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abbayyA vochchAvA dA kUkO 'tiTTu' anna viSEshaNamlOnE yenta 'kavitvam 'vundO janAlaku telupudAvani tiTTukavitvamanna padam vADutunnA.monna akkaDekkaDO purANa pAtralannI yEkaruveTTAvu gandA ALLaninkA vadhinchalEdA?

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 25, Aug 2005 4:54:26 PM IST

satyarAmaprasAdu gArU 1.nijAlanu gurtinchAru santOsham 2.sOdAharaNangA vivarinchAlanTe maLLI vyAsam rAyAlsindE. vivarinchanDI anTE vivarinchananta talabirusu mAku lEdu 3.mIru rAsinadi kavita kAdu ani mEmU analEdu.vokkasAri mA kAmenTs chUDanDi.mEmaDigindallA I prAsalu, vyangAlu konchem pakkaneTTi anubhUti kavitvam rAyanDani cheppAmantE. 4.vilavaina mATannAru.evvarU Ovar naiT hIrOlu kAru.kAvaDAniki sAdhana avasaram .dAniki konchem Opika inkA avasaram .ikkaDa manavALLaku lEnidallA adE. 5.I saiTuvALLU I avakASAm ichchindE abhiprAyAlanu ekschEnju chEsukODAniki. sadviniyOga parachukondAm

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 25, Aug 2005 10:34:18 AM IST

1) 'vaastav`', 'vimarSakuDu' vraasina daaMTlO chaalaa nijaalunnaayani oppukuMTaanu. 2) veeru sOdaaharaNaMgaa okaTi reMDu lakshyaalanu choopistE baaguMTuMdani naa uddESyaM. maLLee, vaMTa elaaguMdO cheppaDaaniki vaMTa chEsi choopiMchaalaa? - ani aDagakaMDi! 3) nEnu vraasinadi kavita analEdani maLLee cheputunnaanu. 4) aMdaroo EkakaalaMlO nambar`van`lu kaalEru kadaa! iMkoMcheM merugu peTTukOvaalanE prativaaDoo choostaaDu. okkokkasaari eMdukO baaguMDakapOvachchu kooDaa. 5) mari koMdari abhipraayaalanu kooDaa telusukOvaalani uMdi.

Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 24, Aug 2005 11:29:30 PM IST

mI riplaiki santOsham . ippuDu konchem gADilO paDinaTTugA vundi. mIku A mAtram prAsalu rAvanigAdanukonTA vimarSakuDi uddESyam .allA prAsalEsi rAyaDAnni kavitvamgA bhramisipOyi, dAni kOsam bhAvAnni balijEsEvALLunnArani jeppaDam 'rUls peTTukoni nanDUri pATalu vrAsADani nEnu anukOnu' annAru. sarE. TemporarIgA mI vAdanannE oppukondAm .mari ikkaDa prEma, viraha gAnAllO mUrChanalupOtunna yentamandi dAnni kUlankashangA chadivAru ? dAnni manaseTTi chadivinOLLu ippuDu vALLu rAstunnanta chettagA, chivikipOyinaTTu rAyagalrA ? khachchitangA rAyaru. manasupeTTi adhyayanapUrvakangA chadivinOLLu chetta rAyaDAniki pUnukOru. anTE voka nibaddhatO, nikkachchigA rAstAru.dAnnE rUls anTAnu. aunanTArA ? ihapOtE vimarSalakevvarU atItulu gAdu. sAkshAttu vEdavyAsuDu rAsina samskRutamlOnE vyAkaraNa dOshAlunnAyani pI hech DIlU jEstunna ghanApAThIlunna I rOjullO nanDUri gAri paini vimarSa lekkalOnidi gAdu. prativADikI ishTamaina padAlu, padabandhAlunnAyanTU mIru nEnaDigina dAnni dATavEsAru. nEnu jeppindi ishTamaina padAla gurinchi gAdu. I padam illAnE rAyAlani rUls vunnaTTE kavitvAnni vachanam nunDi viDadIyAlanTE illA rAyAlani yenduku vunDakUDadu ani.dIniki samAdhAnam cheppanDi. chUsArA, modaTa rUls lEkapOvaDamE rUlannAru. ippuDu mUDu vishayAlanu jeppi ivE rUls anTunnAru.'pUrtigA vAchyangA kAka' anna mI vAkyamE asalaina AyuvupaTTu.'vyangyangA' rAstE kavitvam vachanam nunDi viDipOtundani mIranukonTunnAru.mari vyangya rachanalennO Suddha vachanamlO vachchAyi. vATini kavitvam anagalamA ? vimarSakuDu annadi idE. mIru konchem sIriyessugA tIsukunnArAmATani. varasabeTTi rAstE vachanam , teggOstE kavitvam .intE ippaTi kotta kavulaki telisindi. mA santOsham kOsam mIru rAyanDani yekkaDA analEdu.mA vimarSalaku ghATugAnu, nATugAnU, sUTigAnu, pOTApOTigAnu samAdhAnalichchinavALLu chAlAne vunnAru.koddimandiki adO vinOdamaitE konchem mandiki vij~nAnam . adE mIru SrISrIki kRushNaSAstriki cheppina samskArapu tEDA.pillakAyalakE inta vunTE ghanApAThIlaku A mAtram vunDaDam alankAramE. kavitvam rAyaDAniki mEmu rUls ErparachalEdu. goppa kavitvam rAsinavALLu ellA rAsArannadi chebputU vATilni rUls gA pATistU mI swanta SaililO rAyanDani cheputunnAm . manasu vunchi vinnAranukOnDi lAbham vAridi. vuttinE verri AvESapaDi pOTlATaku digAranukOnDi A nashTam mAdi gAdu. chivaragA cheppochchEdEnTanTE prati vishayAnikI 'rUls 'tappanisari. niyamabaddhangA naDavanidi yEdI nilabaDadu. nirvirAma swEchCha annadi I prapanchamlO kalla. mArksisTu bhAvAlaku baddhuDai SrISrI kavitvam rAsina rOjunE AyanalOni kavi sagam chachchADu. gAnI paTTu viDupulu telisina mahAkavi gAbaTTi tanEm rAsinA dAnni kavitvam kinda jamakaTTElA rAsADu. idi andarikI sAdhyam kADu. prEyaSi gurinchi kalavarinchaDamE kavitvamgA chelAmaNi jEyinchAru kRu.SA. adI Ayanaku lOpam gAlEdu. vidyuttu llAnTi vAkyAlanu nirmistUnE eppuDU chAvu gurinchi smarinchE vADu ajantA. adI Ayanaku lOpama gAlEdu. adbhutamaina anubhUti bhAvAlunnA samskRuta paDigaTTu padAlanunDi bayaTapaDalEkapOyADu tilak . adI Ayanaku lOpam gAlEdu. illA lekkavEstU pOtE yendarO kavulu tama lOpAlni saitam aNagadokkivEsEnta goppa kavitvam rAsAru. kottagA rAyabOtunna vALLu vILLanu pUrtigA chadavagalagAli. artham chEsukOgalagAli. appuDu gAnI vALLaku kavitvam rUpurEkhalu artham gAvu. guDDeddu chEllO paDDaTTu vADEvaDO rAsADu nEnu rAyalEnA, nAku a A i Ilochchu gadA ani miDisipaDitE idO ikkaDa jarugutOndE vimarSakula pai paDi EDvaDam , tiTTu kavitalu rAsi tRuptipaDDam , allAnTi abhAva kurra chEshTalE goppa sAdhanAlugA migultAy

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 24, Aug 2005 9:47:29 PM IST

vimarSakuDu gaaroo, vaastaV` gaaroo, nEnEmee praasakOsaM praakulaaDi vraasiMdi kaadu idaMtaa. naalugu pustakaalu chadivinavaaDevaDikeinaa aapaaTi praasalu raavaDaM maree aMta kashTamEmee kaadu. mee kaameMTuki meerE 'kavitwaM' ani kitaabu ichchukuMTaanaMTE ichchukOMDi. daanikEM? roolsu peTTukunE naMDoori 'eMki paaTalu' vraaSaaDani nEnanukOnu. aayana prayatnaM aayana chEsukunnaaDu. adi ekkuvamaMdiki nachchiMdi. daanni eesaDiMchinavaaLLoo unnaaru 'naajooku lEduraa - naMDoori subbigaa' ani aa rOjullO. daanivalla aayana goppadanaM Emee taggipOlEdu. prativaaDiki EdO vraayaalanE tapana uMTuMdi. tanaku telisina paddhatilO, tanaku ishTameina maaTallO daanni bayaTapeDataaDu. EdO cheppaDaanikE prayatnistaaDu kooDaa. chivariki 'tanadeina anubhooti' nE prakaTistaaDu. ika padajaalaM, siddhaaMtaM saMgatiki vastE, prativaaDikee ishTameina maaTaloo, padabaMdhaaloo, nammakaaloo uMDi teerutaayi. aa taravaata taanu gamanistunna chuTTupakkala vaaLLa paddhatulu, vaaTilOni baagOgulu - vaaTimeeda EdO cheppaalanukuMTaaDu. okkokkasaari bayaTa peTTagalaDu, marOsaari bayaTa peTTalEDu. 1) oka vishayaanni cheppaDaM 2) cheppinadaanni aMdaMgaa cheppaDaM 3) poortigaa vaachyaMgaa kaakuMDaa koMta vyaMgyaMgaa cheppaDaM, EvEvO dRushTaaMtaalanu chEtanayinaMtavaraku ivvaDaM pei roolsu chaalanukuMTaanu 'kavitwaaniki. maLLee cheputunnaanu - nEnu vraasi, meeru vimarSiMchinanadaanni poortigaa 'kavita' anukOvaDaM lEdu nEnu. (idi vraastunnadi mimmalni saMtOshapeTTaDaaniki kaadu.) okE chaMdamaamanu (vErE tithullOnE anukOMDi) choosina kRushNaSaastri 'neelaabhrasarasilO niMDu jaabilli - raayaMchavale vihaaramu salpuchuMDe' aMTE, (konnaaLLu aagi)'adi naaku piDilEni koDavalivale uM'dannaaDu SreeSree. iddarikee okE vidhameina ooha eMduku raalEdu? aMTE eeyanaki niMDu chaMdamaamalO aMdaM kanipistuMdi, aayanaki paMchaminaaTi chaMdamaamalOnE aayanaki kaavalasinadi kanipistuMdi ani cheppukOvaalEmO? adi vaaLLavaaLLa saMskaaraM. aMtE. meeru sajesTu chEstE daaniki paDi EDwaDaM, mechchukuMTE ubbitabbibbeipOvaDaM - reMDoo kurratanaM chEshTalE. kavitwaM elaaga uMDaalanE vishayaMpeina mee kasarattulu meevi. vaaTini SaastrOkataMgaa paaTiMchaDaM modaleDitE asalu evaroo Emee raayalErEmO! aalOchiMchaMDi. aprayatnaMgaa vraasETappuDE maMchi kavitalu raavachchunEmOgaanee, roolsoo, regyulEshansoo taDuvukuMToo vraastE evaDoo okka vaakyaM kooDaa vraayalEDEmO?

Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 24, Aug 2005 6:29:24 PM IST

ayyA akkaDE vachchindi asalu chikku. rUls lEvu ani anukObaTTE aksharakramam telisina pratokkarU rAsEstunnAru.rAyaDAnikunna atRutani mari Em rAstunnAm ellA rAstunnAm annadAnipai kUDA vunchAligadA.allA sajesTu chEsEvALLa pai padi EDvaDam yenta varaku sababu ? ippuDu mIrO ArTikal rAsAru 'tarachU dorlE tappulu'ani.evaDainA vochchi adi allAnE yenduku rAyAli nAku swEchCha vundi gAbaTTi nAku tOchinaTTu rAstAnanTE mIrEmanTAru ? utti padAlakE mIru rUls peTTinappuDu A padAlaku voka jIvAnni techchipeTTE kavitvAniki rUls lEdanaDam sababA ? sookshmangA gamaninchanDi, prati kaLArUpAniki konni rUls vunnAy .vATini kAdani yevvarU A kaLAnu bhrashTupaTTincharu.konDakachO prayatnAlu jariginA phalinchavu.mari kaLalakE talamAnikamaina kavitvAniki 'rUls' lEvU ani yE AdhAram tO prakaTistunnAru ? yevarikI vinipinchani gunDe chappuLLanu vinipimpajEstundi ganakE kavitvam goppa kaLa. 'yenki yEdanTE yelugu nIDalakEsi yElu sUpintu' anna vAkyam prati sunnita bhAvukunikI nOTimATalA nilustundi.nanDUri gAru A vAkyam rAsEntavaraku vALLa gunDellOnE vunDipOyina bhAvam ippuDu sArvatrikamayindi, sArvakAlInamayindi.kAdanTArA? mari nanDUri gAru 'rUls pATinchE rAsArA ani aDigitE pATinchAranE chebutAnu iha mIru 'rAsindi yEm bApatO telIka kavitvamlO peTTA'nannAru.idi nirlakshyam gAdA ? kavitvAnni alusugA tIsukODam gAdA ? bhashani, dAni saundaryAnni kApADAlani tahatahapaDE mIru sadaru bhAshaku, dAnilOni padAlakunna Saktini chUpinchE kavitvAnni 'yEdO rAsAnu, tOchinaTTu rAsAnu' anTE yenta nAmardA. peddalu kUDA illA kavitvAnni chinnachUpu jUstunnAru ganakanE asalE antanta padakOSam vunna vALLu gUDA kavitvAnni chaTTubanDalu chEyaDAniki yathASakti prayatnistunnAru. kAdanTArA ?

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 24, Aug 2005 1:14:29 PM IST

vraasinadi E baapatO naakE teliyaka, 'kavita'lO vEyamani aDigaananukOMDi. (mei thaaT`s`lO vEyamani aDigi uMDaalsiMdEmO!) ayinaa teliyaka aDugutunnaanu, anubhootulaMTE evarikee vinipiMchani guMDe chappuLLalOnoo, niSSabda rOdanaala lOnoo, mounabhaashallOnoo, 'sweeT` nathiMgs`lOnoo maatramE uMTaayanukOmaMTaaraa? naa abhipraayaM EmiTaMTE kavitwaaniki roolsu lEkapOvaDamanEdE oka rool` ani. EdO tOchiMdi vraastaaM. adi nachchinavaaLLu baaguMdaMTaaru, nachchanivaaLLu baagulEdaMTaaru. aMtE kadaa!

Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 23, Aug 2005 8:09:19 PM IST

Mastaaru, Your sarcastic poem is hilarious. You have rightly exposed the hallowness in Comrades ideology. Comrades never conform with the reality and gropes in the darkness of the past. That is what i understood. Am i right sir?

Posted by: Mr. Siva Sankar Donepudi At: 23, Aug 2005 4:45:55 PM IST

mI kutarka nirasana bAgundi.anubhUti lEni jIvitamendukannAru.vilavaina mATa.marallAnTi anubhUtulnEvO kavitallO rAsE prayatnam chEyanDi.

Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 23, Aug 2005 4:36:08 PM IST

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