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Articles: Poetry | | A driven Bird! | |
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| Yes, i faced such situations many times, and i know how frightening will be the memories of such past.I wish u dint face such ones.
Regarding poem, i appreciate u for writing about"feeding with meat of worms and flies"It avoked emetic reflexes in me while reading pleasanlty, but very soon i realised that its a fact that little birds, which appear cue, eat such things only. This is a harsh truth.Good observation.
Why dont u continue the poem as another part?? i am eager to see how u continue this.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 9, Mar 2003 6:46:57 PM IST
chala baagundi.. it resembles one of my poems
"raalipoyina puvvu".
keep writing..
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 8, Mar 2003 2:41:44 PM IST
jyothi.this story seems to be very realistic..but the poem is very good describing the love between mother and son.. All the best...
Posted by: Mr. Suresh At: 7, Mar 2003 3:50:18 PM IST
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