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Articles: Poetry | | koMDanu tavvi elakanu paTTuTa | |
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| aMdarikee kRutaj~natalu. vimarSakuDu gaaru, 'koMDanu tavvi elakanu paTTuTa' anna TaiTillO unna vyaMgyaM 'koMDanu tavvi..' anaDaMlO lEdu. kaabaTTi alOk gaaru cheppinaTTu aa TaiTilE sarainadi. ika nippulaku badulu muLLu ani vaaDinaa bhaavaMlO peddagaa tEDaa raadanukuMTaa.kaabaTTi aa sUchana aamOdayOgyamE. aaMdhruDu gaaru mee anaalasis karakTE. iMdulO meeru cheppinavaaTitOpaaTu prEma, ishTaM ivi kUDaa unnaayi. Saastrigaaru maroka saari chadavaMDi. kavita oka saari chadavagaanE ardhamaipOvaalanukOvaDaM atyaaSE ani naakanipistuMdi.
saleeMgaaru , mee sUchana baaguMdi. tappaka minee kavitalu raayaDaaniki prayatnistaa. kaakapOtE ee kavitalO anavasaramaina lain&s EvO cheppiuMTE iMkaa baaguMDEdi. meeku veelaitE bhaavaM cheDakuMDaa iMtakaMTE takkuva lain&s lO ee kavitanu tirigi raayaMDi. naakaitE anni lain&s avasaramE anipistOMdi. aMdukE aDugutunnaa.
Posted by: PRANAV At: 15, Aug 2005 6:34:32 PM IST
naaku inni lainulu anavasaramanipinchindi. meeru minee kavitalu praakTeesu chEsi, maLLee pedda kavitalu raayanDi, appuDu telustundanukunTaa, enni lainulu ekkuva vaaDinarO, chinna vishayam kOsam :-)
No line really moves a reader!
naa renDu nayaapaisalu
Posted by: Saleem At: 15, Aug 2005 5:13:16 AM IST
nijamE maMchi TAleMT vuMdi.
kAkapOtE bhAvavyaktIkaraNalO marikoMcheM sfaShTata vuMTE asmadIyulaku ardhamayyEdi.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 14, Aug 2005 6:23:45 PM IST
manchi TaalenT undi.
ee kavitanu tavvi elukanu paTTochchu kaani.... bottom line kavi ae bhaavaanni paaTHakuDi meeda visiraesaaDu annadi. adi paaTHakuDu elaa catch chaeyagaligaaDu ani. I think ur succeessfful in that aspect . frustration undi vyangyam undi. paraaku undi. nispRuha undi. keep it up sir !
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 14, Aug 2005 2:46:26 PM IST
vimarSak 'konDanu tavvi....'annAmE anukO 'tavvi...andulO bilam chEstAvA' lEka 'tavvi....kankara koDatAvA' anna praSnalOstAy .allAnTi anavasaramaina Ten&shan ku rIDarsini guricheyyakanDA praNavjI simpulgA konDanu tavvi elakanu paTTuTa ani rAsAru.anchAta A TaiTilE yApTugA vundi
praNavjI inta chakkagA kavita rAsinA konni Teknikal tappulu jEsAru.
'chIkaTi sorangam ' anTUnE 'sorangam ninDA nippulu' annAru.nippu anna tarvAtA konchem velugunTundi kadA. allA sorangam ninDA nippulunnappuDu adi 'chIkaTi guha kAlEdu gadA
'elakanu chUstE anta AkarshaNa nAku' varaku bAgundi 'bahuSA nIkkUDA' ani aDagaDamenduku?sariggA chadavanDi, akkaDi dAkA vochchina flO A lainutO Agi maLLI 'vinAyakuDi lAnTi'tO modalautundi
mIru bEsiggA imEjarIjam fAlO ayyEvALLu.kavitallO imEj pAtra gurinchi bAgAnE telisunTundi.anchAta I tappidam voppukOdaggadi kAdu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 13, Aug 2005 1:00:37 PM IST
vimarSak 'konDanu tavvi....'annAmE anukO 'tavvi...andulO bilam chEstAvA' lEka 'tavvi....kankara koDatAvA' anna praSnalOstAy .allAnTi anavasaramaina Ten&shan ku rIDarsini guricheyyakanDA praNavjI simpulgA konDanu tavvi elakanu paTTuTa ani rAsAru.anchAta A TaiTilE yApTugA vundi
praNavjI inta chakkagA kavita rAsinA konni Teknikal tappulu jEsAru.
'chIkaTi sorangam ' anTUnE 'sorangam ninDA nippulu' annAru.nippu anna tarvAtA konchem velugunTundi kadA. allA sorangam ninDA nippulunnappuDu adi 'chIkaTi guha kAlEdu gadA
'elakanu chUstE anta AkarshaNa nAku' varaku bAgundi 'bahuSA nIkkUDA' ani aDagaDamenduku?sariggA chadavanDi, akkaDi dAkA vochchina flO A lainutO Agi maLLI 'vinAyakuDi lAnTi'tO modalautundi
mIru bEsiggA imEjarIjam fAlO ayyEvALLu.kavitallO imEj pAtra gurinchi bAgAnE telisunTundi.anchAta I tappidam voppukOdaggadi kAdu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 13, Aug 2005 12:58:52 PM IST
elakaanamdam !
---manoaj`
Posted by: Mr. manoj mohan At: 13, Aug 2005 12:50:39 PM IST
vimarSak 'konDanu tavvi....'annAmE anukO 'tavvi...andulO bilam chEstAvA' lEka 'tavvi....kankara koDatAvA' anna praSnalOstAy .allAnTi anavasaramaina Ten&shan ku rIDarsini guricheyyakanDA praNavjI simpulgA konDanu tavvi elakanu paTTuTa ani rAsAru.anchAta A TaiTilE yApTugA vundi
praNavjI inta chakkagA kavita rAsinA konni Teknikal tappulu jEsAru.
'chIkaTi sorangam ' anTUnE 'sorangam ninDA nippulu' annAru.nippu anna tarvAtA konchem velugunTundi kadA. allA sorangam ninDA nippulunnappuDu adi 'chIkaTi guha kAlEdu gadA
'elakanu chUstE anta AkarshaNa nAku' varaku bAgundi 'bahuSA nIkkUDA' ani aDagaDamenduku?sariggA chadavanDi, akkaDi dAkA vochchina flO A lainutO Agi maLLI 'vinAyakuDi lAnTi'tO modalautundi
mIru bEsiggA imEjarIjam fAlO ayyEvALLu.kavitallO imEj pAtra gurinchi bAgAnE telisunTundi.anchAta I tappidam voppukOdaggadi kAdu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 13, Aug 2005 12:50:09 PM IST
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