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| vaastav gaaru ! meeru ae Daimen shan' loa kavita chettadi ani proov chaesinaa naaku abhyantaram laedu. idi ee kavitaa prapancham loa raali paDina oka aaNi mutyam anna prayatnam aemee laedu naadi. aa paina naenu meetoa charchinchae avagaahana gaani saamarthyam kaani oapika kani laevu naaku. kaabaTTi maLLee maLLee ee ' kavita oka danDuga ' ani oka kaarya kramamgaa peTTukuni vimarSistae saaree ika.
kiraN gaaru ! ee kavitaloa aspashTata oka balam ani naenu coin maatramae chaeyaDam naa uddaeSyam prastutaaniki. khachchitangaa adi balamae ani vaadinchaalani naa uddaeSyam kaadu. induloa prati vaakyamoo nirdushTangaa artham kaakunDaa overall gaa kavi elaa feel avuTunnaaDu anipinchindi ani aemannaa cheppa galigitae baagunTundi.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 20, Sep 2005 4:06:07 PM IST
manthAjI kavitvamanTE yEviTi dAnikunna rUls EviTannadi vyAsarUpamlO ikkaDE rAsAnu (vimarSakuDitO kalisi).nA ArTikals lisTulO vundi chadavanDi.vutti vyAsannE kAkanDA akkaDunna kAmenTs kUDA chadavanDi.A tarvAta mIkEvannA anumAnAlunTE aDaganDi chakkagA charchiddAm
AndhrAjI kiraNajI kAmenTu, dAniki 'dAruNamanTU' vachchina mI respAn&s cheppakanE cheputunnAy kavitvam ellA vunDakUDadO.nEnistunna egjAmpul Af da lain kAvochchu gAnI istunnA
You old foole ! Unruly Sun
Why dost though
Call on us through windows and curtains
To thy motions lovers' seasons run
(John Donn)
pai kavitalO kavi yEm cheppadalchukonnADO pAThakulaki spashTangA telisipOtundi.prEmikula vyavahArAlanu rutuvulatO pOlchaDam , sadaru vyavahArAlanu A sUryuDu tana 'gatula' dwArA niyantrinchAlanukOvaDam , A niyantRutvAnni nirasistU sUryuNNi OlD fUl anaDam vagairA vagairAlannI pAThakuNNi spashTamaina chitraNalOki tIsukeLtAyi.sO kavitaku modaTi rUl spashTamaina chitraNa. TrAn&sparenTaina chIkaTilAnTi vyaktIkaraNa kAvAli.
prati kavikI voka TArgeTeD ADiyan&s vunTAru. A ADiyan&s yokka vistRuti enta viSAlangA vunTE kavita anta rANistundi.anduku saraLamaina, sahajamaina, sUTiyaina varNanalu, vyaktIkaraNalE tappa kalagApulagapu imEjarIlu panikirAvu.idoka rUlu.avunA?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 20, Sep 2005 2:32:50 PM IST
:)) kiraN gaaru ! daaruNam ! kavita poDupu katha sthaayi kanTae ekkuva laedanTaaraa?! .
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 20, Sep 2005 2:14:39 PM IST
andarikee kRutaNgatalu. mukhyangaa Saastri gaariki paaThakuDiki dhanyavaadaalu.
vimarSakuDu gaaru tana opinion toa vadilaeyakunDaa vivarinchi unTae baavuNNu. ee kavitaloa routine gaa kadilinchae bhaavanalu laevu ani telustundi. kaani mottaaniki kavitaloa unDae antarleena uddaeSyam loa elaa unDi undaalsindoa clue ichchi unTae baagunDaedi.
paaTha kuDu gaaroo !
(1) meeru cheppina vishayamtoa aekeebhavistunnaanu. paaThakuDiki artham chaeyinchaDam loa viphalamaitae enni prayoagaalu chaesinaa kavi vyartham.
(2) ottiki nilakaDa laedu - choopuku kaaTuka laedu anna renDu vaakyaala madhya inkoa vaakyam unnaa kooDaa vaaTi renTi madhya oa sambandhamundani gamaninchaaru. Srama anukoakunDaa induloa vairudhya bhaavanalu unnaTTu meeku sarigga endukanipinchindoa vivaristae konta upayoaga karangaa unTundi.
(3) kavitvam loa spashTata laeka poavaDam loapam annaaru. spashTata laekapoavaDam ee kavitaku balam ani anukunTaa :)...mee aloachana cheppanDi ee vishayam pai .
(4) meeru sajesT chaesina khanDika naenu cheppa dalchukunna bhaavaanni poortigaa contradict chaestundanDi. divve velugu aneejeegaa endukaninipinchindi? nijangaa ottiki nilakaDa laedaa? asalu ee kavita mottam chadivaaka kavi em cheppadaluchukunnaaDoa anae vishayam gurinchi individual gaa prati vaakyam yokka specific meaning vadilaestae eTuvanTi feeling kaligindi?
ee kavita raayaDam loa unna oka chinna baeka graunD nu meetoa shaer chaesukunTaa.
kavitvam andaru paaThakulaku okae rakam anubhavaanniyyadu. anduku vaari poorvaanubhavaala pramaeyam chaalaa unTundi. adi kaavyaanubhavamoo kaavachchu. jeevitaanubhavamoo kaavachchu. svaanubhootula naepathyam loa okkoa paaThakuDiki okkoa kavitaa khanDika okkoa rakangaa arthamavutundi. aa paddhatulanu vivaristae ingleeshuloa ' liTararee apreesiashan' ' anTaaru. - chae raa
nijamae oka kavita vanda mandikee artham kaavaalaa? alaa ani okkokkariki okkoa vidhangaa atham ayyaeTTu raayaalaa? ani. idi chinna charcha. daya chaesi telisi na vaaLLu ee kavitaku an'vayinchi cheppa garalaru.
Convenience nimittamu asalu anukunna kavita kinda istunnaanu.
shiT !
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ottiki nilakaDa laedu
aneejeegaa divve velugu
choopuku kaaTuka laedu
aame alaanae chumbistundi gaaDhangaa
foToa fraemu
pagilina cheekaTi
mancham koaDu, ae kae 47
mara manushullaa
nagara baaTa nyoo s aiTam meeda
naSyam rangu boddinka
moham meeda sagam
kaanti krineeDa
ai DoanT anDar sTaanD
vai da hel shi kaanT lav mi ?
Saastri gaaru ! meeru anukunna vidhangaanae naakoo anipinchindi ee kavita gurinchi. ee kavitaloa sarriyalijam poakaDulunnaTTu. ' nagara baaTa nyoos aiTam meeda naSyam rangu boddinka ' aem cheppa dalchukunnaaDu kavi? alaagae ' foaToa fraemu pagilina cheekaTi ' aemi indicate chaestunnaayi? 'mancham koaDu, aekae 47 mara manushullaa ' anna vaaDuka dvaaraa kavi aemi cheppa dalchukunnaaDu? chivarloa aakasmikangaa varNana aapaesi ' vai da hel shi kaanT lav mi ' anaDam elaa undi?
daya chaesi mitRulandarikee vinnapam aemanTae kavi anna prati okkaroo paaThakuDi ( ID kaadu )gurinchi aloachinchaalsina konni vishayaalu unnaayi. naa uddaeSyam loa aadhunika kavitvam loa vachchae poakaDalu ee vishayam loa konta gaaDee tappindi anipinchi ee chinna charcha uddaeSinchi ee kavita. ikkaDaemee khaDga sRushTulanu maahaa prasthaanaalanu sRushTinchalaemu. adi naa uddaeSyam kaadu kooDaa. unna ee chinna saahitee abhimaanula gumpu naa sandaehaalu nivRuti chaeyaDam loa doahadam chaeyaalani koarukunTunnaa.
paaThakuDi gaariki, Saastri gaarikee maroa saari dhanya vaadaalu cheptoo -
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 20, Sep 2005 11:55:25 AM IST
sina baabaaY , aa rUls EvO seppeyaraadE? ika commensense anTaavaa, nuvvu daani gurunchi maaTlaDaTam YSR factionism gurinchi CBN #tEL vennupOTu gurinchi maaTlaaDi naTlu vundi
Posted by: Mr. Musugu veerudu At: 20, Sep 2005 10:45:25 AM IST
I liked it.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 19, Sep 2005 10:54:27 PM IST
ayyA SAstrIjI maLLI adE pAtapATanA ? bhOjanam cheyyagAnE cheyyi kaDukkOvAlannadi rUlu gAdA ? piTTa reTTa vEstE baTTalutukkOvAlannadi kanIsAvagAhana (kAman sen&s ) kAdA ? vITanniTikI pan&jEsE burra kavitvam daggarikochchEsariki ekkaDalEni konkarlU pOtundi.yenduku ?
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 19, Sep 2005 8:07:50 PM IST
I kavitalO spaShTata konni chOTla lOpiMchiMdEmOnani anukoMTunnA.
modaTi reMDu chivari reMDu lein&lU ardhaM ayyAyi.
ayinA kavitalO sarriyalijaM pOkaDa gOcharistOMdi.
ShiT kaMTE vei yyE bAguMdEmO
EmeinA idi oka vilaxaNameina kavita ani nA vuddESyaM
(kavitakEvO rUls vunnAyannAru nAku teliyavu mari A paridhilOki idi vastuMdO lEdO)
AMdhruDu gArU! mIlO bhAvAvESaM ekkuvagA kanapaDutOMdi.
you are capable of puting it in writing but just see it touches the pulse of the readers
Best of luck
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 19, Sep 2005 7:36:42 PM IST
sArI AndhrAjI mIku fID byAkivvalEkapOtunnanduku.yEviTO nAku vokka mukka arthavaitE oTTu
Posted by: Mr. Vastav Alok At: 19, Sep 2005 6:35:12 PM IST
ee kavitaloa konni mis avvaDam valla konchem kalagaa pulagam ayyindi. ee kavita gurinchi evarannaa seeriyas feeD byaak ivva galigitae I shall be really thankful idi oka chinna uddaeSyam toa raasaa. mee feeD byaak naaku upayoaga paDaelaa unTae kRutaNgunni
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 19, Sep 2005 6:11:41 PM IST
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