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Articles: Poetry | | C H A N D R I K A L U .. (Haikulu) | |
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| hai kavigaru.........
naaku haikulante chala istam.meeru rasinavi chala bagunnai.very nice.ilantivi inkaa rayalani korukuntu.......
-prasanna
Posted by: Mrs. prasanna krovvidi At: 19, Apr 2003 7:27:54 AM IST
Vunna pedda lopam monatany ne :)
Haikulu telugu lo modalayinappatinundi...ive matalu vintunnam... kalam kannu neeru, Eti alalu navvulu, Keechuraallu- raatri paatalu...ivanni chala pata prayogalu.....veetini enni kavitallo chudaledu....
Ivanni manchi kavita vastuvule....kaani vati to kotta bhavalni cheppataniki try cheste baguntundi :)
Posted by: Saleem At: 11, Mar 2003 6:00:08 AM IST
Mee HAIKULU BAVUNNAI...
for the first time i knew it
Sarath
Posted by: Mr. Renu sarath Babu Vegesna At: 9, Mar 2003 10:11:09 PM IST
Thanks for ur comments and thanks for the info also.
Nenu Chadivina Vatiloo Nakekkada .. Aa ristiction Kanipinchala.
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Kavitallo Lopam Ekkadundoo Chepite Aa Vimarsa .. Sdhviamrsa Avutundi gani .. Oka line Rasestee just perosnal feeling Matramee Avutundi.Anni Andaraku Nachalani Ledugada.
Raayalani Rasinattlundi Annaru .. Avunu Rayakunda Vundaleni Oka intension too Rayadam Jaringindi Gani .. time pass Kosam Matram Kadu.
thanks 1ce again...
Posted by: ChandramSetti ChandraSekhar At: 9, Mar 2003 11:15:36 AM IST
Chnadra sekhar,
Monotonous ga vunnayi :)
Posted by: Saleem At: 9, Mar 2003 2:47:30 AM IST
naakantagaa nachaledandi. andulonu Haikus ki rules yedo vunnaayi. 757 anukuntaanu. ledaa 575 ayi undochu. These are the number of words in 1,2,3 lines respectively.
But leaving that rules, the meaning is also not impressive. Raayaali anukoni raasinattu undi ante anipinchindi.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 8, Mar 2003 10:09:26 PM IST
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