan7lOki digutA.mari kandaku lEni durada kattipITakendukO ?Ayanaku lEni bAdha mIkendukO ?
yEvannAru 'kavi pitAmahulu' anA. mEm nava kavitA yuvakulam .andukanE vEDigA vADigA vunTAy mA mATalu. sadaru pitAmahulevaranTE rAsinOLLU nochchukonTAremOnani vochchina pratidAnikI AhA vOhO anEvALLu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 13, Aug 2005 12:08:55 PM IST
ayya vastav gaaru .. nenu meetho vaadinchadam ledu .. naaku tochindi cheppanu.. ee maatram daanike meeru nannu 'koopastha mandookam' to polcharu..
'knowledge is attained through continous learning process'
ee vishayam telisina vaarayihte nannu 'koopastha mandookam' tho polcharu ..alage mee padajaalam tho ikkadi thoti kavulani baadincharu..
Posted by: Mr. Sarasa Raja At: 12, Aug 2005 11:26:29 PM IST
vimarsakudu gaaru .. ikkada anni manchi kavitale (mee drustilo) post cheyyali ante kudaradu kadaandi.. mee amma chese prati vantakam meeku nachaali ane guarantee yemi vundi cheppandi...alagani meeku nachadam ledu ani mee amma gaaru vanta cheyadam maanesthara cheppandi..
I am not talking about, you guys are using offensive language but try to be considerate when posting comments.
ee kavitaki mee comment mee maatallone
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Nothing new and nothing poetic! Same old stuff.
Try out something different!
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meeru raasina modati kavithake ituvanti abhiprayam vyaktamayihte meeku rendo kavitha raayadaaniki interest koddiga taggutundi kada..
tappulu cheyyanidhe yemi nerchukolemu kadaandi..
mee inko maata...
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u better suggest these so called poets not to dump what ever they write here
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ee place mee okkari sonthamo leka only kaviga niroopinchu kunna valla kosamo kaadu kadandi..
nenu yedayina tappu matlaadi vunte 'kavita pitaamahulu' nannu mannincha galaru..
Posted by: Mr. Sarasa Raja At: 12, Aug 2005 11:14:27 PM IST
bhalEgundi sarasarAju gArU mI vAdana
kavitvam chadavAlanTE kavi gAnkkaralEdu.kavi manasu vunTE chAlu.adE nijAyitIgA vimarsinchE vALLaku salahAlivvAlanTE kUDA konchem burra vunDAli gadA
konchem mundukeLLi absTrAkT painTingunu mechchukOvAlanTE kaLLunTE chAlu rangulu gurinchi j~nAnamoddu andAmA? sangItAnni vinAlanTE chevulunTE chAlu rAgam laya tALam gurinchi avagAhanoddu andAmA?
illA anaDam valla mIku j~nAnam perugutundO tarugutundO AlOchinchanDi.painTingulO abhirunchunTE konchem kashTapaDi vokkO rangu Em cheputundi, ellA cheputundani artham chEsukonTE anta kashTapaDi bommagIsina vADi Srama phalistundi. ehE avannI nAkenduku kaLLunnAy chUsAnu kALLunnAy veLLAnu anTE adEviTanTAru 'kUpastha manDUkam ' adautAranna mATa.anchAta nEnu chEpanO timingalAnnO kAnu gAnI mIru mAtram manDUkamaipOyE pramAdamundi.sO konchem cheputunnadi artham chEskODEm
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 12, Aug 2005 11:08:39 PM IST
ayya vastav alok .. nuvvu kavitha raayi .. neeku yenta knowledge vundo share cheyyi anna mee maatallone mee telivitakkuva tanam kanabadutundi..
kavitani prasamchinchataaniki leka mee lanti vaariki suggestions ivvataaniki kave kaanakkaraledu..kavi bhavananu , vaari rachana saili ardham chesukone manasunte chalu..
nenu oka kavinai meeku ee vishayam cheppadam ledu..oka paatakudiga chebutunnanu..
meeru annaru kaabatti chebutunnanu..
talani tanne vaadu vunte taati thanne vaadu vuntaadu anna naanudi ni marachi pokandi..
ardham chesukovadam leda mee dhoranilo meeru velladam anedi mee vignetha pai aadhaara padi vuntundi anna vishayanni gamanincha galru..
Vastav ane peru pettukoni vaastavalani marachi ..kavitalane samudram lo eedulaadutunna chepa pillani ani anukuntunnaaremu ..koddia aa bhramalo nunchi bayataku vachi oka kavila kaaka oka paatakudiga ikkadi kavitalani chadavagalarani aasistoo..
Posted by: Mr. Sarasa Raja At: 12, Aug 2005 10:50:32 PM IST
Cha nijjangAnE. sarasamADDam lEdugadA ?
mIru mA kAmenTlanu antalA chadivEsunTE I murigipOyina praSna vEyaDavEnTi A EDpugoTTu egjAmpilEviTi?
mundara vO kavita rAyanDi lEdU I kavita ellA vundO cheppanDi lEdU kavitvamlO mIkunna nAleDju konchem shEr chEsukOnDi.vuttinE endukI ubusupOni salahAlu
ayyA chakradhar nEnaDigina praSnalaku samAdhAnamivvanDi sarasa rAjugArendukO virasamaipOtunnAru
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 12, Aug 2005 10:22:46 PM IST
Hello Mr Vimarsakudu and Mr. Vastav Alok...I have a small suggestion for you guys here...I am seeing for almost every post you guys are adding some comments. I, not even me, everybody, for this matter will really appriciate your enthu in doing this. But at the same time make sure your comments would not affect the other writers and the author of the current post, in such a way that they are discouraged. I will tell you a small example in telugu which has same meaning.
1) Mee nanna vunnada??
2) Nee yemma mogudu vunnada???
compare the above two points and I think now you understand what to do next....
Posted by: Mr. Sarasa Raja At: 12, Aug 2005 9:43:28 PM IST
'mustAbayyAnu' anna tarvAta maLLI ekkaDA kavi kanapaDDamlE.enduku ?
Uhalu pAtavE, pOlikalU pAtavE, naDaka kUDA pAtadE.sO illA antA pAtavE ainappuDu yEm cheyyAli?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 12, Aug 2005 4:25:49 PM IST
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